Ye sazaa mili mujhe pyar ki.......... mann

by mann.mann on June 01, 2012, 03:24:48 AM
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Main ek bujhti lau hun mazaar ki.
Ye sazaa mili mujhe pyar ki.

Hosh aaya jab to the lut chuke,
Thi guzar chuki shab khumar ki.

Wo palak jhapakte guzar gayi,
Do ghadi mili jo bahaar ki.

Kabhi chain mujhko na mil saka,
Mujhe zindgi do qaraar ki.

marham-e-zakhm na paya hamne,
Aisi halat hui hai dil-e-bimaar ki.

Jishm se jaan ab nikal jaye,
Nahin chahiye jaan udhar ki.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad aati hai,
Wo jo zindgi thi dulaar ki.

Meri aankhon main ab bhi hai jhulti,
Jhalak usi mere yaar ki.  

Mann
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2012, 03:39:42 AM »
Beautiful , Mann ji .
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2012, 03:47:52 AM »
 Applause Applause daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2012, 06:11:03 AM »
bahut hi khoob
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2012, 07:22:03 AM »
bohat khoob mann jee...
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2012, 07:47:53 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on June 01, 2012, 03:24:48 AM
Main ek bujhti lau hun mazaar ki.
Ye sazaa mili mujhe pyar ki.

Hosh aaya jab to the lut chuke,
Thi guzar chuki shab khumar ki.

Wo palak jhapakte guzar gayi,
Do ghadi mili jo bahaar ki.

Kabhi chain mujhko na mil saka,
Mujhe zindgi do qaraar ki.

Zakhm-e-marham na paya hamne,
Aisi halat hui hai dil-e-bimaar ki.

Jishm se jaan ab nikal jaye,
Nahin chahiye jaan udhar ki.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad aati hai,
Wo jo zindgi thi dulaar ki.

Meri aankhon main ab bhi hai jhulti,
Jhalak usi mere yaar ki. 

Mann


Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!!

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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2012, 10:59:45 AM »
Mann Jee Aadaab!


Waah jee waaH kia kahne waaH behad khoob aur behad umdaa
kalaam kahi hai aapne.... bade gehre aur khoob ashaar bune
hai.... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe jee... bahut khoob...
Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   


Quote from: mann.mann on June 01, 2012, 03:24:48 AM
Main ek bujhti lau hun mazaar ki.
Ye sazaa mili mujhe pyar ki.

Bahut khoob jee achcha matla hai...
Aik khayaal humare zahen meiN aaya gar ulaa misra aise adaa kareN
to kaisa lageNga...

" MaiN bujhti lau huyi mazaar ki
Ye sazaa mili mujhe pyaar ki                   

Hosh aaya jab to the lut chuke,
Thi guzar chuki shab khumar ki.

WaaH waaH waaH Masha Allaah kia kahne jee waaH gazab
ka khayaal bayaaN kiya hai behad umdaa bahut khoob...
hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... behad khoob aur umdaa
sher kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile                   

Wo palak jhapakte guzar gayi,
Do ghadi mili jo bahaar ki.

oye hoye kia kahne jee bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad daad
daad .... bahut khoob...                   

Kabhi chain mujhko na mil saka,
Mujhe zindgi do qaraar ki.

Kia kahne jee bahut umdaa daad Usual Smile                   

Zakhm-e-marham na paya hamne,
Aisi halat hui hai dil-e-bimaar ki.

Achcha hai daad ... par dusre misre ko aur short kariye...                   

Jishm se jaan ab nikal jaye,
Nahin chahiye jaan udhar ki.

WaaH waaH waaH kia kahne jee waaH gazab ke ashaar padh rahe haiN bahut
khoob jee bahut khoob... Usual Smile                   

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad aati hai,
Wo jo zindgi thi dulaar ki.

Kia baat hai jee kia kahne bahut umdaa daad Usual Smile                   

Meri aankhon main ab bhi hai jhulti,
Jhalak usi mere yaar ki. 

Bahut khoob jee bahut pyaara sher hai daad Usual Smile                   

Mann

Kamaal ki kalaam rahi jee bahut umdaa....
Is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par phir se dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad ... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2012, 12:31:07 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2012, 04:44:19 PM »
Wah bhai wah jo bhi aap jo ikhte ho kamal ka likhte ho SUCH ME KYA SOCH HAI MAASAALLAH apki shaan m 2 lafz meri traf se..........





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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2012, 05:52:21 PM »

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH MANN JEE.
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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2012, 05:57:45 PM »
itni achi poem par comment na karo ye to poem ki tauhin hogi..........

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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2012, 03:18:18 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya hasan sahab...
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2012, 03:22:18 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad janab saini sahab..
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2012, 03:46:28 AM »
bahut bahut dhanyawad goldyji
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2012, 10:09:43 AM »
Quote from: mann.mann on June 01, 2012, 03:24:48 AM
Main ek bujhti lau hun mazaar ki.
Ye sazaa mili mujhe pyar ki.

Hosh aaya jab to the lut chuke,
Thi guzar chuki shab khumar ki.

Wo palak jhapakte guzar gayi,
Do ghadi mili jo bahaar ki.

Kabhi chain mujhko na mil saka,
Mujhe zindgi do qaraar ki.

marham-e-zakhm na paya hamne,
Aisi halat hui hai dil-e-bimaar ki.

Jishm se jaan ab nikal jaye,
Nahin chahiye jaan udhar ki.

Mujhe aaj bhi yaad aati hai,
Wo jo zindgi thi dulaar ki.

Meri aankhon main ab bhi hai jhulti,
Jhalak usi mere yaar ki. 

Mann


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