-----/// Ye kya kiya usne ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 24, 2012, 06:39:00 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 25, 2012, 11:09:47 AM »
bohat khoob dard bhari ghazal hirday ji.......
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«Reply #16 on: October 02, 2012, 08:41:32 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Nishi ji....!!!

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 25, 2012, 08:04:19 AM
beautiful.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: October 04, 2012, 05:35:12 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji... kabhi kabhi thodaa raasta badal ke bhi try kar leta hoon... tongue3

Quote from: mkv on August 25, 2012, 03:15:24 PM
Bahut khoob Hriday jee
dard bhara kalaam to accha hai par aapko padhne me maza khumaar section men hi aata hai..
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«Reply #18 on: October 05, 2012, 01:05:13 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Panchi ji...!!!

Quote from: aazad panchi on August 25, 2012, 10:38:59 PM
bahut bahut khoob ... heart touching ... dil main utar gaye aapke shabad ... !!
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«Reply #19 on: October 06, 2012, 08:25:03 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sheba ji...!!!

Quote from: Sheba on August 26, 2012, 07:09:29 PM
bahut khoob!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #20 on: October 06, 2012, 08:25:38 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Laaiba ji....!!!

Quote from: laaiba on September 25, 2012, 11:09:47 AM
bohat khoob dard bhari ghazal hirday ji.......
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«Reply #21 on: October 07, 2012, 12:41:26 AM »
Bahut hi dard bhari rachna hai ap ki rachna nay hamari bhi aankeh nam kar di
sheel didi
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«Reply #22 on: October 07, 2012, 03:50:07 AM »
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meri   chitaa   ke  aag   se   apna   ghar  roshan   kiyaa  usne
meri  mohabbat  ke  badle   me  bas  dhokha   hi  diyaa  usne

taarif   me   uske   likhna    chaahaa   koi   ghazal   maine  aaj
sabko  bataa  dun   aaj  kyaa   kya  mere   saath  kiyaa  usne

vaade  kiye  hazaaron   sangh   jeene  marne  ke  mere   saath
jaate  jaate   un  sab    vaadon  ko  khud   hi  tod  diyaa  usne

khat  jo   likhe  the    maine   raaton  ko   jaag  ke  use  kabhi
mere  hi  saamne  unhe   samundar   me  bahaaa  diyaa   usne

 Applause Applause Applause aankhein nam si hogayee very vey touching lines.
hazaron daad  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: October 07, 2012, 04:43:53 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sushil ji... mera aisa koi iraadaaa nahi thaa... sad5

Quote from: sushilbansal on October 07, 2012, 12:41:26 AM
Bahut hi dard bhari rachna hai ap ki rachna nay hamari bhi aankeh nam kar di
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«Reply #24 on: October 08, 2012, 12:43:45 AM »
Dil samunder hai aap ka Hariday ji.Mubarik ho umda rachna hai.
Sheel didi
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«Reply #25 on: October 08, 2012, 08:00:35 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Suman ji... mera koi iraadaa nahi thaa aapko rulaane kaa.. maafi chaahta hoon...!!!

Quote from: suman59 on October 07, 2012, 03:50:07 AM
Applause Applause Applause aankhein nam si hogayee very vey touching lines.
hazaron daad  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #26 on: October 08, 2012, 08:02:41 PM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sushil ji....!!!

Quote from: sushilbansal on October 08, 2012, 12:43:45 AM
Dil samunder hai aap ka Hariday ji.Mubarik ho umda rachna hai.
Sheel didi
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