~~*~ yeh hadsa bhi hone ko hai ~*~~

by Naya_Daur on January 04, 2007, 12:02:17 PM
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Naya_Daur
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Har nazar hairan hai ,
aor arzoo rone ko hai
Gum mein kho gayi zindagi
aor asamaan ronne ko hai

charoN taraf hai roshni ki bahar
magar mera ashian seemata hua
agg mein jal chuka aks mera,aur
dhuan rafta rafta khone ko hai

na badao hath dosti ka
ki kismat meri hai kharab
jisko chaha usse paya nahi
har sathi JEET khone ko hai

jo kar sako toh itna karam kardo
dil mein jo dard hai,dawa ban jaye
jaz'baton ka tofan abb na rukeyga
shubha se bhatki raat ab hone ko hai

ruksat karo mujhe iss jahan se
ke abb aor seh saku himm'at nahi
gir kar tuutega yeh zehar ka paiyala
nasha isska abb mujhe hone ko hai

woh royega meri yaad mein
tadpega ek din meri mohhabat ko
buundh buund pigalega pathar dil uska
Intezar kijiye,yeh hadsa bhi hone ko hai...!!!
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #1 on: January 04, 2007, 12:09:55 PM »
thanks majid.. abhi toh post hi kiya tha... theek se padne ke pehli appreciations mil gayi.. thanks a lott for encouraging !!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2007, 05:37:34 PM »
Bohot khoob Jeet !!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #3 on: January 09, 2007, 06:49:34 PM »
superbssssssss   Jeet........   so  touching....   accha laga  padhker........
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #4 on: January 09, 2007, 07:06:57 PM »
shukriya Talat n Thanks waheed....!!!
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paani
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2007, 04:44:06 AM »
har sathi JEET khone ko hai
 
Nice jeet bhai
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2007, 12:31:05 PM »
Bohat Khoob JEET saheb
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2007, 12:56:10 PM »
Quote from: "(((JEET)))"
Har nazar hairan hai ,
aor arzoo rone ko hai
Gum mein kho gayi zindagi
aor asamaan ronne ko hai

charoN taraf hai roshni ki bahar
magar mera ashian seemata hua
agg mein jal chuka aks mera,aur
dhuan rafta rafta khone ko hai

na badao hath dosti ka
ki kismat meri hai kharab
jisko chaha usse paya nahi
har sathi JEET khone ko hai

jo kar sako toh itna karam kardo
dil mein jo dard hai,dawa ban jaye
jaz'baton ka tofan abb na rukeyga
shubha se bhatki raat ab hone ko hai

ruksat karo mujhe iss jahan se
ke abb aor seh saku himm'at nahi
gir kar tuutega yeh zehar ka paiyala
nasha isska abb mujhe hone ko hai

woh royega meri yaad mein
tadpega ek din meri mohhabat ko
buundh buund pigalega pathar dil uska
Intezar kijiye,yeh hadsa bhi hone ko hai...!!!
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Wah Wah!!! kya baat hai JEET BHAI.. bahut bahut khoooooooob

ek ek lafz dard me dooba nazar aata hai... behad khubsoorat kalaam
likha hai aapne......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A1
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2007, 08:20:49 AM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob jeet...
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Naya_Daur
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2007, 08:58:41 AM »
Thanks Paani,Humdum,Vicky n Pooja...

koi reply bhi karta toh yeh thread aor agge bardta... anyways.. thanks u all for ur encouragement...
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afreen_madhu
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2009, 10:04:45 AM »
Har nazar hairan hai ,
aor arzoo rone ko hai
Gum mein kho gayi zindagi
aor asamaan ronne ko hai

charoN taraf hai roshni ki bahar
magar mera ashian seemata hua
agg mein jal chuka aks mera,aur
dhuan rafta rafta khone ko hai

na badao hath dosti ka
ki kismat meri hai kharab
jisko chaha usse paya nahi
har sathi JEET khone ko hai

jo kar sako toh itna karam kardo
dil mein jo dard hai,dawa ban jaye
jaz'baton ka tofan abb na rukeyga
shubha se bhatki raat ab hone ko hai

ruksat karo mujhe iss jahan se
ke abb aor seh saku himm'at nahi
gir kar tuutega yeh zehar ka paiyala
nasha isska abb mujhe hone ko hai

woh royega meri yaad mein
tadpega ek din meri mohhabat ko
buundh buund pigalega pathar dil uska
Intezar kijiye,yeh hadsa bhi hone ko hai...!!!
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Lajavaab, Gazab...It's brilliant, bohot khoob likha apne..
Bohot dard chipa hai isme..akhri lines bohot hi pyaari hai..
Humein iski bohot zarurat thi, so I thank u dear. kyunki u provided me wiv tis..
Thanx a lot deary..

Keep up the g88888 wrk....

Love ya Loads....t.cccccc



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Fatima..
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2009, 10:23:53 AM »
bahoot khoob
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sarfira
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«Reply #12 on: December 24, 2011, 05:29:14 AM »
waah waah bhai Usual Smile
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