-Yeh Baat To Aab Purani Hui-

by Meena on May 25, 2005, 04:56:54 PM
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Baghon me khaliyan chilmilane lagi,
Pedon pe koyal gungunane lagi,
Charon taraf kushiyon ki fiza mehek rahi thi,
Ban gaya woh mera aur mai uski deewani hui!

Saanson me apne usko basaya tha,
Jab dil unone mujhe lagaya tha,
Yuh pyar me magan rehne lage apni hi duniya me,
Ke log apne fasane ko kehene yeh to raja rani ki kahani hui!!

Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2005, 05:11:11 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Baghon me khaliyan chilmilane lagi,
Pedon pe koyal gungunane lagi,
Charon taraf kushiyon ki fiza mehek rahi thi,
Ban gaya woh mera aur mai uski deewani hui!

Saanson me apne usko basaya tha,
Jab dil unone mujhe lagaya tha,
Yuh pyar me magan rehne lage apni hi duniya me,
Ke log apne fasane ko kehene yeh to raja rani ki kahani hui!!

Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!
Wah meena sis Kiss ,kya likha hai,excellent.Last para is very beautiful Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2005, 05:17:10 PM »
oh meri pyari nidhi jaan  :wink:  tareef ke liye bohot bohot shukriya!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2005, 05:23:43 PM »
Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!

Wah....Meena.... kya baat hai aapki.... yaqeen kijiye aapki iss poem ne dil par gehra asar chora hai...Excellent Meena.....
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Meena
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2005, 05:34:21 PM »
:D  shukriya ji shukriya...bas kuch jazbaat pesh karti hoon humesha.... :D aap sab ke jaisi bohot super duper poem nahin likh sakhti na isslyie double kush hoti hoon jab kisi ko meri poems pasand ati hai!!

 :D
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2005, 05:43:05 PM »
Kiyaa baat hai Meena... Aryaan Ji nay bilkul saheeh kahaa hai, dill kay taar hill gay... beutiful...

Always Anjli
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2005, 05:47:02 PM »
Quote from: "apnaa_koi"
Kiyaa baat hai Meena... Aryaan Ji nay bilkul saheeh kahaa hai, dill kay taar hill gay... beutiful...

Always Anjli


bohot bohot shukriya anjli ji, meri poem pasand karne ka!!

 :D
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2005, 05:55:45 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
:D  shukriya ji shukriya...bas kuch jazbaat pesh karti hoon humesha.... :D aap sab ke jaisi bohot super duper poem nahin likh sakhti na isslyie double kush hoti hoon jab kisi ko meri poems pasand ati hai!!

 :D

Aap jo bhi likhti hain apne aap par bharosa kar ke likhti hain, aur yehi wajah hai keh aapki harr poem ek anokhi aur khubsoorat ban jati hai.. isliye aapka DOUBLE khush hona banta hai.....Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2005, 06:02:34 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Quote from: "Meena"
:D  shukriya ji shukriya...bas kuch jazbaat pesh karti hoon humesha.... :D aap sab ke jaisi bohot super duper poem nahin likh sakhti na isslyie double kush hoti hoon jab kisi ko meri poems pasand ati hai!!

 :D

Aap jo bhi likhti hain apne aap par bharosa kar ke likhti hain, aur yehi wajah hai keh aapki harr poem ek anokhi aur khubsoorat ban jati hai.. isliye aapka DOUBLE khush hona banta hai.....Usual Smile


haha...so sweet...thank u!!!  :D
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«Reply #9 on: May 26, 2005, 10:36:01 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Baghon me khaliyan chilmilane lagi,
Pedon pe koyal gungunane lagi,
Charon taraf kushiyon ki fiza mehek rahi thi,
Ban gaya woh mera aur mai uski deewani hui!

Saanson me apne usko basaya tha,
Jab dil unone mujhe lagaya tha,
Yuh pyar me magan rehne lage apni hi duniya me,
Ke log apne fasane ko kehene yeh to raja rani ki kahani hui!!

Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!



Waah...Meena Betiyaa! Bahout khoub likha hai toumne!I like it...

Deewana houn, deewanepan main ye zindagi mastani hui
Hosh main na laao hum ko ki yaha aadat to aab purani hui

Amanush Chachu...
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«Reply #10 on: May 26, 2005, 10:45:47 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Baghon me khaliyan chilmilane lagi,
Pedon pe koyal gungunane lagi,
Charon taraf kushiyon ki fiza mehek rahi thi,
Ban gaya woh mera aur mai uski deewani hui!

Saanson me apne usko basaya tha,
Jab dil unone mujhe lagaya tha,
Yuh pyar me magan rehne lage apni hi duniya me,
Ke log apne fasane ko kehene yeh to raja rani ki kahani hui!!

Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!


Bhoot Khoob !!!

ek lamhe ko jiya jaye k bas ji liya jaye
safar ho umr ka ya lamho k bas kiya jaye
apni khamosh kadam aur apne tute sapne
gujarti manjilo ke hawale n kar diya jaye

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«Reply #11 on: May 26, 2005, 11:35:05 AM »
shukriya ji shukriya chachu aur humtum !!! :D

dono ne wadiya likha hai!!!!

 :D
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2005, 10:19:04 PM »
Meena Aunty buhat khoob :D

Quote from: "Meena"
Baghon me khaliyan chilmilane lagi,
Pedon pe koyal gungunane lagi,
Charon taraf kushiyon ki fiza mehek rahi thi,
Ban gaya woh mera aur mai uski deewani hui!

Saanson me apne usko basaya tha,
Jab dil unone mujhe lagaya tha,
Yuh pyar me magan rehne lage apni hi duniya me,
Ke log apne fasane ko kehene yeh to raja rani ki kahani hui!!

Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2005, 03:50:42 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Baghon me khaliyan chilmilane lagi,
Pedon pe koyal gungunane lagi,
Charon taraf kushiyon ki fiza mehek rahi thi,
Ban gaya woh mera aur mai uski deewani hui!

Saanson me apne usko basaya tha,
Jab dil unone mujhe lagaya tha,
Yuh pyar me magan rehne lage apni hi duniya me,
Ke log apne fasane ko kehene yeh to raja rani ki kahani hui!!

Pyar me itni madhosh hogayi, ke dukh ke badal dikhe nahin,
Pad gayi thi jinki adat, who kushiyon ke pal der tak tikhe nahin,
Aaj kyu ro rahi hai uske liye, jo gum hogaya tere kal me,
Chod de uska daman “Meena”, ke yeh baat to aab purani hui!!!


KITNI HASROTONSE TAKTI HAI KALIYA TUMHE
KUN BAHAR KO FIR SE BOOLATE NAHI
EK DUNIYA UJAD GAYEE TO KYA HUA DOST
NAYEE DUNIYA TUM KUN BASATE NAHI


SANDY
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agr_navneet
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2005, 04:00:42 AM »
kya baat hai meena ji her shabad main jan dal deti hai aap to
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