yeh Dard ka silsila....

by Manav Mehra on August 26, 2007, 09:47:35 AM
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yeh dard ka silsila ab saha kayun nahi jata
tere bagair mujhse jiya kayun nahi jata

har pal ke sath ek kash-m-kash di hai tumne
chah kar bhi umeed ka diya bhuj kayun nahi jata

apni baaton se kehte ho,chord kar ja rahi hu
main samjh kar bhi yeh samajh kayun nahi pata

girte hain jo ashq,toh phir girte hi chale jate hain
mujhe tanahyion mein sata kar,kayun chain nahi tu pata

karti ho tum chott dil par bar bar,har bar
yeh tera diya zakhm,maut kayun nahi lata...!!![/i][/color][/size]
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2007, 03:35:31 PM »
wah.. too good Manav ji!!! bahoot ach alikhte hai app....her shabd se dard jhalkta hai... Good work!!!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2007, 03:58:49 PM »
Thanks pooja ji, aap bhi kuch likhte
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2007, 04:29:26 PM »
Dard ka yah silsilla maout tak jayega
Janati hu wo sathi ab laut kar na ayega

Yandon main gujeregi ab yah zindagi meri
Meri kavitao main hi bas sung uska mujhko mil payega

Dard k ayah silsilla, mout tak jayega………………
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angel4u
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2007, 05:32:49 PM »
Too good manav.....

Dard ka silsila tujhse shuru hua hai jabse,
aankhonse ashqon ka kaarvan chhuta hai tabse,
thamte nahi hai ye kaise bhi chahe dil behla loon,
Khwaab bhi behne lage ab, tum gaye ho jabse...
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2007, 04:56:23 PM »
Bohot hi khoob Manav =D>

Nice ones Pooja and Angel
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2007, 05:43:45 PM »
Good one Angle.


Thanks Talat!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2007, 10:31:17 AM »
wah manav ji..very very touching!!!! didi, angel...bohot khoob!!

jee pate unke bina to aaj koi gum na hote,
unki yaad me humare nain yuh nam na hote,
hum bhi muskurate, hum bhi jeete yaha,
maut ki arzoo rakh ke, zindagi se hum yuh tang na hote!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2007, 02:57:04 PM »
Thanks Angel,Pooja,Talat and meena..

zakhmi hai dil,kab tak tu tadapayegi
ek na ek din kabhi toh reham khayegi

pathar dil nahi hai tumhara,yakeen hai
na jane,apne "manav" ko kitna aor satayegi
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2007, 03:11:57 PM »
nice nice!!

unko satane ka shaunk hai to hum sahenge,
ek lafz bhi unke kilaf aab na kahenge,
honton pe muskurahat liye unka intezaar rahega,
par ankh se ansoon aab na kabhi bahenge!
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Manav Mehra
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2007, 04:23:53 PM »
again very dedicated reply... aap mujhe feel karwa rahe ho ki abhi mere payar mein koi lust hai..shi'ddat ki kami hai....pls dont feel bad...take it as healthy comment... i really  like ur dedication... may God showers HIS blessings on you :D



mujhe lagg raha hai main chup ho jaun aor likhna chord du.. ajj tak jo bhi maine likha sab jhootha lag raha hai mujhe


chalte chalte "manav" tum phirse gire ho
nikale the jis halaat se,ussi par phir khade ho

Payar pana shayad likha nahi tere liye "USSNE"
iss liye har mehfil mein,shikayat hi kar rahe ho
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2007, 09:13:54 AM »
hi Manav ji...i am really sorry apko agar kuch bura laga ho  sad5 maine koi shikayat ya koi blame likhne ke liye nahin likha tha. mai to bas shayari kar rahi ti as i do it with everyone. i am really sorry if i hurt u, mera aisa kuch bhi kehne ka matlab nahin tha.
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2007, 04:32:08 PM »
bahoot khoob Manav and meena!!!

Her baar socha ab ashaq nahi bhayege
Khamosh her dard ko seh jayege
Socho karati hai dil per war, baar baar
Sochon ko kaise kahin chor ayege
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angel4u
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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2007, 05:00:21 PM »
Nice ones Manav, pooja di and meena sis Usual Smile
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