yeh faaslay hain jo wo to kabhi kam nahi hongay

by Dewana_Badal on August 03, 2004, 09:27:27 AM
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yeh faaslay hain jo wo to kabhi kam nahi hongay , hum tum hongay,magar raabtay nahi hongay , ankhain band hongi aor neend mai , hum tum hongay,magar khwaab nahi hongay , zindagi k shoorzada,gehray samander mai , hum tum hongay,magar kinaray nahi hongay , piyar ki adalat k yaadon k katehroon mai , hum tum hongay,magar dalael nahi hongay , halchal machanay k liay saakt pani mai , hum tum hongay,magar pathar nahi hongay , duur hokar bhi to paas "some one" hum tum hongay hum tum hongay,magar khush nahi hongay !!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 03, 2004, 04:37:35 PM »
Y don't you use one line per line method..
It was little unreadable
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«Reply #2 on: August 03, 2004, 04:46:07 PM »
Hmmmm let me fix this for Dewaana_Badal

Deewana tumko log kahe, badalo ki tarah likh jaty ho
yah shayari hai janab, kalam se nahi dil se likha kijiye.

yeh faaslay hain jo wo to kabhi kam nahi hongay ,
hum tum hongay,magar raabtay nahi hongay ,
ankhain band hongi aor neend mai ,
hum tum hongay,magar khwaab nahi hongay ,
zindagi k shoorzada,gehray samander mai ,
hum tum hongay,magar kinaray nahi hongay ,
piyar ki adalat k yaadon k katehroon mai ,
hum tum hongay,magar dalael nahi hongay ,
halchal machanay k liay saakt pani mai ,
hum tum hongay,magar pathar nahi hongay ,
duur hokar bhi to paas "some one" hum tum hongay hum tum hongay,
magar khush nahi hongay !!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2004, 09:27:20 PM »
hmm janab app hai na theek karnay k leay app say acha our kon theek karay ka our janab dosri bat k dil say likhon  tu janab ab DIL say likhay k our thora kum likhay kay !!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2004, 09:36:21 PM »
lo gi maan na maan hum tere mahmaan ho gai
pahle se hai itane samaan, ek aor samaan ho gai
likhy janab app khud se apni shayari
hame kaya pata tha, hum to uhi mahrbaan ho gai
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2004, 11:59:50 PM »
hmmm!!

Haaton mein leeye paemana, jaam dhoonda karta hoon.
Tere sang gujarne ko, ek saam dhoonda karta hoon.

Duniya wale humare rishtey ko, yu hee badnaam karte hain.
Ke main eis rishtey ko, dene ek naam dhoonda karta hoon.

Teri khwaabon mein, goojartei hain raaten.
Teri yaadoin mein, kattei hain shaam.

Tere-mere baare, log karte hain baatein.
Aise-jaise, yahan charcha ho koi aam!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2004, 12:18:54 AM »
hame dekh kar na pucho,
hum kayun hai muh latkai hui
garo ki bat choro
hum dosto ke satai bathy hai.
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