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by Jaanasheen on January 19, 2009, 03:06:13 PM
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Har Taraf Maatam, Har Taraf Andhera Kyun Hai,.
Tanhaai Aur Dard Se Bhara, Ye Ghar Mera Kyun Hai,.

Ye Kaisa Mukhaam Aaya Hai Mohabbat Ka "Azeem,.
Khushi Ka Daur Guzar Chuka To Ghamon Ka Pal Tehra Kyun Hai,.

Ab To Aadat Hai Mujhe, Raat Ki Tanhaai Mein Kho Jaana,.
Ya Rab, Phir Meri Zindagi Mein Ye Roshan Sawera Kyun Hai,.

Yun To Is Duniya Mein Musaafiron Ki Kami Nahi "Ya Rab,.
Phir Zindagi Ke Safar Mein "Azeem, Akela Kyun Hai,.

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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2009, 03:35:40 PM »
hi
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2009, 03:36:32 PM »
Har Taraf Maatam, Har Taraf Andhera Kyun Hai,.
Tanhaai Aur Dard Se Bhara, Ye Ghar Mera Kyun Hai,.

Ye Kaisa Mukhaam Aaya Hai Mohabbat Ka "Azeem,.
Khushi Ka Daur Guzar Chuka To Ghamon Ka Pal Tehra Kyun Hai,.

Ab To Aadat Hai Mujhe, Raat Ki Tanhaai Mein Kho Jaana,.
Ya Rab, Phir Meri Zindagi Mein Ye Roshan Sawera Kyun Hai,.

Yun To Is Duniya Mein Musaafiron Ki Kami Nahi "Ya Rab,.
Phir Zindagi Ke Safar Mein "Azeem, Akela Kyun Hai,.

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wah Jahanasheen, kya pyara sa kalaam likha hai aap ney
bahut gehra matlab chupa hua hia, joh shayed hum dekh rahey hai

aap ka jawaab jald dunga iss peh

jasbir singh
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 03:42:49 PM »
wah Jahanasheen, kya pyara sa kalaam likha hai aap ney
bahut gehra matlab chupa hua hia, joh shayed hum dekh rahey hai

aap ka jawaab jald dunga iss peh

jasbir singh

Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
Aur Hume Intezaar Hai, Aapke Kalaam Pardhna Ka,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2009, 05:23:08 PM »
Har Taraf Maatam, Har Taraf Andhera Kyun Hai,.
Tanhaai Aur Dard Se Bhara, Ye Ghar Mera Kyun Hai,.

Ye Kaisa Mukhaam Aaya Hai Mohabbat Ka "Azeem,.
Khushi Ka Daur Guzar Chuka To Ghamon Ka Pal Tehra Kyun Hai,.

Ab To Aadat Hai Mujhe, Raat Ki Tanhaai Mein Kho Jaana,.
Ya Rab, Phir Meri Zindagi Mein Ye Roshan Sawera Kyun Hai,.

Yun To Is Duniya Mein Musaafiron Ki Kami Nahi "Ya Rab,.
Phir Zindagi Ke Safar Mein "Azeem, Akela Kyun Hai,.

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wah wah!!!kya baat hai mere bhai...bahaut hi khoob...



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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2009, 05:29:14 PM »
Shukriya Raheem Bhai,.
Aap Bhi Kuch Likho Yaar,.
Tumhaare Dil Mein Bhi Bohat Dard Hai,.
Express Karo,.
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2009, 05:30:50 PM »
har taraf dard hi dard hoga,
ager woh dilbar bewaffa nikle,
humare ansuon ko bhi koi pee gaya hota,
ager humare ansu khoon ke bad nikle...


lo apki farmaish kabul karte hai...
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2009, 11:18:22 PM »
Wah! Chote Bhai bahut khoob likha hai
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2009, 03:34:52 AM »
Bahoot khoob Azeem ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2009, 05:23:39 AM »
Har Taraf Maatam, Har Taraf Andhera Kyun Hai,.
Tanhaai Aur Dard Se Bhara, Ye Ghar Mera Kyun Hai,.

