..~~Yeh kisney meri qurbat per diya jalaya~~..

by HumTum on May 05, 2005, 01:59:36 AM
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HumTum
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Dostoon... Aaj yha shayri-e-dard mein mieney ik post padi jo Meena ji ne likhi thi.. to ussi post ke jawab mein kuch arz ker rha hoon.... Aap sab ke jawabooN ka Talaabgar rahunga.....


tamam umr iss dil-e-bimaar ko chen na aaya
keh ke bewfaa ik aur hai zulm unhoney daya

yun to kami na thi gam-e-duraaN ki humey
gum-e-judai ki surat mein mehboob, nyab-e-tofaa laya

sath chalney ke kiye they davey to bahut usney
mud ke dekha jo aaj to kud ko tanhaa paya

duboo gya humey gum-e-samunder mein woh
"HumTum" tera pyaar bhi yeh kya rang hai laya

failaye hath mangga tha yaar khuda se "HumTum"
badley mein humney do gaz kafan hai paya

shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

kyun ker rha hai yha byaan-e-dil tu"HumTum"
tujhey marney ke baad bhi chen na aaya  

*Shazar = Tree

HumTum sad5
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Aryaan
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2005, 02:10:18 AM »
Bohat hi acha likha hai aap ne HumTum.... it's beautiful...
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2005, 06:18:36 AM »
Wah wah "hum tum".........spec. 2nd last 2 lines are just wonderful
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sandhaya
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2005, 08:19:41 AM »
very nice humtum too good.......

teri yaad ko juda khudse karna na aaya
saare aam kiya tha humne ijahre mahobat
kya kare hume zalim zamane se darna na aaya
kar di tere naam apni har khushi, humne khushi se
ek tu tha ki tujhe humse pyaar tak karna na aaya
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2005, 09:08:59 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Dostoon... Aaj yha shayri-e-dard mein mieney ik post padi jo Meena ji ne likhi thi.. to ussi post ke jawab mein kuch arz ker rha hoon.... Aap sab ke jawabooN ka Talaabgar rahunga.....


tamam umr iss dil-e-bimaar ko chen na aaya
keh ke bewfaa ik aur hai zulm unhoney daya

yun to kami na thi gam-e-duraaN ki humey
gum-e-judai ki surat mein mehboob, nyab-e-tofaa laya

sath chalney ke kiye they davey to bahut usney
mud ke dekha jo aaj to kud ko tanhaa paya

duboo gya humey gum-e-samunder mein woh
"HumTum" tera pyaar bhi yeh kya rang hai laya

failaye hath mangga tha yaar khuda se "HumTum"
badley mein humney do gaz kafan hai paya

shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

kyun ker rha hai yha byaan-e-dil tu"HumTum"
tujhey marney ke baad bhi chen na aaya  

*Shazar = Tree

HumTum sad5



bohat khoob humtum,bohat hi accha reply diya hai aapne.
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2005, 11:33:20 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Bohat hi acha likha hai aap ne HumTum.... it's beautiful...


Shukriya  Aryaan  Usual Smile
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2005, 11:33:41 AM »
Quote from: "isha_verma7"
Wah wah "hum tum".........spec. 2nd last 2 lines are just wonderful


Shukriya ji Shukriya  ...
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HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2005, 11:34:00 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Dostoon... Aaj yha shayri-e-dard mein mieney ik post padi jo Meena ji ne likhi thi.. to ussi post ke jawab mein kuch arz ker rha hoon.... Aap sab ke jawabooN ka Talaabgar rahunga.....


tamam umr iss dil-e-bimaar ko chen na aaya
keh ke bewfaa ik aur hai zulm unhoney daya

yun to kami na thi gam-e-duraaN ki humey
gum-e-judai ki surat mein mehboob, nyab-e-tofaa laya

sath chalney ke kiye they davey to bahut usney
mud ke dekha jo aaj to kud ko tanhaa paya

duboo gya humey gum-e-samunder mein woh
"HumTum" tera pyaar bhi yeh kya rang hai laya

failaye hath mangga tha yaar khuda se "HumTum"
badley mein humney do gaz kafan hai paya

shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

kyun ker rha hai yha byaan-e-dil tu"HumTum"
tujhey marney ke baad bhi chen na aaya  

*Shazar = Tree

HumTum sad5



bohat khoob humtum,bohat hi accha reply diya hai aapne.


