Yeh Kya Kar Diya Tumne -Panna 2:Shayri-E-Dard

Jiya

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«Reply #15 on: April 04, 2007, 09:28:28 AM »

Rajbir ji aur Aryaan ji
Thanx a lot.mujhe pata hai itna bhi achha nahin hai, par haan main poori koshish kar rahi hun
jiya


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purani_jeans_aur_guitar

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«Reply #16 on: April 04, 2007, 09:41:19 AM »

sukriya,aapne ise pada itna hi bahut hai mere liye.. ..........

dil ke kare ka dhadkan ko gar na gumaan hota
khudayi pe us khuda ka gar na aehtaram hota
kar lete us halaat mai hum khud apni tarife bhi 'fahi'
gar meri har nazm mai uske aks ka na kaam hota

.......................@fahi@......................


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deepika_divya

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«Reply #17 on: April 04, 2007, 10:12:30 AM »

mind blowing Jiya bahoot khoob lika hai ..keep writing like this...
Fahi ji tussi tho ak bar fir chaa gaya..bahoot khoob


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Jiya

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«Reply #18 on: April 04, 2007, 01:29:43 PM »

Quote from: "purani_jeans_aur_guitar"

khushaamdid jeeya ji........yoindia mai aapka swagat hai.........nice begining 2.

aa dekh zara ek baar sanam kis qadar tut chukhe hai hum
kaisi hai tujh bin zindagi kaisa hai waqt ka mujhpe ye julam

kaise kahu jeene ki mujhko ab hasrate yu uljahn lagti hai
jo dil mai hai mere dhadak rahi woh dhadkane dushman lagti hai
aalam aisa hai meri betaabi ka ki ab saanse bhi lagti hai sitam
aa dekh zara................

...................@fahi@.......................

Thanx a lot,,,,,, B Usual Smile

ohot hi pyaari lines likhi hain.sach mein.

Zindagi se bad kar tumse Mohabbat ki thi,
Is Khushi mein har gum ko bhul gaye the hum,
Ab saath hai to sirf gum ka,
Is Gum mein har Khushi ko bhul gaye hain hum.

Tumhaara har Karam yaad hai hume,
Tumhaara har Sitam bhi yaad hai hume,
Tuhaari Parchhai tak yaad hai hame,
Par tumhaari Bewafaai bhi yaad hai hume.

Kambakkhat tumhaari Yaadon se hi ghire rehete hain,
Tumhaari Yaadon mein apne aapko hi bhul gaye hain hum,
Ab sath hai to sirf Gum ka,
Is Gum mein har Khushi ko bhul gaye hain hum.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!......


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Aryaan

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«Reply #19 on: April 04, 2007, 02:52:55 PM »

Quote from: "Jiya"

Rajbir ji aur Aryaan ji
Thanx a lot.mujhe pata hai itna bhi achha nahin hai, par haan main poori koshish kar rahi hun
jiya

Jiya Aap ne acha likha hai tau tareef ki hai, App iss se bhi acha likh sakti hain, iss baat ka poora yaQeen hai hamein..


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Pooja

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«Reply #20 on: April 04, 2007, 04:48:30 PM »

Kiya tha vishwaas, kuch to socha hota
Is kadar dil laga kar, yun to na dhoka kiya hota

Kah dete, hum yunhi chale jaate, jeevan se
Khud ki nigahon main, yun sharminda ton a kiya hota

Bata sakege na kabhi, chup bhi raha na jayega
Humko is kadar, ghootan ka alam to na diya hota

Laut rahe hai dard ki apni nagari main, khush rahna app
Yah kaya kar diya tumne, is tarah, to na kiya hota


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purani_jeans_aur_guitar

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«Reply #21 on: April 05, 2007, 09:08:28 AM »

sukriya deepika ji......& jiya ji............aur aapne bhi accha likha hai...


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purani_jeans_aur_guitar

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«Reply #22 on: April 05, 2007, 09:10:02 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

nice combination of words & feelings pooja ji............gud job.


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Jiya

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«Reply #23 on: April 06, 2007, 08:54:57 AM »

Quote from: "Pooja"

wow!! di kyaa khoob likh aapne. maza aa gaya.is jiya ka jiya le liya aapne to.
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jisse pyaar kiya tha humne,
wo tha nafrat ke kaabil,
jis kshti main the ham to,
use mile na koi manjil.

dekhe the humne sapne,
the aankhon mein tum hi tum,
socha tha tum ho apne,
kahaan ho gaye ho gum.

khai thi hune kasme,
honge kabhi judaa na ham,
par ye to wo rasta hai,
jisme milti nahin manjil.

jisse ye di lagaya hamne,
usne tod diya ye dil,
jisko bhula na paye ham,
wo hamko bhul gya sandil.

................................................. jiya


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