**~** Yeh Bepanaah Mohabbat **~**

by _Vicky_ on September 25, 2010, 05:12:28 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 27, 2010, 10:03:45 AM »
nice oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

mannnnn jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

misssssssss u allllllllllllllllllll
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«Reply #16 on: September 27, 2010, 11:23:10 AM »
Namste Vemp Usual Smile

Achchha kalaam likha hai aapne, Anaam ji ne jo kaha hai thoda us par gaur kare.n.

Duao.n ke sath
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«Reply #17 on: September 27, 2010, 11:24:47 AM »
mann jii bahut bahut khoob peshkash..

mere naam se subah uthne wale
aaj mere ruba-ruu hone se darte he
kabhi mujhpar mitne ki kasame khane wale
aaj bewafaii ke anjaam se darte he
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«Reply #18 on: September 27, 2010, 02:09:21 PM »
Kavita ki drishti se achha kalaam hai aapka par......


Bhulade uss pyaar ko jo ho gayaa hai kisi ki amaanat ab tu
Sindoor ka rishta hota aham usse na badnaam hone de tu






Anaam Ji Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. aur aapke Likhe Alfaaz Bhi Bahut Khooob Hain.. Par Kya karen Dost.. Hum dil ke haathon Majboor hain.. !!!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #19 on: September 28, 2010, 02:31:10 PM »
Rishton k bojh me kyun ye dil ghut k reh jata h
sindoor bhar maang me kyun ek anjana sb ku6 bn jata h
jisse ruuh ka ehsaas ka rishta jodta h dil
wahi jaan hamari hamare liye begana bn jata h


bht pyari porpt h mann ji apki dil se bht bht daad janab


Bahut Bahut shukriya Geet Ji.. aapne Bhi Bahut Bahut pyaari lines Likhi hain.. Bahut Khooooob.. :cap: Applause




**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #20 on: September 30, 2010, 05:28:10 AM »
Wah Mann ji kya kehne .. jab aate hai seedhe dil ko chhoo jaate hain aapke lekh.. bahut bahut khoobsurti se likha hai apne... aise lekh dil se padhne k liye hote hain aur dil ko chhoo hi jaate hain... bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko shabdon me pesh kiya hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aap jaise to achcha nahi likh paate par ek ichcha hui aapka likha hus ye post padh ke ki kuch likhun. aur bas likh daala. pata nahi kya likha mujhe bhi nahi pata...


yaadon ko basa ke rakha tha dil me, bhoolayen nahi hain,
uska chehra aaj bhi hai aankhon me, mitaayen nahi hain,

kabhi sochte hain ki kaash wo hamaari hoti hamesha k liye,
kabhi sochte hain ki wo hume mili na hoti bhulaane k liye,

ye mohabbat bhi ajeeb ehsaas hai dost jo koi samjha nahi,
kisi ko mila haasil to kisi ke naseeb me kuch bhi nahi,

aaj jab dekha use kisi aur ki baahon mein angraaiyaan lete huye,
socha mere dil me jo tha itne saalon se shayad mohabbat hi nahi,

haan mujhe ghum is baat ka nahi hai ki usne bhoola diya mujhko,
ghum to bas is baat ka hai ki aaj tak main usko bhula paaya nahi,

aati hai haqeeqat me nahi par chhed jaati hai raaton ko khayaalon me,
kya rishta hai usse mera jo juda ho ke bhi ab tak juda ho paaya nahi,

kya yahi mohabbat hai ki koi rota hai kahin to koi hasta hai,
kyun uske naseeb me bas khushiyaan hain,
aur mere naseeb me ghum k siwa kuch nahi...

