Ye Kaisa Usne Kaam Kar Diya,.

by Jaanasheen on February 09, 2009, 03:29:34 PM
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Doston Ye Shayari Main Un Chahne Waalon Par Dedicate Karna Chahta Hoon, Jo Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Ke Shikaar Hain,.

Jo Apne Saathi Se Sachchi Mohabbat Karte Hain, Aur Unhe Us Se Kuch Haasil Nahi Hota Dard Ke Siwa,.

Bas Ek Koshish Kar Raha Hoon, Pasand Aaye To Comments Dena,.


Pyaar Kiya Tha Sochkar Maine,.
Ke Use Bhi Mujhse Pyaar Hai,.
Wo Bhi Meri Taraah Milne Ke Liye,.
Kahin Bechaain Hai Bekaraar Hai,.

Maine Apna Sabkuch Uske Naam Kardiya,.
Badle Me Us Bewafa Ne Mujhe Badnaam Kardiya..

Use Main Apni Zindagi Maanta Tha,.
Mere Raaston Ki Roshni Maanta Tha,.
Nazarein Na Milaa Sakoon Zamaane Se Main,.
Aisa Us Bereham Ne Kyun Kaam Kar Diye,.
Hay Mujhe Sabki Nazar Mein Badnaam Kardiya,.

Har Waade Par Mere, Wo Bhi Ek Waada Karta Tha,.
Meri Taraah Inhe Nibhaane Ka Iraada Karta Tha,.
Shayad Isliye Dhoka De Diya Usne "Azeem,.
Kyunki Tu Us Se Mohabbat Zyada Karta Tha,.

Ab Kya Kahoon, Kaise Samjhaoon Is Dil Ko Main,.
Maine Tu Khwaab Dekhe The Saath Zindaagi Guzaarne Ke,.
Us Bewafaa Ne Mera Khissa Hi Tamaam Kar Diya,.
Hay Mujhe Sabki Nazar Mein Badnaam Kardiya,.

Main Uska, Wo Meri Ye Baat Har Waqt Kehti Thi..
Wo Bankar Dharkan Mere Dil Mein Rehti Thi..
Koi Kami Thi Mujhme To Bataa Deti Mujhe,.
Is Taraah Na Dil Tordkar Sazaa Deti Mujhe,.
Shuruwaat Bhi Nahi Ki Thi Zindagi Ki Poori,.
Shuru Karne Se Pehli Hi Anjaam Kardiya,.
Hay Mujhe Sabki Nazar Mein Badnaam Kardiya,.

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Doston Koi Galti Nazar Aaaye To Maaf Karna,.


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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2009, 03:36:25 PM »
Teri shayiri men woh javaaz hai,
kuchh to hai jo tujh pe savaar hai,
Haan bedharak to keh bhi dete ho,
Magar tere dil se chalak raha pyaar hai...


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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2009, 03:49:53 PM »
ITNI CHOTI UMER MAIN ITNA BADA ROG? BEAUTIFUL POETRY ISSI TARAH LIKHTE REHAIN AUR SDAA KHUSH RAH KARAIN.ASGHR Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2009, 04:02:19 PM »
bahot khoob azeem... par dawa-e-dard bhi tho milli na? kuch usski shaan mein hee boj hulka kiya jai?

muhabbat k naam ko muhabbat ne badnaam kiya...
usseeko dhoka diya, jisska dil khud k naam kiya?
ye berehmee bhi ek tarafee nahi, aag barabar dono ne lagaya,
shukar hai khuda ka k meray dil ko toot k sabar karna sihkaya.
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2009, 04:08:50 PM »
Thank U Syed Naami Bhai,.
Rani Ji,.
Ashgr Bhaiya Bas Bhaiya Duaa Karein Hamaare Liye,.,.

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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2009, 04:10:04 PM »
bahot khoob azeem... par dawa-e-dard bhi tho milli na? kuch usski shaan mein hee boj hulka kiya jai?

muhabbat k naam ko muhabbat ne badnaam kiya...
usseeko dhoka diya, jisska dil khud k naam kiya?
ye berehmee bhi ek tarafee nahi, aag barabar dono ne lagaya,
shukar hai khuda ka k meray dil ko toot k sabar karna sihkaya.

Shukriya Sidraah,.
 And Nice One,.

