ye aaina bhi kabhi-kabhi jhooth bolta hai……

by Aman_rahi on May 02, 2005, 10:41:06 AM
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Doston ek aur kalaam ehal-e-bazm ki nazar....

aaj phir aapke liye apni aaine se guftgu pesh kar raha hoon......

gaur se dekha jaaye to aaina bahut kutch keh jaata hai.....

jo kutch bhi alfaaz jod paaya aapki nazar kar raha hoon....


ye aaina bhi kabhi-kabhi jhooth bolta hai……
muskurate chehre mein haal-e-dil kholta hai…..

ek *aab daar si aankhon mein kabhi dekhe to……
dabe aashk band palkon mein tatolta hai…..

chupa loon, kahin pechaan na le mujhe ye …..
aankhen milane se bhi, ab to mann dolta hai…..

Keh do ise, ki na dekhe meri oor yun *behis ……
Mere pyar ko meri nazron mein tolta hai…..

nikaal do gubar, kar do chaknachoor ^AMAN^…..
jo gum-e-dil ko tere zehan mein gholta hai…..

ye aaina bhi kabhi-kabhi jhooth bolta hai……
muskurate chehre mein haal-e-dil kholta hai…..


[aab daar=chamak]
[behis= without feeling]
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2005, 03:26:05 PM »
"Keh do ise, ki na dekhe meri oor yun *behis ……
Mere pyar ko meri nazron mein tolta hai…..

nikaal do gubar, kar do chaknachoor ^AMAN^…..
jo gum-e-dil ko tere zehan mein gholta hai….. "

wah ji wah....yeh lines to mind blowing hai!!!!!!! very very gud!!! pls keep it up!!

 :D
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2005, 04:49:00 PM »
verry sweeet aman:D

"Aaine me tum dekh sakte ho tasveerein,
 tehreerein to saamne hi dikhti hain......."
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 06:13:27 AM »
aman apne buhut Achi nazm likhi hai sachi dil ko chu gayi apki nazm tu likhte rahiyega
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2005, 06:24:45 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
"Keh do ise, ki na dekhe meri oor yun *behis ……
Mere pyar ko meri nazron mein tolta hai…..

nikaal do gubar, kar do chaknachoor ^AMAN^…..
jo gum-e-dil ko tere zehan mein gholta hai….. "

wah ji wah....yeh lines to mind blowing hai!!!!!!! very very gud!!! pls keep it up!!

 :D


Meena ji....

shukriya......saath rahega to ye kalam chalti rahegi....

khush rahiye....
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2005, 06:26:20 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
verry sweeet aman:D

"Aaine me tum dekh sakte ho tasveerein,
 tehreerein to saamne hi dikhti hain......."


Nidhi ji.....

bahot khoob.....bahut hi gehre khayal hain.....nacheez ki daad kabool kijiye.....
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2005, 06:28:38 AM »
Quote from: "nice_off_me"
aman apne buhut Achi nazm likhi hai sachi dil ko chu gayi apki nazm tu likhte rahiyega


Simran ji....

pehli baar aapka reply meri post pe aaya hai.....shayri.com pe bhi aapko dekha hai....

khushi hui ki aapko ye nazm pasand aayi....

aapka apna.....
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2005, 11:02:42 AM »
jee aaplikhenge acha tu sab apki nazm ki tareef karenge aur hum bhi karte hai likhte rahiyega aman.....................
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2005, 12:49:02 PM »
Simran ji.....

Saath dene ka shukriya......

kisi ka likha kutch yaad aaya to likhta jaa raha hoon.....

hai to punjabi mein....lekin shaya samjahna itna mushkil na ho...

muddatt baad zamane ne samjhya ae.....
phul nu sunghida ae phul nu khaayida nahi.....
pyar bakshda hai zindagi nu zindagi....
pyar pujida ae pyar thukraida nahi.....
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2005, 11:25:15 PM »
Quote from: "Aman_rahi"
Doston ek aur kalaam ehal-e-bazm ki nazar....

aaj phir aapke liye apni aaine se guftgu pesh kar raha hoon......

gaur se dekha jaaye to aaina bahut kutch keh jaata hai.....

jo kutch bhi alfaaz jod paaya aapki nazar kar raha hoon....


ye aaina bhi kabhi-kabhi jhooth bolta hai……
muskurate chehre mein haal-e-dil kholta hai…..

ek *aab daar si aankhon mein kabhi dekhe to……
dabe aashk band palkon mein tatolta hai…..

chupa loon, kahin pechaan na le mujhe ye …..
aankhen milane se bhi, ab to mann dolta hai…..

Keh do ise, ki na dekhe meri oor yun *behis ……
Mere pyar ko meri nazron mein tolta hai…..

nikaal do gubar, kar do chaknachoor ^AMAN^…..
jo gum-e-dil ko tere zehan mein gholta hai…..

ye aaina bhi kabhi-kabhi jhooth bolta hai……
muskurate chehre mein haal-e-dil kholta hai…..


[aab daar=chamak]
[behis= without feeling]


bahut khoob ....... kuch arz ker paya hoon jawab mein .... aur aap ke jawab ka muntzir....

yeh Aaina hi to hai jo hamesha sach bolta hai
nakabposho ke raz-e-chehra kholta hai

yun to chalti hai duniya lakh chehrey liye
har shaks yha juth hi juth bolta hai

milta hai sakuun dekh ke yeh Aaina mujhey
yhi to mere cheher-a-taiver kholta hai

shukr hai ke dekh ke aaina yaqeen hota hai "HumTum"
dyar-o-duniya mein koi to hai jo faqt sach bolta hai


HumTum
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2005, 06:34:11 AM »
bahut khoob ....... kuch arz ker paya hoon jawab mein .... aur aap ke jawab ka muntzir....

yeh Aaina hi to hai jo hamesha sach bolta hai
nakabposho ke raz-e-chehra kholta hai

yun to chalti hai duniya lakh chehrey liye
har shaks yha juth hi juth bolta hai

milta hai sakuun dekh ke yeh Aaina mujhey
yhi to mere cheher-a-taiver kholta hai

shukr hai ke dekh ke aaina yaqeen hota hai "HumTum"
dyar-o-duniya mein koi to hai jo faqt sach bolta hai


HumTum



Hum Tum ji....

jawab mein likhi nazm behtereen hai.....

shukriya.....

aapka apna.....
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2005, 07:22:12 AM »
Quote from: "Aman_rahi"

Hum Tum ji....

jawab mein likhi nazm behtereen hai.....

shukriya.....

aapka apna.....



Shukriya ji.....
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nirbhay
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2006, 04:25:39 PM »
Ye aaina lagta kyun hai logon ko Mulzim aaj
Ke jabki ye to kehta hai tere hi andar ki chipi hui awaaj

Koi to samjhe iss sachi ko ke aaina sirf saach bolta hai
Naksh ko behtreen karne ke waastey sirf khamiyaan bolta hai

Ye aaina to bada "Berukha-o-Bebaak" hai 'nirbhay' ki Kalam
Kisi ko aapne samjhta hai to dil khol ke bolta hai....
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