~*~ Yunhi shayar nahin banjate ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on January 26, 2011, 01:30:16 PM
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Koi bhi topic pe likhna chahoun, aksar bhatak jata hoon..
Mujhe lagta hai ane wale salon main jab insh'Allah ek pehchan
hogayi hogi iss Yo ki mehfil main toh log mujhe yaad karenge,
toh woh aise kay 'Rahim woh jo bhatak jaya karta tha likhte waqt..'


Lavzon main qaid karke apne askh bahana chahta hoon,
Aj duniya ko bhool main bhi kahin kho jana chahta hoon..

Jo duniya mujhe ek dum khali aur andheri nazar ati hai,
Pehle ki tarha main isse rangeen banana chahta hoon..

Arsa hogaya uski yaadon ne har waqt mera peecha kiya hai,
Ab bahaut hogaya; main bin wajeh kay bhi rona chahta hoon..

Ek baar toh ake kehde ‘tujse behtar milgaya mujhe ‘Khamosh’’,
Tu kabhi toh hogi meri; yeh umeed main aj thorrna chahta hoon..

Nafs kay haathon majboor hokar najane kitne gunaah kiye hai maine,
Ya Rabb tu baksh de mujhe aur aqal de; main aur gunaah karna nahin chahta hoon..

Sirf dard aur bewaffai pe likhne se koi shayar nahin banjata ‘Khamosh’,
Apni nazmein dekh, koi line bahaut lambi toh koi na hone kay barabar,
Yaaron aj ek sach darshana chahta hoon apni iss nadan koshish main,
Khwaish, Shihab, Bekarar ki tarha main bhi ek acha shayar ban’na chahta hoon..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2011, 01:33:55 PM »
bahot hi umda rahim ji..........

wese to aap bhi inhi me se ek he........ek bahot aache sahyar.....aap na mane to wo baat aur he...... fir bhi apne dua mangi he to meri bhi dua sath he apke ki aap bahot bahot aache shayar ban jaye aur hume bahot hi umda shayariya padne ko mile..........bahot khoob sahab.keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2011, 02:03:43 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on January 26, 2011, 01:30:16 PM
Koi bhi topic pe likhna chahoun, aksar bhatak jata hoon..
Mujhe lagta hai ane wale salon main jab insh'Allah ek pehchan
hogayi hogi iss Yo ki mehfil main toh log mujhe yaad karenge,
toh woh aise kay 'Rahim woh jo bhatak jaya karta tha likhte waqt..'


Lavzon main qaid karke apne askh bahana chahta hoon,
Aj duniya ko bhool main bhi kahin kho jana chahta hoon..

Jo duniya mujhe ek dum khali aur andheri nazar ati hai,
Pehle ki tarha main isse rangeen banana chahta hoon..

Arsa hogaya uski yaadon ne har waqt mera peecha kiya hai,
Ab bahaut hogaya; main bin wajeh kay bhi rona chahta hoon..

Ek baar toh ake kehde ‘tujse behtar milgaya mujhe ‘Khamosh’’,
Tu kabhi toh hogi meri; yeh umeed main aj thorrna chahta hoon..

Nafs kay haathon majboor hokar najane kitne gunaah kiye hai maine,
Ya Rabb tu baksh de mujhe aur aqal de; main aur gunaah karna nahin chahta hoon..

Sirf dard aur bewaffai pe likhne se koi shayar nahin banjata ‘Khamosh’,
Apni nazmein dekh, koi line bahaut lambi toh koi na hone kay barabar,
Yaaron aj ek sach darshana chahta hoon apni iss nadan koshish main,
Khwaish, Shihab, Bekarar ki tarha main bhi ek acha shayar ban’na chahta hoon..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Mere Chote Bhai Rahim!!! Meri nazar mein Woh shayari hai Jo Dil Se Nikalti Hai Aur kisi Ke dil tak pahunchti hai..Yaar Humein Se Koi Bhi Yahan Professional Nahi Hai,Apni Roz-aana Zindagi Se Prabhavit hokar Kuch Likhte Hai Chaahe Woh mohabbat Ho, Dard Ho, Yahan Koi Bhi Social Topic kyon Naa Ho..Aur Dost Rahim Aap Jab Likhte Ho To Insaan Padhta Kam Mehsoos Zyaada Karta Hai..

