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Kiss qadar kaam barha deti hain yaadein usski Neend aankhon se uraa deti hain yaadein usski
Main ne chaha jisko, ussko maalooom bhi nahi Mujhko aur bhi deewaana bana deti hain yaadein usski
Main bhatakta hoon agar raat ke andhere mein Hosla aur bhi barha deti hain yaadein usski
Jab uthaata hoon nighahein kisi aur chehre ki taraf Dil mein ik toofaan uthaa deti hain yaadein usski
jab bhi dil mein hota hai gumaan usski rafaaQat ka Faasle aur bhi barha deti hain yaadein usski...
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arzoo
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2004, 08:55:05 AM » |
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uski yaadein hi to hai jo ker deti hai her pal roshan daal deti hai bejaan me jaan jab hote hai hum tanhan
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2004, 08:59:00 AM » |
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nice both of u
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«Reply #3 on: December 21, 2004, 04:01:09 PM » |
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wah!!!! excellent work.........aryan......arzoo...bahot umda........
Aik Sakon Manga Zarra Sa Aur Wo Sanata Miley Ab Dabey Paoon Tumhari Yaad Bhi Ati Nahin.... Wo Milta Hai Abhi Taak Muskra Kar Hi Magar.... Aik Girhaa Jo Parh Gai Hai Dil Main Wo Jati Nahin...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2004, 02:31:52 PM » |
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Thanx myheart_ursonly & Waheed... nice sher waheed..
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2004, 07:46:20 PM » |
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bohot ache aryan ji!
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2004, 07:46:50 PM » |
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wah!!!! excellent work.........aryan......arzoo...bahot umda........
Aik Sakon Manga Zarra Sa Aur Wo Sanata Miley Ab Dabey Paoon Tumhari Yaad Bhi Ati Nahin.... Wo Milta Hai Abhi Taak Muskra Kar Hi Magar.... Aik Girhaa Jo Parh Gai Hai Dil Main Wo Jati Nahin... apki last 2 lines kamal ki hai, bohot ache! :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2004, 08:17:45 PM » |
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Thanks Meena...
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2004, 08:25:40 PM » |
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Maine dil ko samajaya a dil tu unako yaad karana chhod de.... par dil ke har kone se awaz ayee..... woh to har sans me basi hai..... tu sans lena chhod de.....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2004, 03:12:34 AM » |
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very nice Namkeen...
teri yaad ne mere dil ko saja rakha hai tere pyar mein sab ko bhula rakha hai
kuch acha nahin lagta teri judai ke baad ek teri yaad ko sine se laga rakha hai
tera milna tau ab ek khwaab hi lagta hai najaane ab kyun dil ko bhula rakha hai
sab kuch lutt gaya hamara tere pyar mein teri yaad ko palkon mein chupaa rakha hai
muqaddar se milte hain bichar ke warna aaj bhi tera naam dil mein saja rakha hai
najaane kyun nahin basta tere siwa aankh mein ek teri tasweer ko dil mein chupaa rakha hai ..
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2004, 12:49:51 PM » |
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Very nice all!
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Meena
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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2004, 05:16:19 PM » |
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na rakho tasveeer unki apne dil me, der nahin lagegi usko tootne me, jo aisa hua mere dost, to ansoon bahao ke tanhayi me.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: December 24, 2004, 01:11:02 AM » |
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Thanx Nidhi.. Nice1 Meena..
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Namkeen
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«Reply #13 on: December 24, 2004, 01:50:14 AM » |
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Yaadon Ko Apne Dil Se Mita Kyon Nahin Dete.. Jo Jaa Chuka Hai Us Ko Bhula Kyon Nahin Dete...
Mujrim Hoon Main Teri Mujhe Itna To Bata.... Khamosh Khade Ho Kyon Saza Kyon Nahin Dete.....
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«Reply #14 on: December 24, 2004, 07:36:11 AM » |
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nice .........all......
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