yun juDaa ho ke too saZaa naa dey,..........

by laaiba on January 17, 2013, 08:33:00 AM
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                   yeh kaHin dil ko hee jaLaa naa dey,
                   zab.T kee aa.g ko haWaa naa dey
                    
                   saN.g teii rey hi reh ke jeetee hun
                   yun juDaa ho k too saZaa naa dey,

                   too.t jaaTey hain sab vaadey leiiKin
                    raN.j koh dil meiN too baSaa naa dey,

                   mohtaRam aa.j bhii teiRee yaaDeiN,
                   bhoo.l jaayoo ye bad Duaa naa dey,
                  
                    yaa.d ki vaaDi mein ab jee kar tum,
                   dil ko yun daR.d kee qaBaa naa dey,
laaiba ali
                  
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2013, 09:12:05 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on January 17, 2013, 08:33:00 AM

                   yeh kaHin dil ko hee jaLaa naa dey,
                   zab.T kee aa.g ko haWaa naa dey

                   saN.g teii rey hi reh ke jaatee hun
                   yun juDaa ho k too saZaa naa dey,

                   too.t jaaTey hain sab vaadey leiiKin
                    raN.j koh dil meiN too jaGah naa dey,

                   mohtaRam aa.j bhii teiRee yaaDeiN,
                   bhoo.l jaayoo ye bad Duaa naa dey,
                   
                    yaa.d ki vaaDi mein ab jee kar tum,
                   dil ko yun daR.d kee qaBaa naa dey,
laaiba ali
                   

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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2013, 09:13:29 AM »
waah waah bahut khoob dherob daad
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«Reply #3 on: January 17, 2013, 09:16:20 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai laaiba jee
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«Reply #4 on: January 17, 2013, 09:31:43 AM »
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai jee... abde hi achche ashaar rahe...
Khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umda kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN dusre ashaar ke ulaa misre par gaur kijiye.. lagta hai kuch
typing mistake hai.. misra khul nahi paaya...

Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 17, 2013, 04:45:52 PM »
 Applause

Laaiba ali,
           bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. mubarakbaad qubool farmayein........................S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #6 on: January 17, 2013, 04:47:24 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 17, 2013, 06:08:01 PM »
Quote from: qalb on January 17, 2013, 09:12:05 AM
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thnx qalb ji,.............
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«Reply #8 on: January 17, 2013, 06:08:42 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on January 17, 2013, 09:13:29 AM
waah waah bahut khoob dherob daad
bohat bohat shukria sir saini ji ,...........
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2013, 06:24:25 PM »
                                  yeh  kaHin dil ko hee jaLaa naa dey,
                   zab.T kee aa.g ko haWaa naa dey
                   
                   saN.g teii rey hi reh ke jeetee hun
                   yun juDaa ho k too saZaa naa dey,

                   too.t jaaTey hain sab vaadey leiiKin
                    raN.j koh dil meiN too baSaa naa dey,

                   mohtaRam aa.j bhii teiRee yaaDeiN,
                   bhoo.l jaayoo ye bad Duaa naa dey,
                   
                    yaa.d ki vaaDi mein ab jee kar tum,
                 dil ko yun daR.d kee qaBaa naa dey,

                   
LAAIBA ALI


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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2013, 07:45:08 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2013, 07:48:33 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on January 17, 2013, 08:33:00 AM

                   yeh kaHin dil ko hee jaLaa naa dey,
                   zab.T kee aa.g ko haWaa naa dey
                    
                   saN.g teii rey hi reh ke jeetee hun
                   yun juDaa ho k too saZaa naa dey,

                   too.t jaaTey hain sab vaadey leiiKin
                    raN.j koh dil meiN too baSaa naa dey,

                   mohtaRam aa.j bhii teiRee yaaDeiN,
                   bhoo.l jaayoo ye bad Duaa naa dey,
                  
                    yaa.d ki vaaDi mein ab jee kar tum,
                   dil ko yun daR.d kee qaBaa naa dey,
laaiba ali
                  

bahut khoob laiba........!
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2013, 08:30:00 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on January 17, 2013, 08:33:00 AM

                   yeh kaHin dil ko hee jaLaa naa dey,
                   zab.T kee aa.g ko haWaa naa dey
                   
                   saN.g teii rey hi reh ke jeetee hun
                   yun juDaa ho k too saZaa naa dey,

                   too.t jaaTey hain sab vaadey leiiKin
                    raN.j koh dil meiN too baSaa naa dey,

                   mohtaRam aa.j bhii teiRee yaaDeiN,
                   bhoo.l jaayoo ye bad Duaa naa dey,
                   
                    yaa.d ki vaaDi mein ab jee kar tum,
                   dil ko yun daR.d kee qaBaa naa dey,
laaiba ali
                   


Laaiba Ji Justttttt Beautiful!!!!!

har  Ek Ashaar Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chuuta Hua..


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«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2013, 07:06:42 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2013, 10:05:03 AM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 17, 2013, 09:31:43 AM
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai jee... abde hi achche ashaar rahe...
Khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umda kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

HaaN dusre ashaar ke ulaa misre par gaur kijiye.. lagta hai kuch
typing mistake hai.. misra khul nahi paaya...

Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
ji bohat shukria aapkaa parwaz ji ,......... typing mistakes thien theek kar li hain ,...bohat shukria ,..............
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