Ye Kaisa Mukhaam Aaya Hai Mohabbat Ka "Azeem,.
Khushi Ka Daur Guzar Chuka To Ghamon Ka Pal Tehra Kyun Hai,.

Ab To Aadat Hai Mujhe, Raat Ki Tanhaai Mein Kho Jaana,.
Ya Rab, Phir Meri Zindagi Mein Ye Roshan Sawera Kyun Hai,.

Yun To Is Duniya Mein Musaafiron Ki Kami Nahi "Ya Rab,.
Phir Zindagi Ke Safar Mein "Azeem, Akela Kyun Hai,.

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Wah Wah Azeem Kya Kahene Is Dard ke Pather Bhi Pighal Jaye mere bhai Kya likha hai !!

Ye Kaisa Muqaam Aya Hai mahobbath ka "Azeem" !!
Khushi ka Daur Guzar Chuka to Ghamoon ka pal Tahera Kyoon hai !!

Kya kahene is sher tumhari ghazal ka dil hai ye sher !! La jawab !! Allah tumhare is kalaam ko izzath bakshe azeem !!Ameen

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2009, 05:28:51 AM »
bahoot khoob lil bro
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2009, 05:38:28 AM »
Har Taraf Maatam, Har Taraf Andhera Kyun Hai,.
Tanhaai Aur Dard Se Bhara, Ye Ghar Mera Kyun Hai,.

Ye Kaisa Mukhaam Aaya Hai Mohabbat Ka "Azeem,.
Khushi Ka Daur Guzar Chuka To Ghamon Ka Pal Tehra Kyun Hai,.

Ab To Aadat Hai Mujhe, Raat Ki Tanhaai Mein Kho Jaana,.
Ya Rab, Phir Meri Zindagi Mein Ye Roshan Sawera Kyun Hai,.

Yun To Is Duniya Mein Musaafiron Ki Kami Nahi "Ya Rab,.
Phir Zindagi Ke Safar Mein "Azeem, Akela Kyun Hai,.

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Azeem Eak Sher Tumhare Nazar Karta hon Aur is sher ko Bahoth Jald Ghzal ki shakal donga inshallah !!

Mere Saath haar baar is tarha  Khilwaad Kyoon Karta hai !!
Jiska Jawab nahi meri zubaan pe aisa sawal kyoon karta hai !!
kal apne hi dar pe tone thukraya tha  mujhe !!
aaj meri chaukhatt pe mera intezaar kyoon karta hai !!

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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2009, 06:13:23 AM »
Lagta hai hume unse mohabbat si hogai hai,
Jaan se zada unki chahat si hogai hai,
Thukra de is bat ki parwa kaha hai humko,
Tut k bikharne ki ab adat si hogai hai!
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2009, 06:48:25 AM »
KYA BAAT HAI ..JAANASHEENJI...

kya waffa, kya saath, kya khushi, kya dillagi,
kabhi hoti hi nahin mahobbat mae mere.
sirf bewaffai,judai,ruswai,tanhai,
hai naseeb mein,mohabbat mae mere.

andhera hi andhera hai,mohabbat mae mere,
sawera hota hi nahin ,mohabbat mae mere.

yun toh duniya mein pyaar karnewallon ki kami nahin hai YE-RAB,
par pyaar ke safar mein "AZEEM" ko hi kyun pyaasa rakhte hai YAHAN-SAB.
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2009, 08:10:12 AM »
nice work janasheen bhai
salma, qadeer bhai and cara gr8 work too

koi aaye mere dar par tu oose bithna kucch der
mere baad mere doston ka khayal rakhna
oonhe batana kii kucch der main aayega 'saahil'
ho sake toh mera intzaar karna...........
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