Yadoon ke samunder mai

by Pooja on July 29, 2004, 11:01:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2005, 05:01:43 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai
hai kinara magar kinara nahi,
yah bat na ab tak samaj pai hai.
hay khulla asmaan charo taraf,
bhir bhi bahoot tanhaai hai
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai


very nice pooja ji,and nice work by everyone.

"Har baar ek gham bahaati hun is samandar ki lehar me,
      har baar toot ke bikharti hun,tab pohanchti hun saahilon pe,
      iska andaaza to is samandar ko bhi na hoga,
      ek din ye mere gamon ne bhara hua hoga,
      jiski ek ek lehar me sirf aur sirf dard hoga,
      khaara hai ye,hamesha khaara hi hoga."
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«Reply #16 on: July 25, 2005, 05:29:48 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "Pooja"
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai
hai kinara magar kinara nahi,
yah bat na ab tak samaj pai hai.
hay khulla asmaan charo taraf,
bhir bhi bahoot tanhaai hai
Yadoon ke samunder mai,
ek lahar si ajj aai hai,
muchali hai bahoot ajj wo,
tarap tarap kar chattano se takrai hai


very nice pooja ji,and nice work by everyone.

"Har baar ek gham bahaati hun is samandar ki lehar me,
      har baar toot ke bikharti hun,tab pohanchti hun saahilon pe,
      iska andaaza to is samandar ko bhi na hoga,
      ek din ye mere gamon ne bhara hua hoga,
      jiski ek ek lehar me sirf aur sirf dard hoga,
      khaara hai ye,hamesha khaara hi hoga."


wow  wonderfulllll  reply................Nidhi....................

wonderfullllllllllll  Nidhi...........................bahot  khoob dost............tongue3

na  haara  hai  ishq  na  duniya  thaki hai
diya  jal  raha hai, hawa  chal  rahi hai.....................................nm
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«Reply #17 on: July 25, 2005, 05:36:51 PM »
thanx waheed Usual Smile and very well said.

"Na haara hai pyar me koi,
  par toote hazaar hain....,
  na milta hai pyar yun rahon me,
  kaante hi kante hazaar hain."
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«Reply #18 on: July 27, 2005, 12:58:01 AM »
Its one of my fav.

Hope u guys'll like it too.

if u do then do reply back.

its by Faiyaz Hashmi.


aaj jaane kii zid na karo
yuu.N hii pahaluu me.n baiThe raho
haaye! mar jaaye.ge, ham to luT jaaye.ge
aisii baate.n kiyaa na karo

tum hii socho zaraa kyuu.N na roke tumhe.n
jaan jaatii hai jab uThake jaate ho tum
tum ko apanii kasam jaan-e-jaa.N
baat itanii merii maan lo

waqt kii qaid me.n zindagii hai magar
cha.nd gha.Diyaa.N yahii hai.n jo aazaad hai
in ko kho kar abhii jaan-e-jaa.N
umr bhar na taraste raho

kitanaa maasuum-o-rangiin hai ye samaa
husn aur ishq kii aaj meraaj hai
kal ki kisako Khabar jaane-jaa.N
rok lo aaj kii raat ko

gesuuo.n kii shikan hai abhii shabanamii
aur palako.n ke saaye bhii madahosh hai.n
husn-e-masuum ko jaane-jaa.N
beKhudii me.n na rusvaa karo
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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2005, 07:26:42 PM »
nice good one mayuus_manas ji..........................................Bahoo t khoob HumTum and Nidhi.. bahoot acha likha hai apne.......

dil ki sochy kahin door le jati hai
dikhati hai kuch sapne, man hi man muskaati hai
sun kar koi ahat, jab sapno se hum bahar atty hai
apni hi babsi ke anssoo, phir khud hi se hum chupaaty hai!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 29, 2005, 11:04:10 PM »
wah Bohat khoob Pooja.....& All....

Kabhi Kabhi teri palkon pe jhilmilaaun main
Tu kare intzaar aur na aaun main
Samander mein le ja kar fareb na karna aye dost
Tu kahe tau kinaare pe doob jaaun main
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«Reply #21 on: July 30, 2005, 02:15:02 AM »
wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob aryaan ji............................................... .........
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«Reply #22 on: July 30, 2005, 02:56:36 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob aryaan ji............................................... .........

Bohat shukriya Pooja....
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«Reply #23 on: July 30, 2005, 07:00:59 AM »
nice Aryaan ...........and Pooja .......

Dubne ki baat ki tumhne mujhpe barosa na kiya
meri baat maani tumhne kabhi mujhpe vishwas na kiya
kaise main samjaun tumhe ki kya hai meri haqqiqat
tumhari rakhsa karne ki khatir hi khuda ne mujhe darti pe janam diya
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«Reply #24 on: July 30, 2005, 01:41:57 PM »
Sabhi ne bahut hi achha likha hai ...
Keep it up ...


Tumne mere pyaar mein aakhir aisa kya paya tha,
Jo meri zindagi mein khushiya hi khushiya laya tha,
Par humne to teri baaho mein bohat kuchh paya tha
Jo kuchh tamanna thi use main pura kar paya tha....
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«Reply #25 on: July 31, 2005, 03:35:14 AM »
Thanks Sandhaya & JHL.... & very nice both......
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #26 on: July 31, 2005, 05:33:46 PM »
You are most welcome Aryan ...
And thanks too for your appreciation ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #27 on: August 02, 2005, 09:40:36 PM »
nice work Sandhaya and JHL................

Tere Ehsaas ka, Ehsaas kuch aise hai
jaise sard hawao mai, garam saya ho koi
jaise garam dhop mai, thandak le ayya ho koi
her roop mai, her haal mai, dil chu jata hai

Ek tera Ehsaas, bas ek tera ejsaas
phir jeene ki raah dikha jata hai!!!!!
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«Reply #28 on: August 03, 2005, 04:26:09 PM »
jala du is saari duniya ko, aisa yah armaan sa utha hai
mai sochati hu kaya mujme ajj ek hewaan sa utha hai
Yadoon ke samunder mai, ek tufaan sa utha hai
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«Reply #29 on: August 04, 2005, 04:38:23 PM »
Dard mai naakaamiyion ke jakham hai
Jakhamo mai mehrumiyon ki daastaan hai  
Dastaano mai risty hui gum ke ansoo hai
Ansoo mai pighalaty hui sirf teri yaaden hai
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