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Ye farebo.n ki hai duniya thokaro ne batlya
raah mai aur bhi patthar hain ye bhi samjhaya
Meine lamho mai sadiyo.n ka karb daikha hai
Wqt e zaroorat jo kabhi apno ko aazmaaya
Ye khudaai hai jo mehfooz hai insaa.n warna
Zamee.n ke shaitaano ne to bhut qehr dhayaa
Wo meri aasteen mai rehta tha araam tha
Pada dabaao to phir bhut balkhaayaa
Qareeb jaao na ke duri hi rakho janaab
Wo sirf ek dhoka hai jo tumko nazaraaya
Agr yahi hai bulandi jo kisi ke par kaate
to aisi udaano ke khyaalo se bhi ghabraaya
tere khayaal ki chadar rhi hamesha lipti
fitratan sarphiri hawaao.n ne bhut behkayaa[/size] |
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2009, 06:56:06 PM » |
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Ye farebo.n ki hai duniya thokaro ne batlya
raah mai aur bhi patthar hain ye bhi samjhaya
Meine lamho mai sadiyo.n ka karb daikha hai
Wqt e zaroorat jo kabhi apno ko aazmaaya
Ye khudaai hai jo mehfooz hai insaa.n warna
Zamee.n ke shaitaano ne to bhut qehr dhayaa
Wo meri aasteen mai rehta tha araam tha
Pada dabaao to phir bhut balkhaayaa
Qareeb jaao na ke duri hi rakho janaab
Wo sirf ek dhoka hai jo tumko nazaraaya
Agr yahi hai bulandi jo kisi ke par kaate
to aisi udaano ke khyaalo se bhi ghabraaya
tere khayaal ki chadar rhi hamesha lipti
fitratan sarphiri hawaao.n ne bhut behkayaa[/size]  Mashallah....Bohot hi Khoob Aslam Ji...humesha ki tarah lajawab.....  |
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 01:54:21 PM » |
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wah bahut bahut khoob aslam ji... |
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 04:16:49 PM » |
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Agr yahi hai bulandi jo kisi ke par kaate
to aisi udaano ke khyaalo se bhi ghabraaya
tere khayaal ki chadar rhi hamesha lipti
fitratan sarphiri hawaao.n ne bhut behkayaa Wah wah... Bahut khoob dear Aslam  |
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 04:18:01 PM » |
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AAINA JI, BAHUT HI KHOOB, WAH
JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 04:20:17 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Aslam ji.. Waakai Hamesha ki Tarah behtareen peshkash.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 04:26:07 PM » |
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pad ke accha laga aslam sahab
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«Reply #7 on: August 17, 2009, 11:51:28 PM » |
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wah bahut bahut khoob aslam ji... thnxxx so much angel |
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«Reply #8 on: August 17, 2009, 11:52:14 PM » |
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Wah wah... Bahut khoob dear Aslam shukriya roja dear |
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«Reply #9 on: August 17, 2009, 11:52:58 PM » |
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AAINA JI, BAHUT HI KHOOB, WAH
JASBIR SINGH
bhut bhut skukriya jasbir sahab |
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«Reply #10 on: August 17, 2009, 11:54:06 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Aslam ji.. Waakai Hamesha ki Tarah behtareen peshkash.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
thnxxx so much sophi aapka behad mamnoo hun ki apne itna pasnd kya |
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2009, 11:55:52 PM » |
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pad ke accha laga aslam sahab
bhut shukriya reaper ji ke aapne meri ghazal ko izzat bakhshi aapka the dil se shukriya ada karna chahta hun |
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2009, 11:56:54 PM » |
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nawazish talt thnxxx alot is hosla afzaai ke liyn |
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2009, 01:49:20 AM » |
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Ye farebo.n ki hai duniya thokaro ne batlya
raah mai aur bhi patthar hain ye bhi samjhaya
Meine lamho mai sadiyo.n ka karb daikha hai
Wqt e zaroorat jo kabhi apno ko aazmaaya
Ye khudaai hai jo mehfooz hai insaa.n warna
Zamee.n ke shaitaano ne to bhut qehr dhayaa
Wo meri aasteen mai rehta tha araam tha
Pada dabaao to phir bhut balkhaayaa
Qareeb jaao na ke duri hi rakho janaab
Wo sirf ek dhoka hai jo tumko nazaraaya
Agr yahi hai bulandi jo kisi ke par kaate
to aisi udaano ke khyaalo se bhi ghabraaya
tere khayaal ki chadar rhi hamesha lipti
fitratan sarphiri hawaao.n ne bhut behkayaa[/size] wah wah wah aaina... kaya kaale samaj ka aaina dikhaya hai apne... ek ek shabd suchbatlata hua.... aor kadvi such ka dard jhalkata hua... Good work aaina!!! |
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on eTI community..
