ye kaise rishte hain... manju

by manjum on June 13, 2011, 06:51:05 AM
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Jharane ki tarah aankh se aansu jo jhare hain.
Tab ye jana mann main kitne samandar bhare hain.

Payi jo ek khushi wo riwazon ne chhin li,
Seene main hamne saikdon dard dhare hain.

Uski lagai chot kabhi mit na saki hai,
Uske diye wo zakhm abhi sare hare hain.

Ek muddat ki tadap aankh se jab bah nikli,
Mar ke zinda the jee uthe hain tab mare hain.

Ye kaise rishte hain kyo jude hain kyo tutte hain,
Ye sawalat hain jo sare jawabon se pare hain.

Ehsason ko hadd se guzarne nahin diya,
Ham aapne usulon pe hamesha se khare hain.

manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2011, 07:52:17 AM »
Bohat Khoob Manjum Ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2011, 07:57:30 AM »
manjum ji,

Ek aur achchhee post..Nice
keep on writing.

Dili daad qubul karen...

All the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2011, 09:04:42 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya nihaji....

sath rahiega....
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2011, 09:05:40 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya satishji.....

aapki duaye aur sath bana rahe is ummid ke sath.... mann
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2011, 09:17:04 AM »
Quote from: manjum on June 13, 2011, 06:51:05 AM
Jharane ki tarah aankh se aansu jo jhare hain.
Tab ye jana mann main kitne samandar bhare hain.

Payi jo ek khushi wo riwazon ne chhin li,
Seene main hamne saikdon dard dhare hain.

Uski lagai chot kabhi mit na saki hai,
Uske diye wo zakhm abhi sare hare hain.

Ek muddat ki tadap aapnkh se jab bah nikli,
Mar ke zinda the jee uthe hain tab mare hain.

Ye kaise rishte hain kyo jude hain kyo tuute hain,
Ye sawalat hain jo sare jawabon se pare hain.

Ehsason ko hadd se guzarne nahin diya,
Ham aapne usulon pe hamesha se khare hain.

manju "mann"




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bahut bahut Khoob Anjuji..Lajawaab!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2011, 09:30:38 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji......

yun hi sath rahiega....
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2011, 09:37:58 AM »
good
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2011, 09:40:34 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sahilji..

sath rahie...
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2011, 11:56:20 AM »
bahut khoob manjum ji
excellent peshkash

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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2011, 05:44:25 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya shihabji... aapne hamari is koshish ko saraha....

sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2011, 05:47:15 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya sureshji.... jab aap sab daad dete hain hame tabhi pata chalta hai ki rachna achi hui hai.....

sath rahiega....
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2011, 05:55:40 AM »
beautifully worded verse.....manju ji...
full of feelings and expressions..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2011, 06:01:14 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya anamji... aapne pada aur pasand kia....

yun hi sath rahie.....
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2011, 06:53:13 PM »
nice
ye baat aaj bhi meri samjh se pare hai
kyu mere naam se wo manoj nafrat kare hai
Quote from: manjum on June 13, 2011, 06:51:05 AM
Jharane ki tarah aankh se aansu jo jhare hain.
Tab ye jana mann main kitne samandar bhare hain.

Payi jo ek khushi wo riwazon ne chhin li,
Seene main hamne saikdon dard dhare hain.

Uski lagai chot kabhi mit na saki hai,
Uske diye wo zakhm abhi sare hare hain.

Ek muddat ki tadap aankh se jab bah nikli,
Mar ke zinda the jee uthe hain tab mare hain.

Ye kaise rishte hain kyo jude hain kyo tutte hain,
Ye sawalat hain jo sare jawabon se pare hain.

Ehsason ko hadd se guzarne nahin diya,
Ham aapne usulon pe hamesha se khare hain.

manju "mann"
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