-----/// Ye kya kiya usne ///----- Hriday

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meri   chitaa   ke  aag   se   apna   ghar  roshan   kiyaa  usne
meri  mohabbat  ke  badle   me  bas  dhokha   hi  diyaa  usne

taarif   me   uske   likhna    chaahaa   koi   ghazal   maine  aaj
sabko  bataa  dun   aaj  kyaa   kya  mere   saath  kiyaa  usne

vaade  kiye  hazaaron   sangh   jeene  marne  ke  mere   saath
jaate  jaate   un  sab    vaadon  ko  khud   hi  tod  diyaa  usne

khat  jo   likhe  the    maine   raaton  ko   jaag  ke  use  kabhi
mere  hi  saamne  unhe   samundar   me  bahaaa  diyaa   usne

phool  gulaab   kaa  diyaa  tha  maine  pehli  mulaaquaat   pe
wo gulaab   apne   kitaab  se   nikaalke   lautaa    diyaa   usne

jaate  jaate  mujhe   naam    diyaa bewafaa  kaa  jaane  kyun
poochhne  par  mere  sawaal  ka  jawaab  tak  na  diyaa usne

janaa  thaa  to  jaati ,   aakhir   wajah  to  bataa  ke  jaati wo
zindagi ke  majdhaar me  hi saath   meraa   chhod diyaa  usne

tanhaa  rehtaa   thaa zindagi mein uske   aane  se  pehle main
nibhaake  saath   kuch   pal ka  fir  se  tanhaa   kar diyaa usne

meri wafaa ka ,  mohabbat ka  dekho na   kya silaa diyaa usne
karke  vaadaa  zindagi dene  ki ,  sazaa-e-maut  de  diyaa usne

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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2012, 08:58:10 PM »
baharon me ishq ke sapney dikhane ke baad
ye aaj kaisi hakikat suna dia usne..

jiski mohabbat ki aatishe thi aasmano tak oonchi
bewafai se dil ka lahoo baha dia usne...

Hriday ji....jitni shiddat se aap mohabbat pe nazm likhte hai utni hi dard se aapne ye nazm nibhai hai....bahot khoobsurat!
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2012, 05:32:55 AM »
Nice!!! Very emotional!!! Touching!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2012, 06:15:31 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2012, 06:19:05 AM »
Bahut Khub Kapil Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2012, 07:37:02 AM »
nicely composed
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2012, 08:04:19 AM »
beautiful.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2012, 03:15:24 PM »
Bahut khoob Hriday jee
dard bhara kalaam to accha hai par aapko padhne me maza khumaar section men hi aata hai..
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2012, 10:38:59 PM »
bahut bahut khoob ... heart touching ... dil main utar gaye aapke shabad ... !!
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2012, 07:09:29 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 24, 2012, 06:39:00 PM
meri   chitaa   ke  aag   se   apna   ghar  roshan   kiyaa  usne
meri  mohabbat  ke  badle   me  bas  dhokha   hi  diyaa  usne

taarif   me   uske   likhna    chaahaa   koi   ghazal   maine  aaj
sabko  bataa  dun   aaj  kyaa   kya  mere   saath  kiyaa  usne

vaade  kiye  hazaaron   sangh   jeene  marne  ke  mere   saath
jaate  jaate   un  sab    vaadon  ko  khud   hi  tod  diyaa  usne

khat  jo   likhe  the    maine   raaton  ko   jaag  ke  use  kabhi
mere  hi  saamne  unhe   samundar   me  bahaaa  diyaa   usne

phool  gulaab   kaa  diyaa  tha  maine  pehli  mulaaquaat   pe
wo gulaab   apne   kitaab  se   nikaalke   lautaa    diyaa   usne

jaate  jaate  mujhe   naam    diyaa bewafaa  kaa  jaane  kyun
poochhne  par  mere  sawaal  ka  jawaab  tak  na  diyaa usne

janaa  thaa  to  jaati ,   aakhir   wajah  to  bataa  ke  jaati wo
zindagi ke  majdhaar me  hi saath   meraa   chhod diyaa  usne

tanhaa  rehtaa   thaa zindagi mein uske   aane  se  pehle main
nibhaake  saath   kuch   pal ka  fir  se  tanhaa   kar diyaa usne

meri wafaa ka ,  mohabbat ka  dekho na   kya silaa diyaa usne
karke  vaadaa  zindagi dene  ki ,  sazaa-e-maut  de  diyaa usne

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bahut khoob!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 05, 2012, 10:33:31 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sps ji... aap logo ki taarif hi hai jis kaaran thoda bahut likh leta hoon... aur aap jaise dost ke comments se mere poems ki khoobsurti badh jaati hai...!!! Thank you sooooooo much...!!!

Quote from: Sps on August 24, 2012, 08:58:10 PM
baharon me ishq ke sapney dikhane ke baad
ye aaj kaisi hakikat suna dia usne..

jiski mohabbat ki aatishe thi aasmano tak oonchi
bewafai se dil ka lahoo baha dia usne...

Hriday ji....jitni shiddat se aap mohabbat pe nazm likhte hai utni hi dard se aapne ye nazm nibhai hai....bahot khoobsurat!
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2012, 12:21:00 PM »
thank you sooo much Shireen ji...!!!

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on August 25, 2012, 05:32:55 AM
Nice!!! Very emotional!!! Touching!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2012, 07:34:01 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Nandbahu ji...!!!

Quote from: nandbahu on August 25, 2012, 06:15:31 AM
bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2012, 11:09:13 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sanjeev ji...!!!

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on August 25, 2012, 06:19:05 AM
Bahut Khub Kapil Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2012, 10:52:45 AM »
thanks a lot Saini ji...!!!

Quote from: sksaini4 on August 25, 2012, 07:37:02 AM
nicely composed
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