Yahi sach hai...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on May 21, 2011, 04:41:40 PM
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Yu door door rehkar mujhe apni ehmiyat jatana chahta hai,
vo kya hai merre liye mujhe ye ehsas dilana chahta hai,

main apne gamo mein doob kar use nazar andaz karti rahi,
merri berukhi se uska dil kitna dukha ye batana chahta hai,

ab mujhe pehle ki tarah satata bhi nhi vo,
apni khamoshi ko raaz rakhkar mujhe satana chahta hai,

apni mhbt ka izhar karta raha bebak ho kar,
aaj vo merri mhbt ki hadh ko azamana chahta hai,

har sajde mein jo manga karta tha dua hamare rishte k liye,
aaj wahi sab bhul kar mujhe thukrana chahta hai,

main janti hu vo ab mujhse kuch nhi kahega..aur shayad
yahi sach hai ki merra ajnabi mujhe chhodkar jana chahta hai......... tearyeyed tearyeyed
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2011, 04:52:12 PM »
uff geet :-
aaj aapki ye post mere dil ki baat kah gai…
mai ascharya hu ki maine aaj jo karne ka socha wo ekdum yahi bate hain…
kamaal hai !!!
kya daad dia jaye ab iss post ko……
magr han kbi kbi aisa hota hai………………ya fir shayad karna padta hai………!!!
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2011, 05:09:03 PM »
Quote from: nirala on May 21, 2011, 04:52:12 PM
uff geet :-
aaj aapki ye post mere dil ki baat kah gai…
mai ascharya hu ki maine aaj jo karne ka socha wo ekdum yahi bate hain…
kamaal hai !!!
kya daad dia jaye ab iss post ko……
magr han kbi kbi aisa hota hai………………ya fir shayad karna padta hai………!!!

ji i knw...
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2011, 06:35:49 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on May 21, 2011, 06:25:00 PM
Bahut Khub Brokenbyluv Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Shukriya shihab ji..
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Imdad
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2011, 07:11:45 PM »
wah geet ji kya sher likha hai aapne. Dil ko chhu leti hai. Likhte rahiye.
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: May 22, 2011, 12:09:21 AM »
Samaj sakta hoon ehsaas iss kalam kay..
Bas dil se daad.. Khush rahiye..!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2011, 01:14:55 AM »
Aakh bhar aayi aapke ye dard bhari peshkash padke Geet ji,excellent. Hats off to you! icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Anshumali
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2011, 12:52:25 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 21, 2011, 04:41:40 PM

Yu door door rehkar mujhe apni ehmiyat jatana chahta hai,
vo kya hai merre liye mujhe ye ehsas dilana chahta hai,

main apne gamo mein doob kar use nazar andaz karti rahi,
merri berukhi se uska dil kitna dukha ye batana chahta hai,

ab mujhe pehle ki tarah satata bhi nhi vo,
apni khamoshi ko raaz rakhkar mujhe satana chahta hai,

apni mhbt ka izhar karta raha bebak ho kar,
aaj vo merri mhbt ki hadh ko azamana chahta hai,

har sajde mein jo manga karta tha dua hamare rishte k liye,
aaj wahi sab bhul kar mujhe thukrana chahta hai,

main janti hu vo ab mujhse kuch nhi kahega..aur shayad
yahi sach hai ki merra ajnabi mujhe chhodkar jana chahta hai......... tearyeyed tearyeyed

Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas ....... Broken Ji !

Dil Se Daad Ka Guldastaa Qubuul KareN ........ !
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2011, 01:04:06 PM »
Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 21, 2011, 04:41:40 PM


Yu door door rehkar mujhe apni ehmiyat jatana chahta hai,
vo kya hai merre liye mujhe ye ehsas dilana chahta hai,

main apne gamo mein doob kar use nazar andaz karti rahi,
merri berukhi se uska dil kitna dukha ye batana chahta hai,

ab mujhe pehle ki tarah satata bhi nhi vo,
apni khamoshi ko raaz rakhkar mujhe satana chahta hai,

apni mhbt ka izhar karta raha bebak ho kar,
aaj vo merri mhbt ki hadh ko azamana chahta hai,

har sajde mein jo manga karta tha dua hamare rishte k liye,
aaj wahi sab bhul kar mujhe thukrana chahta hai,

main janti hu vo ab mujhse kuch nhi kahega..aur shayad
yahi sach hai ki merra ajnabi mujhe chhodkar jana chahta hai......... tearyeyed tearyeyed


  USS ROZ PAIKAR-E-JAAM KYA CHAOR AAYE MAIKHANE MEIN,
  HO GYAA NARAAZ SAAKI HUM SE NA JAANE KYA HUA..........!!BAHUT KHOOB BBL
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2011, 05:44:30 PM »

brokenbyluv ji,

really very nice and thouching thoughts..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2011, 06:33:59 PM »
Quote from: Imdad on May 21, 2011, 07:11:45 PM
wah geet ji kya sher likha hai aapne. Dil ko chhu leti hai. Likhte rahiye.

Bahut shukriya imdad ji..
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2011, 06:34:26 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on May 22, 2011, 12:09:21 AM
Samaj sakta hoon ehsaas iss kalam kay..
Bas dil se daad.. Khush rahiye..!

Shukriya rahiim...
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2011, 06:35:22 PM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 22, 2011, 01:14:55 AM
Aakh bhar aayi aapke ye dard bhari peshkash padke Geet ji,excellent. Hats off to you! icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Merre dard ko mehsus karke padhne k liye bahut shukriya madhu ji..
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2011, 06:35:56 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on May 22, 2011, 12:52:25 PM
Bahut Khoobsurat Ehsaas ....... Broken Ji !

Dil Se Daad Ka Guldastaa Qubuul KareN ........ !

Qubul hai naresh ji..shukriya...
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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2011, 06:37:25 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 22, 2011, 01:04:06 PM

  USS ROZ PAIKAR-E-JAAM KYA CHAOR AAYE MAIKHANE MEIN,
  HO GYAA NARAAZ SAAKI HUM SE NA JAANE KYA HUA..........!!BAHUT KHOOB BBL

Aap jaise umda shayaro k comments dekh k behad acha lagta hai bahut khoob aur bahut shukriya khamosh ji..
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