YOINDIA KI MADHUSHALA

by phoenix on May 31, 2006, 06:25:58 PM
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jab tum na aaye mujhe bulane
to mein kyun tumhe yaad karun
mein bhi hun ek insaan zinda
mein hi kyun aagaz karun

bahut chaha ki tumhe bhula dun
par aisa mein kar na saka
jab bhula diya tumne mujhko
to yaad aayi mujhko madhushala

bhul gaya mein is mandir mein aakar
ki maine tumko puja tha kabhi
yahan kafir hain sabhi pyaar k
bas devta hai yeh ek pyala

tum chaho to aa sakte ho
nahi yahan mazhab ki deewar
na koi hai chota na hai bada
bus pyale mein hain pura sansar








hey everyone
its my small attempt, hope u will enjoy it and support it
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2006, 02:53:44 AM »
superab........bahut khub hai yeh aapki Madhushala Nitiesh...............


ishqe ka hai yeh kaisa sila
kabhi pyar hai kabhi udasi hai

jee bhar ke pee lo iska payala
fir bhi payas kahan bujh paati hai

aaj hai jaam bhi ,payala bhi aur saqqi bhi......
dekhe madhushala ab apna kya rang dikhati hai
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2006, 04:20:07 AM »
Very nice wordings Nitiesh and Ranju...

Yahan laga hua hai dard ka dera, Chaaii hui hai gam ki mehfil,
Aapas main hi but jaata hai, dekho ismey dard ka pyala...

Hum bhi aaye chand ansoo leker, Talash main yahan khushion ki,
Phir sey jeeney ki chahat main, pi liya humney zeher ka pyala...

Phir sey challki aankh humari, bheeg gaya yeh dil matwala,
Jaam main dekhey aansu humney, aaisi payii teri madhushala....
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2006, 05:03:03 AM »
bahut khub Shikha...............

mili jo unse nazare toh hamne thodi si pee li
kabhi hans ke kabhi ro ke hamne us payle se pee li

karke chale they toba ki ab na haath lagaynge
dekhi teri madhushala toh hamne har kasam tod ke pee li

bacha hai kaun is mohabat ke dard se...........
chalka hai jab bhi yeh ashko se ...........
har kisi ne ise mohabat ki maye samjh ke pee li.....
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phoenix
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2006, 11:32:29 AM »
nice replies ranjana and shikha

aaya tha mein mehfil mein teri
peene pyar ka ek pyala
tune tha thukraya mujhko
jisne apnaya woh thi ye madhushala
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2006, 12:02:16 PM »
nice one Nitiesh..............



yun na utho meri meffil se kahti hai yeh madhushala
peela ke khud hi ruth gaya hamko peelane wala
sab ne chora saath mera , per haato se chutta na payala
sab rishto se payari hai meri yeh madhushala
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2006, 12:15:00 PM »
Gud job Nattu...Ranj....Shikha

Darr lagta hai ki kahin tere Dard me hum bheeg na jaye....
Na ho jayen kahin madhosh iss nashe mein teri yaadon me behek na jaye.....

Jab poochta hu apni Rooh se toh naam tera hee nikalta hai sada banke....
Kehti hai woh bhi chal chalein kahin bhari mehfil me tere Ashq nikal na jaye.......!!!!!!!!
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phoenix
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2006, 12:27:46 PM »
raat nashe mein pahunch gaya mein
mandir mein lekar pyala
jab na mila koi wahan bhi
dard e dil ko tu yaad aaya

tujhe dhundne nikal pada mein
pass mere tha sirf yeh pyala
har kadam pe chalakta gaya
jahan gira par ban gayi wahan madhushala
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2006, 01:37:08 PM »
Wah Wah ! kya baat hai phoenix ji... bahut khoob likha hai aapne....maza aa gaya padh kar...
and nice one badnaam ji..........

Kabhi kabhi wo MADHUSHALA, yaad aaye bahut,
ki ek boond bhi na pee, aur ladhkhadaye bahut.......
yaadon ko tumhari dil se mitane aaye the yahan,
yahan bhi teri yaadon ne humen tadpaya bahut......
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phoenix
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2006, 03:42:36 PM »
wah bahut aache vicky ji
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phoenix
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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2006, 04:11:04 PM »
na tum mujhe samajh saki
na mein tumhe samjha saka
bas mein ik pyala tham kar
apne dil ko behla saka

raat ki tanhaiyon mein
apne aks se baatein karta raha
jab subah hui to nazar padi
khali ho gaya tha yeh pyala
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«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2006, 05:47:19 PM »
Quote from: "phoenix"
jab tum na aaye mujhe bulane
to mein kyun tumhe yaad karun
mein bhi hun ek insaan zinda
mein hi kyun aagaz karun

bahut chaha ki tumhe bhula dun
par aisa mein kar na saka
jab bhula diya tumne mujhko
to yaad aayi mujhko madhushala

bhul gaya mein is mandir mein aakar
ki maine tumko puja tha kabhi
yahan kafir hain sabhi pyaar k
bas devta hai yeh ek pyala

tum chaho to aa sakte ho
nahi yahan mazhab ki deewar
na koi hai chota na hai bada
bus pyale mein hain pura sansar








hey everyone
its my small attempt, hope you will enjoy it and support it


Marvellous yaar,and ranjana ji u too have done a gr8 job.
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nikki
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2006, 05:55:31 PM »
beautifull poem Phoenix....kamaal ka likha hai aapne
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phoenix
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«Reply #13 on: June 01, 2006, 05:57:50 PM »
nidhu aise kaam nahi chalta yahan


tum ho ek pardesi yahan
kahan chale pekar ek pyala
aao sath baitho hamare
dikhlaye tumko madhushala
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: June 02, 2006, 02:44:55 AM »
shukriya Nidhi and Nikki....................

per bina peeye kahan chale aap dono........... Usual Smile

jab aao is madhushala mein toh ek jaam tum bhi uthao
kuch der betho sang hamare aur kuch boond iski tum bhi chalakao
pee kar sang hamare  is madhushala ke rang mein rang jaao....... Usual Smile
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