Kapil Bhai Aapke Likhe Yeh Alfaaz Seedhe Dil me utar Gaye.. Aakhiri Sher to Basssss Jaan Hi Le Gaya.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se apne Ehasaas Yahan Pesh kiye Hain aapne. Aapki is Rachna Se Is Thread Ki Raunak aur Badh gai.. Shukriya Dost..  notworthy notworthy notworthy




**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #21 on: September 30, 2010, 05:29:25 AM »
shukriya Mann ji...!!!

Kapil Bhai Aapke Likhe Yeh Alfaaz Seedhe Dil me utar Gaye.. Aakhiri Sher to Basssss Jaan Hi Le Gaya.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se apne Ehasaas Yahan Pesh kiye Hain aapne. Aapki is Rachna Se Is Thread Ki Raunak aur Badh gai.. Shukriya Dost..  notworthy notworthy notworthy




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«Reply #22 on: October 02, 2010, 05:50:26 AM »
Wah wah Mann ji bahut dard ,gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne.Anaam ji,Kasak ji,Kapil ji great lines.excellent.keep it up.hats off icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tahe Dil Se Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhu Ji.. Aapki Daad Humesha Hausla Afzaai Karti Hai..  notworthy notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #23 on: October 02, 2010, 11:41:17 AM »
Bahut achhe....seedhe dil se nikla....ye tere andaaje-bayaan pasand aayaa humko..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hum mile they...Rishte bhi jude they...waade bhi kiye they
Bhagya ka chakra...majboori me fase they...hum bichhude they

Ek dusare ko samjhe they...Dosti k rishte ab bhi bandhe they
Uski ek aawaaj par,sab kaam chhod,saath usske hum khade they
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Bahut khoooooob Anaam Ji.. Bahut Khoob Lines Likhi hain aapne.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #24 on: October 02, 2010, 04:18:38 PM »
Ek Roz Dekha Tha Unhe.. Kisi Aur Ke Naam Ka Sindoor Maang Me Bhare Hue... Jo Kabhi Humse Ishq Kiya karte the.. Qasame Khate the humaara Ho Jane Ki.. Aur Aaj Kisi Gair Ke Ban Baithe Hain.. To Kya hua.. Ishq to Hum Aaj Bhi Unse Bepanah Karte Hain.. Marte Hain aaj Bhi Unpe.. Basss Yehi Ehasaas Lafzon me utaarne ki Koshish ki Hai.. Ummid Hai aapko Pasand aayegi..!!



Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...

Kabhi Jeete Hain Uska Naam Lekar Lamha-Lamha,
To Kabhi Yaadon Me Uski, Zaar-Zaar Marte Hain...

Aaj Dekha Kisi Gair Sang, To Yakeen Hua Is Dil Ko,
Ki Ab Wo Mohabbat Ban, Kisi Aur Par Baraste Hain...

Kahane Ko To Mera Hai, Par Hum Saaya Kisi Aur Ka,
Isi Khayal Ko Dil Me Le Usse Nafrat Bhi Karte Hain,

Par Yeh Mohabbat Bhi Badi Ajeeb Cheez Hai Yaaron,
Ki Milne Ko Usi Se Phir Bhi, Baar-Baar Taraste Hain...

Kal Khwaab Me Mile, To Bas Lipat Ro Pade Mujhse,
Larazte Labon Se Kaha, Hum Tum Pe Hi Marte Hain...

Phir Kaise Bhool Jaata Main, Us Ek Raat Ki Baat Ko,
Jo Khwaab Me Hi Sahi, Mere Hone Ko Machalte Hain....

Koi Ja Ke Kaha Do Mere Yaar Ko, Paigaam Is Dil Ka,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!




Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!!!
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**~** Mann **~**

Vikas bhaijan, mujhe bahaut maza aya yeh parr kar..mujhe iss main dard toh dikta hai mager mohobat zada nazar ati hai..Be-panaah mohobat..bahaut bahaut khoob..bahaut acha kalam hai yeh apka..! Dil choo gaya..

Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: October 02, 2010, 04:19:55 PM »
Wah Mann ji kya kehne .. jab aate hai seedhe dil ko chhoo jaate hain aapke lekh.. bahut bahut khoobsurti se likha hai apne... aise lekh dil se padhne k liye hote hain aur dil ko chhoo hi jaate hain... bahut khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko shabdon me pesh kiya hai... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

aap jaise to achcha nahi likh paate par ek ichcha hui aapka likha hus ye post padh ke ki kuch likhun. aur bas likh daala. pata nahi kya likha mujhe bhi nahi pata...


yaadon ko basa ke rakha tha dil me, bhoolayen nahi hain,
uska chehra aaj bhi hai aankhon me, mitaayen nahi hain,

kabhi sochte hain ki kaash wo hamaari hoti hamesha k liye,
kabhi sochte hain ki wo hume mili na hoti bhulaane k liye,

ye mohabbat bhi ajeeb ehsaas hai dost jo koi samjha nahi,
kisi ko mila haasil to kisi ke naseeb me kuch bhi nahi,

aaj jab dekha use kisi aur ki baahon mein angraaiyaan lete huye,
socha mere dil me jo tha itne saalon se shayad mohabbat hi nahi,

haan mujhe ghum is baat ka nahi hai ki usne bhoola diya mujhko,
ghum to bas is baat ka hai ki aaj tak main usko bhula paaya nahi,

aati hai haqeeqat me nahi par chhed jaati hai raaton ko khayaalon me,
kya rishta hai usse mera jo juda ho ke bhi ab tak juda ho paaya nahi,

kya yahi mohabbat hai ki koi rota hai kahin to koi hasta hai,
kyun uske naseeb me bas khushiyaan hain,
aur mere naseeb me ghum k siwa kuch nahi...
I think this is one of your finest posts I have read Kapil Dost..bahaut bahaut khoob..Akhri shaer toh bas bahaut hi zadaaaaaa acha hai..!
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«Reply #26 on: October 02, 2010, 04:21:28 PM »
Anaam jee, bahaut acha likha hai apne bhi..!

Applause Applause

Bahaut khoob Anamika di aur Abhi jee..!

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«Reply #27 on: October 02, 2010, 04:35:05 PM »
Ek koshish iss nadan ki taraf se..

Barbaad mera jahan karke woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Jo kal tak meri duniya ko roshan karta tha,
Mere sapnon tak ko be-rang kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Izhar-e-mohobat mujse aur baahon main kisi aur kay rehta tha,
Aisi bhi wafa nibha kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Apna sab kuch jis kay naam kar diya ‘Khamosh’,
Rulane wali yaadon ka tofa de kay woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..

Kabhi mera dil bhi ehsaason se bhara tha; aj pathar sa hai,
‘Rahim’ ko ‘Khamosh’ bana kar woh yaar chala,
Dekho yaaron mujhe tabah karke woh yaar chala..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #28 on: October 02, 2010, 05:36:10 PM »




Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...

Kabhi Jeete Hain Uska Naam Lekar Lamha-Lamha,
To Kabhi Yaadon Me Uski, Zaar-Zaar Marte Hain...

Aaj Dekha Kisi Gair Sang, To Yakeen Hua Is Dil Ko,
Ki Ab Wo Mohabbat Ban, Kisi Aur Par Baraste Hain...

Kahane Ko To Mera Hai, Par Hum Saaya Kisi Aur Ka,
Isi Khayal Ko Dil Me Le Usse Nafrat Bhi Karte Hain,

Par Yeh Mohabbat Bhi Badi Ajeeb Cheez Hai Yaaron,
Ki Milne Ko Usi Se Phir Bhi, Baar-Baar Taraste Hain...

Kal Khwaab Me Mile, To Bas Lipat Ro Pade Mujhse,
Larazte Labon Se Kaha, Hum Tum Pe Hi Marte Hain...

Phir Kaise Bhool Jaata Main, Us Ek Raat Ki Baat Ko,
Jo Khwaab Me Hi Sahi, Mere Hone Ko Machalte Hain....

Koi Ja Ke Kaha Do Mere Yaar Ko, Paigaam Is Dil Ka,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!




Aaj Dekha To, Yeh Mehsoos Hua Is Dil Ko Yaaron,
Mohabbat Aaj Bhi Hum Us-se Bepanaah Karte Hain...!!!!!!!
love9 love9




**~** Mann **~**

Mann Ji ... bahut khoob lage aapki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar ... ehsaas dil me utar gaye ... very nice creation ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ....
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«Reply #29 on: October 03, 2010, 07:32:20 AM »
Bhaiya itna dard kyu? jo na hua hamara unke liye aahein kyu barna? cheer up..dear

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