Ye pal hai ajeeb sa .........!!!!

by Talat on August 08, 2007, 03:10:21 PM
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Shikha12
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«Reply #15 on: August 13, 2007, 04:16:05 AM »
Wow... That was lovely Talat... =D>

Very nice replies HumTum, Angel and Khwaish...
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«Reply #16 on: August 13, 2007, 08:17:42 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Bheegi palkain, bheege khwaab, dhadkan tham si jaaye kyun
Chalte chalte bandh gaye qadam, koi raah nazar na aaye kyun

Ek aor roshni phailaaye daaman bulaati hai de kar awaaz
Jab bhi chaahen choona usko, wo roshni bujh si jaaye kyun

Kaisi hasrat kaisi chaah hai, sab kuch hai aur kuch bhi nahin
Kaisi hai yeh haalat apni, yeh aankhain bhar bhar aaye kyun

Jo bhi hai, hai phir bhi aas, koi to hai har dam aas paas
Giren jab, thaam le wo haath, magar phir chup jaaye kyun !!


Wah Wah Wah.!! Kya Baat Hai TALAT Ji.. Behtreen Likha Hai aapne.. Har ek
Lafz Khubsoorat Likha Hai aapne.. Padh Kar bahut Accha Laga.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. !! Usual Smile Usual Smile

ANGEL, KHWISH & HUM TUM JI Aapne Bhi Bahut Accha Likha Hai..!!

Vicky
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: August 13, 2007, 08:45:35 PM »
Thank You Khwaish, Aryaan, Shikha and Vicky.... thanks a lot for your appreciation Usual Smile

Aapne bhi bohot achcha likha hai Khwaish, bohot achchi koshish hai ! Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #18 on: August 28, 2007, 06:15:50 PM »
Mohabbat ke dastoor nibhana naa aaya
Ghum seh kar hume muskurana naa aaya

Toot kat bikhre hain khwaab aanchal main
Toote khwaabon ke sang jeena naa aaya

Ankhain bheeg jaati hain yaadain jab satati hain
Beete dino ko hume bhulaana naa aaya
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Pooja
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«Reply #19 on: August 28, 2007, 06:50:26 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob likha hai talat!!
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Talat
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«Reply #20 on: August 31, 2007, 01:16:31 PM »
Shukriya Pooja Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #21 on: August 31, 2007, 01:29:03 PM »
you are very welcome ji!!!
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rajrishi
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«Reply #22 on: August 31, 2007, 01:58:35 PM »
Good work Talat ji, khawish and angel. bahut khoob
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Talat
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«Reply #23 on: January 30, 2008, 02:42:56 PM »
Thanks a lot Rahrishi !
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: September 22, 2008, 06:52:35 PM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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