"Alag Jahan"
"Zindagi Asaan Nahi Hoti"
"Gareeb Bahut Hai"
"Mohabbat Nahi"
"Kaash Main Ek Parinda Hota"

Aapki Likhi Yeh 5 Nazmein Meri Yoindia Ki fav Collection mein hai..Ar Kya kahoon Main!!!!

Haan Dost Yeh zaroor Kahunga Ke Koshish Kiya Karo ke Alag Topic's Chunna Karo kyonki Aap Yeh Kar Sakte Ho..Aapme woh khaasiyat Hai..

You Are one of my Fav's & u will always be.. icon_flower
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Anshumali
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2011, 02:36:02 PM »
Quote from: -Rahim- on January 26, 2011, 01:30:16 PM
Koi bhi topic pe likhna chahoun, aksar bhatak jata hoon..
Mujhe lagta hai ane wale salon main jab insh'Allah ek pehchan
hogayi hogi iss Yo ki mehfil main toh log mujhe yaad karenge,
toh woh aise kay 'Rahim woh jo bhatak jaya karta tha likhte waqt..'


Lavzon main qaid karke apne askh bahana chahta hoon,
Aj duniya ko bhool main bhi kahin kho jana chahta hoon..

Jo duniya mujhe ek dum khali aur andheri nazar ati hai,
Pehle ki tarha main isse rangeen banana chahta hoon..

Arsa hogaya uski yaadon ne har waqt mera peecha kiya hai,
Ab bahaut hogaya; main bin wajeh kay bhi rona chahta hoon..

Ek baar toh ake kehde ‘tujse behtar milgaya mujhe ‘Khamosh’’,
Tu kabhi toh hogi meri; yeh umeed main aj thorrna chahta hoon..

Nafs kay haathon majboor hokar najane kitne gunaah kiye hai maine,
Ya Rabb tu baksh de mujhe aur aqal de; main aur gunaah karna nahin chahta hoon..

Sirf dard aur bewaffai pe likhne se koi shayar nahin banjata ‘Khamosh’,
Apni nazmein dekh, koi line bahaut lambi toh koi na hone kay barabar,
Yaaron aj ek sach darshana chahta hoon apni iss nadan koshish main,
Khwaish, Shihab, Bekarar ki tarha main bhi ek acha shayar ban’na chahta hoon..


~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Rahim Ji .. Likhna ek saadhnaa hai ... aap humesha acchi koshish karte hai .. mere khayal me likhne ke saath saath BaDhe ShaayroN ko bhi padhe ... isse apne aap bahut nikhaar aayega ... 

iss acchi koshish ke liye ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !

likhte rahen aate rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2011, 02:58:40 PM »
Bahut khoob rahim,tou kya hua agar tum sirf dard pe likhte ho shayari hi ek zariya hai jisse hame apni feelings express karsakte hai tum bahut ache shayar ho aur hamesha kuch alag likhte ho..i like ur posts...Usual Smile
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ANAAM
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2011, 03:03:21 PM »
MAST  rachna hai aapki Rahim ji........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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nirala
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2011, 03:49:19 PM »
Rahim ji---
aapki ye rachna bahut sachhi hai. achha lagta hai aapko padhna.
lekin ek baat kahunga chota muh badi baat maaf kariyega ----
aapki ek alg pehchaan hai bahut khubsurati se dil ki baate paroste hai aap. aap kisi ki tarah ban hi nahi sakte.
Rahim kabhi bhi Kabeer nahi ban skta. Rahim rahim hai .
dono hi mahan aur great.
so ap aap hi rahenge janab aur baaki log bhi aap jesa nahi ban sakte.
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Intezar
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2011, 05:18:43 PM »
kya baat hai Rahim bhai... aap to khud mein hi alag cheez ho..


kya shumaar main kisi khaas shyaaaron mein hota 'Intezar'
wo andaz kuch aur the, aur mujhe andaaz-e-bayan aaya nahin... !