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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2009, 04:14:55 PM »
kya khoob lika sabne.jaanasheen,syednaami.anjaan dharkan.
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2009, 04:16:56 PM »
shukriya!
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2009, 04:41:48 PM »
wah sabne acha likha hai...Azeem bhai apki shayarian padkar ya toh mere dil ko behat sukun milta hai ya toh phir aisa lagta hai ke kisi ne humare dil ki baat kehdi...likte rahiye janab kadradaan bahaut hai apke.. Applause Applause



ek bewaffa ne humare pyaar ko bhula diya,
bina ansu diye hi hume rula diya,
jee rahe hai apni mehrum mohobat ke saath akele,
kal uske thukrane ne hume yeh ehsaas dila diya...

pighal ke roye hai hum saagar ke kinare pe,
usne humari mohobat ka yeh kaisa sila diya?
ab toh bharosa uth gaya hai pyaar naam ke mazak se,
kal tak tha pyaar ka kadradan Rahim; aaj ussi pyar nam ke latife ne hume hasa diya...
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2009, 07:21:10 PM »
wah sabne acha likha hai...Azeem bhai apki shayarian padkar ya toh mere dil ko behat sukun milta hai ya toh phir aisa lagta hai ke kisi ne humare dil ki baat kehdi...likte rahiye janab kadradaan bahaut hai apke.. Applause Applause



ek bewaffa ne humare pyaar ko bhula diya,
bina ansu diye hi hume rula diya,
jee rahe hai apni mehrum mohobat ke saath akele,
kal uske thukrane ne hume yeh ehsaas dila diya...

pighal ke roye hai hum saagar ke kinare pe,
usne humari mohobat ka yeh kaisa sila diya?
ab toh bharosa uth gaya hai pyaar naam ke mazak se,
kal tak tha pyaar ka kadradan Rahim; aaj ussi pyar nam ke latife ne hume hasa diya...


wah! what a beautiful way to say whats in your heart! keep it going!
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2009, 03:19:31 AM »
Doston Ye Shayari Main Un Chahne Waalon Par Dedicate Karna Chahta Hoon, Jo Ek Tarfa Mohabbat Ke Shikaar Hain,.

Jo Apne Saathi Se Sachchi Mohabbat Karte Hain, Aur Unhe Us Se Kuch Haasil Nahi Hota Dard Ke Siwa,.

Bas Ek Koshish Kar Raha Hoon, Pasand Aaye To Comments Dena,.


Pyaar Kiya Tha Sochkar Maine,.
Ke Use Bhi Mujhse Pyaar Hai,.
Wo Bhi Meri Taraah Milne Ke Liye,.
Kahin Bechaain Hai Bekaraar Hai,.

Maine Apna Sabkuch Uske Naam Kardiya,.
Badle Me Us Bewafa Ne Mujhe Badnaam Kardiya..

Use Main Apni Zindagi Maanta Tha,.
Mere Raaston Ki Roshni Maanta Tha,.
Nazarein Na Milaa Sakoon Zamaane Se Main,.
Aisa Us Bereham Ne Kyun Kaam Kar Diye,.
Hay Mujhe Sabki Nazar Mein Badnaam Kardiya,.

Har Waade Par Mere, Wo Bhi Ek Waada Karta Tha,.
Meri Taraah Inhe Nibhaane Ka Iraada Karta Tha,.
Shayad Isliye Dhoka De Diya Usne "Azeem,.
Kyunki Tu Us Se Mohabbat Zyada Karta Tha,.

Ab Kya Kahoon, Kaise Samjhaoon Is Dil Ko Main,.
Maine Tu Khwaab Dekhe The Saath Zindaagi Guzaarne Ke,.
Us Bewafaa Ne Mera Khissa Hi Tamaam Kar Diya,.
Hay Mujhe Sabki Nazar Mein Badnaam Kardiya,.

Main Uska, Wo Meri Ye Baat Har Waqt Kehti Thi..
Wo Bankar Dharkan Mere Dil Mein Rehti Thi..
Koi Kami Thi Mujhme To Bataa Deti Mujhe,.
Is Taraah Na Dil Tordkar Sazaa Deti Mujhe,.
Shuruwaat Bhi Nahi Ki Thi Zindagi Ki Poori,.
Shuru Karne Se Pehli Hi Anjaam Kardiya,.
Hay Mujhe Sabki Nazar Mein Badnaam Kardiya,.

________________________-Jaanasheen-



Doston Koi Galti Nazar Aaaye To Maaf Karna,.




waah azeem ji...aapne bahut accha likha hai...padh kar aisa laga jais mere jazbaat ko zuban milgayi ho...
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2009, 05:53:22 AM »
Subhan Allah Subhan allah KYa likha azeem alfazon ko ahesas ka roop dena isi ko kahete hain chute maza agaya kasam se !! allah tumhe khush rakhe !! wah wah !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2009, 05:55:15 AM »
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bahoot khoob lil bro... kaya baat hai... Syednaami ji, AD and DH ji app sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2009, 06:12:44 AM »
Bahut mehrbaani Pooja saahiba...
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«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2009, 06:16:27 AM »
Bahut khoob Azeem brother, Syednaami ji, Anjaani sis,
D.H..  Aap sabne bahut accha likha hai...
 
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