Shukriya Nidhi ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2005, 11:34:38 AM »
Quote from: "sandhaya"
very nice humtum too good.......

teri yaad ko juda khudse karna na aaya
saare aam kiya tha humne ijahre mahobat
kya kare hume zalim zamane se darna na aaya
kar di tere naam apni har khushi, humne khushi se
ek tu tha ki tujhe humse pyaar tak karna na aaya


Shikriya Sandhaya ji .. and very nice .....
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2005, 11:53:24 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Dostoon... Aaj yha shayri-e-dard mein mieney ik post padi jo Meena ji ne likhi thi.. to ussi post ke jawab mein kuch arz ker rha hoon.... Aap sab ke jawabooN ka Talaabgar rahunga.....


tamam umr iss dil-e-bimaar ko chen na aaya
keh ke bewfaa ik aur hai zulm unhoney daya

yun to kami na thi gam-e-duraaN ki humey
gum-e-judai ki surat mein mehboob, nyab-e-tofaa laya

sath chalney ke kiye they davey to bahut usney
mud ke dekha jo aaj to kud ko tanhaa paya

duboo gya humey gum-e-samunder mein woh
"HumTum" tera pyaar bhi yeh kya rang hai laya

failaye hath mangga tha yaar khuda se "HumTum"
badley mein humney do gaz kafan hai paya

shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

kyun ker rha hai yha byaan-e-dil tu"HumTum"
tujhey marney ke baad bhi chen na aaya  

*Shazar = Tree

HumTum sad5



apke jawab ki tareef mai waha bhi kar chuki par socha ek bar yaha bih bol don ke bohot ache!!

 :D
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dhadkan
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2005, 12:09:20 PM »
shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

Jawab nahi hai HumTum Aapka................ Jitni bhi tareef karo kam hi lagti hai.............. :lol:

Waise can utell me the meaning of
shaad
qurbaat
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HumTum
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2005, 12:13:01 PM »
Quote from: "dhadkan"
shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

Jawab nahi hai HumTum Aapka................ Jitni bhi tareef karo kam hi lagti hai.............. :lol:

Waise can utell me the meaning of
shaad
qurbaat


Shukriya Dhadkan ji ...

*shaad = Abaad
*Qurbaat = kabr
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HumTum
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2005, 12:13:40 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Dostoon... Aaj yha shayri-e-dard mein mieney ik post padi jo Meena ji ne likhi thi.. to ussi post ke jawab mein kuch arz ker rha hoon.... Aap sab ke jawabooN ka Talaabgar rahunga.....


tamam umr iss dil-e-bimaar ko chen na aaya
keh ke bewfaa ik aur hai zulm unhoney daya

yun to kami na thi gam-e-duraaN ki humey
gum-e-judai ki surat mein mehboob, nyab-e-tofaa laya

sath chalney ke kiye they davey to bahut usney
mud ke dekha jo aaj to kud ko tanhaa paya

duboo gya humey gum-e-samunder mein woh
"HumTum" tera pyaar bhi yeh kya rang hai laya

failaye hath mangga tha yaar khuda se "HumTum"
badley mein humney do gaz kafan hai paya

shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

kyun ker rha hai yha byaan-e-dil tu"HumTum"
tujhey marney ke baad bhi chen na aaya  

*Shazar = Tree

HumTum sad5



apke jawab ki tareef mai waha bhi kar chuki par socha ek bar yaha bih bol don ke bohot ache!!

 :D


Shukriya ji .. lekin aap ke jawab ka muntzir tha ....    sad5
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2005, 12:25:13 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Dostoon... Aaj yha shayri-e-dard mein mieney ik post padi jo Meena ji ne likhi thi.. to ussi post ke jawab mein kuch arz ker rha hoon.... Aap sab ke jawabooN ka Talaabgar rahunga.....


tamam umr iss dil-e-bimaar ko chen na aaya
keh ke bewfaa ik aur hai zulm unhoney daya

yun to kami na thi gam-e-duraaN ki humey
gum-e-judai ki surat mein mehboob, nyab-e-tofaa laya

sath chalney ke kiye they davey to bahut usney
mud ke dekha jo aaj to kud ko tanhaa paya

duboo gya humey gum-e-samunder mein woh
"HumTum" tera pyaar bhi yeh kya rang hai laya

failaye hath mangga tha yaar khuda se "HumTum"
badley mein humney do gaz kafan hai paya

shaad ho gya woh *shazar, woh zameen "HumTum"
yeh kisney meri qurbaat pe aaj diya jalaya

kyun ker rha hai yha byaan-e-dil tu"HumTum"
tujhey marney ke baad bhi chen na aaya  

*Shazar = Tree

HumTum sad5



apke jawab ki tareef mai waha bhi kar chuki par socha ek bar yaha bih bol don ke bohot ache!!

 :D


Shukriya ji .. lekin aap ke jawab ka muntzir :?:  :?:  tha ....    sad5


kya tha?  Shocked
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dhadkan
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2005, 12:26:56 PM »
muntazir kya hia jeeeeeeeeeee........................Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh???
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