Intezar !
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dead heart
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2011, 06:21:18 PM »
Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 26, 2011, 01:33:55 PM
bahot hi umda rahim ji..........

wese to aap bhi inhi me se ek he........ek bahot aache sahyar.....aap na mane to wo baat aur he...... fir bhi apne dua mangi he to meri bhi dua sath he apke ki aap bahot bahot aache shayar ban jaye aur hume bahot hi umda shayariya padne ko mile..........bahot khoob sahab.keep it up
Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee..
Yeh toh dekhne wale ki nazar hai kay kya khubsoorat hai
aur kya nahin..
Mujhe jo pyaar Yo se mila hai, woh bahaut zada hai aur ap
jaison ki wajah se hi baar baar yahan aa kar kuch likh jata hoon..
teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2011, 06:24:13 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 26, 2011, 02:03:43 PM
Mere Chote Bhai Rahim!!! Meri nazar mein Woh shayari hai Jo Dil Se Nikalti Hai Aur kisi Ke dil tak pahunchti hai..Yaar Humein Se Koi Bhi Yahan Professional Nahi Hai,Apni Roz-aana Zindagi Se Prabhavit hokar Kuch Likhte Hai Chaahe Woh mohabbat Ho, Dard Ho, Yahan Koi Bhi Social Topic kyon Naa Ho..Aur Dost Rahim Aap Jab Likhte Ho To Insaan Padhta Kam Mehsoos Zyaada Karta Hai..

"Alag Jahan"
"Zindagi Asaan Nahi Hoti"
"Gareeb Bahut Hai"
"Mohabbat Nahi"
"Kaash Main Ek Parinda Hota"

Aapki Likhi Yeh 5 Nazmein Meri Yoindia Ki fav Collection mein hai..Ar Kya kahoon Main!!!!

Haan Dost Yeh zaroor Kahunga Ke Koshish Kiya Karo ke Alag Topic's Chunna Karo kyonki Aap Yeh Kar Sakte Ho..Aapme woh khaasiyat Hai..

You Are one of my Fav's & u will always be.. icon_flower
Main apka teh dil se shukriya ada karna chahta hoon mere dost..
Sach kaha apne kay dil se nikle woh shayari hai..
Aur jo nazmon ka apne zikr kiya, honestly mujhe pata nahin tha
kay meri nazmein kisi ki fav collection main bhi jati hai..
Apka teh dil se shukriya..
You are my fav too..No doubt..!
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2011, 06:25:23 PM »
Quote from: Anshumali on January 26, 2011, 02:36:02 PM
Rahim Ji .. Likhna ek saadhnaa hai ... aap humesha acchi koshish karte hai .. mere khayal me likhne ke saath saath BaDhe ShaayroN ko bhi padhe ... isse apne aap bahut nikhaar aayega ... 

iss acchi koshish ke liye ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... !

likhte rahen aate rahen ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
Apka teh dil se shukriya Naresh jee..
Hamesha saath dene kay liye dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2011, 06:26:06 PM »
Quote from: ANAAM on January 26, 2011, 03:03:21 PM
MAST  rachna hai aapki Rahim ji........ Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Teh teh dil se shukriya Anaam jee..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya..
yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #12 on: January 26, 2011, 06:27:18 PM »
Quote from: nirala on January 26, 2011, 03:49:19 PM
Rahim ji---
aapki ye rachna bahut sachhi hai. achha lagta hai aapko padhna.
lekin ek baat kahunga chota muh badi baat maaf kariyega ----
aapki ek alg pehchaan hai bahut khubsurati se dil ki baate paroste hai aap. aap kisi ki tarah ban hi nahi sakte.
Rahim kabhi bhi Kabeer nahi ban skta. Rahim rahim hai .
dono hi mahan aur great.
so ap aap hi rahenge janab aur baaki log bhi aap jesa nahi ban sakte.
Nirala jee, mere dost..
Hamesha saath dene kay liye aur itne ache alfaaz kehne kay liye,
main apka teh dil shukriya ada karta hoon..
Thank you..!
Khush rahiye..!
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dead heart
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2011, 06:30:43 PM »
Quote from: Intezar on January 26, 2011, 05:18:43 PM
kya baat hai Rahim bhai... aap to khud mein hi alag cheez ho..


kya shumaar main kisi khaas shyaaaron mein hota 'Intezar'
wo andaz kuch aur the, aur mujhe andaaz-e-bayan aaya nahin... !

Intezar !

Uffff kitna khubsoorat aur gehra ashaar keh gaye ap..
kya baat hai Intezar jee..
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kya hua jo tumhe woh andaaz-e-bayan nahin aya Intezar,
Jo tumhe ata hai; woh zamane main kisi ko nahin aya..!

Apka teh dil se shukriya mere dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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Intezar
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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2011, 07:20:28 PM »
Shurkiya Rahim bhai mere dost...

kadra kisko thi zamaane mein mere dard ki Rahim
wo to kagazon ne sahaara diya jo alfaaz utarne diye... !

Intezar !
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