Ye janti nahi tu

by love4u on May 26, 2014, 04:16:45 PM
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Tujh bin kitna akela hu, ye jaanti nahi tu,

Meri har ek saans main hai, ye jaanti nahi tu,

Teri zindigi main udaasi ho mere kaaran, ye gawara nahi mujhe,

bas isi liye khamoshi se laut gya gumnaam andhero main, ye jaanti nahi tu.



Ho sakta hai galtiya ki ho maine bhi bhaut, ye maan leta hu main,

Jaane anjane todd diya ho dil tera, ye maan leta hu main,

Tujhse milna ek sabse haseen chez thi meri zindingi ki,

Ye tohfa main sambhal na paaya, ye maan leta hu main.



Har ek pal, har ek lamha yaad aate hai mujhe,

Ek akelapan reh gya hai iss zindigi main, jo sataata hai mujhe,

ye kabhi na sochna tu ki tere se juda reh paunga main,

jaanti ye tu bhi hai ki, tere dil ke kareeb hi reh jaunga main,

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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2014, 04:40:09 PM »
Nyc poetry yaar !!!
it reminded me of sum1


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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2014, 04:47:56 PM »
Thanks, Nashika. I wrote this by keeping someone in my thoughts. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2014, 04:51:55 PM »
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bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...!!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2014, 04:54:18 PM »
Thanks, Nashika. I wrote this by keeping someone in my thoughts. Usual Smile

I know dear!!
yeh khayaal kisi ko mann me rakhkar hi likhe jaa sakte hain
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2014, 05:18:53 PM »
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bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne...!!!

aap apne likhe poems jo post karte hain woh Poetry Lounge mein post karte hain, wahaan self composed poems nahi daalte, woh shared poetry ke liye hai, khud ke likhe huwe poems aap 'Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari' mein dalaa kijiye...!!!  Yeh waalaa poem maine move kar diyaa hai sahi section mein


Thanks Hriday, main aage se dhayan rakunga. Kaafi dino ke baad aapka koi comment aaya hai mere poem pe. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2014, 12:05:49 AM »
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waah waah kiya baat hai daaaaaaaaaddddddd
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2014, 12:08:44 AM »
Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2014, 01:52:51 PM »
Thanks Hriday, main aage se dhayan rakunga. Kaafi dino ke baad aapka koi comment aaya hai mere poem pe. Usual Smile

Boss meraa khud kaa Yoindia par aanaa hi bahut kam ho gayaa hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2014, 05:18:37 PM »
waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2014, 01:16:32 AM »
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waah waah kiya baat hai daaaaaaaaaddddddd
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