Yadoon ke samunder mai

by Pooja on July 29, 2004, 11:01:05 PM
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Pooja
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Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai
hai kinara magar kinara nahi,
yah bat na ab tak samaj pai hai.
hay khulla asmaan charo taraf,
bhir bhi bahoot tanhaai hai
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai
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HumTum
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2005, 04:35:37 PM »
waah pooja ji ...  very touching !!

Bade badsoorat lagte the ye pahaad
jale the jungle inke, pahadi kaali reh gayee
pehla mansoon kutch is kadar barsa
badalo ne chooma aur barsaat yahin reh gayee
Gard e sehra se yu moti uthaaya tha humne
Veerano mein khazano ki pyaas pyaasi reh gayee
Mere Ahl-e-hashma mein aaye the rehbar kai
Rehte rehte ek woh hee haque-ravi reh gayee !!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2005, 05:30:14 PM »
wah pooja and humtum ji!!!!!! really gud pooja kuddiye...dil kush kar ditta!!!  :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2005, 05:35:54 PM »
Wah .........
Its was fantastic one Pooja ...
And nice too Hum Tum ...
Keep it up both ...


Maangte hai bhikh ab apne mohaale mein fakir,
Bhookh bhi mohtaaj ho jaati hai khatra dekhkar,
Khudkhushi likhi thi ek bewaa ke chehre par magar,
Phir wo zinda ho gayi bachcha bilakhta dekhkar ...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2005, 06:04:03 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai
hai kinara magar kinara nahi,
yah bat na ab tak samaj pai hai.
hay khulla asmaan charo taraf,
bhir bhi bahoot tanhaai hai
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai


wow  wow very  toching  words   Pooja...............  hum  tum........jhl.......

wohi raz-e-ishq , maine jo chupa chupa ke rakkha
mere dil ki dhadkanon ne wo suna diya fasaana..................
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2005, 06:05:39 PM »
Thanks a lot Waheed bhai for appreciation ...
And you too have done great job ...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2005, 06:14:47 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Wah .........
Its was fantastic one Pooja ...
And nice too Hum Tum ...
Keep it up both ...


Maangte hai bhikh ab apne mohaale mein fakir,
Bhookh bhi mohtaaj ho jaati hai khatra dekhkar,
Khudkhushi likhi thi ek bewaa ke chehre par magar,
Phir wo zinda ho gayi bachcha bilakhta dekhkar ...


wah wah wah very nice.........
And pooja ji too good.........keep up the good work all!!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2005, 06:17:50 PM »
Thanks a lot Isha for apprecaition for this post ...
I dint expected it ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2005, 06:55:38 PM »
BAHOOT BAHOOT SHUKARIYAN DOSTO......

Good one HumTum ji

JHL JI Apne yah lines bahoot hi khoobsoorat likhi hai
Khudkhushi likhi thi ek bewaa ke chehre par magar,
Phir wo zinda ho gayi bachcha bilakhta dekhkar ...

Good one Waheed.....
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jamane ne unhe sir, ankho per bitha rakha hai
jinki tasveer ko humne dil mai chupa rakha hai
khushiyan hi khushiyan aor jashano ne unhe kandho per utha rakha hai
dekh kar unki bewafai, apni lash ka kafan humne khud apne hatho mai thaam rakha hai!!!!
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sarafz
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2005, 06:27:05 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
BAHOOT BAHOOT SHUKARIYAN DOSTO......

Good one HumTum ji

JHL JI Apne yah lines bahoot hi khoobsoorat likhi hai
Khudkhushi likhi thi ek bewaa ke chehre par magar,
Phir wo zinda ho gayi bachcha bilakhta dekhkar ...

Good one Waheed.....
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jamane ne unhe sir, ankho per bitha rakha hai
jinki tasveer ko humne dil mai chupa rakha hai
khushiyan hi khushiyan aor jashano ne unhe kandho per utha rakha hai
dekh kar unki bewafai, apni lash ka kafan humne khud apne hatho mai thaam rakha hai!!!!


Bohat khoob pooja ji tongue3

Jo mujhe samajhne ka daavaa kiya karti thi,
Aaj wohi mere dard se anjaan hai...
Itnaa tanhaa hoon aaj main, lagta hai ye duniya jaise ek shamshaan hai...
Main wo zinda laash hoon jo saans to leta hoon, par uski rooh bejaan hai..
Wo kehti hain ki meri baaton mein asar hai,
Gar asar isi ko kahte hain to shayad meri kismat hi be-iemaan hai,,,.. tongue3 [/i]
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akela
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2005, 06:33:44 AM »
nice....................al of u guys................
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #11 on: July 23, 2005, 08:16:05 AM »
nice one all n pooja............................................ .!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2005, 01:16:18 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja, Akela and Salma for appreciation ...

Special thanks to you Pooja for understanding deeply that lines ...
You too have also written better than me ...

" Apni lash ka kafan humne khud apne hatho mai thaam rakha hai!!!! "

Is a awesome one ...
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2005, 07:03:50 PM »
Thanxxxxxxxxx  All................tongue3

kab  tak  hum  aise  ask  bahayenge
jidagi  hum  tujhe  na samajh  paayenge
ya Rub kab hathega  mere ghum ka  baadal
kuch  mera  faisla kar, nahi to mar jaayenge.......
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HumTum
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2005, 12:58:25 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
jamane ne unhe sir, ankho per bitha rakha hai
jinki tasveer ko humne dil mai chupa rakha hai
khushiyan hi khushiyan aor jashano ne unhe kandho per utha rakha hai
dekh kar unki bewafai, apni lash ka kafan humne khud apne hatho mai thaam rakha hai!!!!


waah pooja ji !!

padi namaze janaza hamari gairon ne
mare the jinke liye wo rahe wajoo karte !!
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