Yeh Kya Kar Diya Tumne

by Jiya on March 31, 2007, 06:14:07 AM
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Jiya
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 haar gaye hum to is dil se,ye kya kiya tumne
tha jo dil aashiyaana thumhaara,us dill ko ho tod diya tumne

tuta dil to jaaana humne, daraare hain kitni aayine mein
thokar kha ke ye jaana humne, fareb hain kitne zamaane mein

mere har ek armaan ka khoon kar diya tumne
le rahi hun saase magares jism ko bejaan kar diya tumne

aitbaar humne kya tha tumpe khud se jyaada
ishq kiya tha tumse rab se jyaada

jo yaad karta hain humko, usko hi bhula diya tume
muskuraate hue is chehere ko aaj rula diya tumne

ab to murjhaye phool bhi humko khile lagte hain
aise hum murjha gaye hain

sheeshe ki tarha yun bikhar gaye hain
jaise patthar se takra gaye hain

kasoor to bataa dete hume, jiski ye sazaa di hai tumne
e-mohabbat sikhaane waale , aaj mohabbat hi badnaam kar di tumne.

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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2007, 06:36:05 AM »
wah bahoot khoob Jiya....

Apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai...
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2007, 09:14:01 AM »
Good work..
Hope to seen more from you soon ..
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2007, 11:35:43 AM »
bahut acche jiyaaaaaa..

aate rahiyega yahan pe.......
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2007, 01:23:34 PM »
khushaamdid jeeya ji........yoindia mai aapka swagat hai.........nice begining 2.

 aa dekh zara ek baar sanam kis qadar tut chukhe hai hum
kaisi hai tujh bin zindagi kaisa hai waqt ka mujhpe ye julam

kaise kahu jeene ki mujhko ab hasrate  yu uljahn lagti hai
jo dil mai hai mere dhadak rahi woh dhadkane dushman lagti hai
aalam aisa hai meri betaabi ka ki ab saanse bhi lagti hai sitam
aa dekh zara................

...................@fahi@.......................
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2007, 05:35:25 PM »
Bohat khoob Jiya,shandaar aaghaaz kiya aapne...Welcome 2 Yoindia...enjoy.. Usual Smile .
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Jiya
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2007, 07:31:52 AM »
pooja ji, ricky ji, ankur ji, nidh ji aur fahi ji
   
shukriya aapka ki aap sabhi ko meri peheli koshish pasand aayi.
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2007, 08:31:23 AM »
Very nice Jiya... =D> Keep them coming... Usual Smile

PJAG... That was a marvellous reply... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2007, 06:42:51 PM »
Very Nice Jiya !! Welcome to Yoindia...Hope to see more from you...!!

Good reply Fahi !
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Jiya
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2007, 12:34:21 PM »
shukriya

shikha ji ,talat ji n all of u     ki aap sabhi ko meri ye poem pasand aayi main aap sabhi ki umeedon par khara utarne ki poori koshish karungi.

                                              thanks
                                                           jiya
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2007, 12:55:49 PM »
Jiya

Bahut achcha kalaam likha hai aap ne =D> =D> =D>

Vicky ki sister Jiya ka Yoindia par haardik swaagat hai :D

Enjoy your stay here !
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2007, 12:26:28 AM »
Bohat khoob Jiya...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2007, 08:30:15 AM »
sukriya...........

aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu............

jo kabhi apna tha tera usse hi aaj
gairo sa bartaab kar raha hai kyun
poche the jisne kabhi ansoo tere
uski madad karne se dar raha hai kyun

uski hi nigaaho mai gum deker
ashk-e-sailaab  bhar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu................

kya bhool gaya tu woh tanhaayi ka aalam
jisme sirf ek akeli woh hi  tere saath thi
deti thi tujhe sukun jo sunkar teri dastaan
aur teri bechaini se jo tadapti din raat thi

kyun aaj uske akelepan mai saath
chalne ke liye nahi utar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu..............

jo thukra di hai aaj tune uski iltza
usne usme kahan teri jaan maangi thi
 woh to bus dekhna chahti thi khush tujhe
isliye, tere hi labo pe usne muskaan maangi thi

kyun uski is fariyaad ka aaj yu
bedardi se khoon kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu.............

.........................@fahi@...................................
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Jiya
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2007, 09:19:27 AM »
Quote from: "purani_jeans_aur_guitar"
sukriya...........

aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu............

jo kabhi apna tha tera usse hi aaj
gairo sa bartaab kar raha hai kyun
poche the jisne kabhi ansoo tere
uski madad karne se dar raha hai kyun

uski hi nigaaho mai gum deker
ashk-e-sailaab  bhar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu................

kya bhool gaya tu woh tanhaayi ka aalam
jisme sirf ek akeli woh hi  tere saath thi
deti thi tujhe sukun jo sunkar teri dastaan
aur teri bechaini se jo tadapti din raat thi

kyun aaj uske akelepan mai saath
chalne ke liye nahi utar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu..............

jo thukra di hai aaj tune uski iltza
usne usme kahan teri jaan maangi thi
 woh to bus dekhna chahti thi khush tujhe
isliye, tere hi labo pe usne muskaan maangi thi

kyun uski is fariyaad ka aaj yu
bedardi se khoon kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu.............

.........................@fahi@...................................

aey dil tujhe jo karna hai jee bhar ke kar le tu
haan bas unki yaad ko mat nikaal is dil se
is jism se ruh ko alag na klar jalim
bas yaad se hi to unki dhadakta hai tu
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Jiya
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2007, 09:21:42 AM »
Quote from: "Jiya"
Quote from: "purani_jeans_aur_guitar"
sukriya...........

aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu............

jo kabhi apna tha tera usse hi aaj
gairo sa bartaab kar raha hai kyun
poche the jisne kabhi ansoo tere
uski madad karne se dar raha hai kyun

uski hi nigaaho mai gum deker
ashk-e-sailaab  bhar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu................

kya bhool gaya tu woh tanhaayi ka aalam
jisme sirf ek akeli woh hi  tere saath thi
deti thi tujhe sukun jo sunkar teri dastaan
aur teri bechaini se jo tadapti din raat thi

kyun aaj uske akelepan mai saath
chalne ke liye nahi utar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu..............

jo thukra di hai aaj tune uski iltza
usne usme kahan teri jaan maangi thi
 woh to bus dekhna chahti thi khush tujhe
isliye, tere hi labo pe usne muskaan maangi thi

kyun uski is fariyaad ka aaj yu
bedardi se khoon kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu
aey dil ye kya kar raha hai tu.............

.........................@fahi@...................................

aey dil tujhe jo karna hai jee bhar ke kar le tu
haan bas unki yaad ko mat nikaal is dil se
is jism se ruh ko alag na klar jalim
bas yaad se hi to unki dhadakta hai tu



wah !!!!!
aapne bohot hi achha likha hai!taarif kabul kijiye.
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