... Zaalim ne mera "NaaM" likh bheja ...

by Just_Hate_Love on April 27, 2006, 06:20:12 PM
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Maine usko ''SalaaM'' likh bheja,
Usne ''Haal-e-dil tamaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha tere honth kaise hai Huh?
Usne mujhe ''JaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha tere baal kaise hai Huh?
Usne ''Kudrat ka inaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha kab hogi mulaqat Huh?
Usne ''Qayamat ki shaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha itna tadpati kyu ho Huh?
Usne ''Jawani ka inteqaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha tumhe nafrat kisse hai Huh?
Zaalim ne mera ''NaaM'' likh bheja ...
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2006, 06:22:29 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"

Maine puchha tumhe nafrat kisse hai Huh?
Zaalim ne mera ''NaaM'' likh bheja ...


wah wah wah bahut achaa JHL......nice......keep it up!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2006, 08:46:17 PM »
Good one JHL JI!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2006, 02:33:37 AM »
Very Nice JHL...
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nirbhay
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2006, 02:44:17 AM »
Good One JHL!!!

Khatm hua jab sharab-e-muhabaat ka nasha
Zalim ne paimana ek dard bhara jaam likh bheja!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2006, 06:56:29 AM »
Bahoot Ache JHL Bhai,..

Dil Tujhe Diya Tha Rakhne Ko,..
Tune Dil Ko Jalaa ke Rakh Diya,..
Kismat Ne De ke Pyaar Mujhe,..
Mera Dil Tardpaa Ke Rakh Diya,..

Bhanvare Ki Labon Par Fariyaadein,..
Kalion Ke labon Par Muskurahatein,..
Bhanvare Ka Kaleja Kalion Mein,..
Haay," Kisne Choopa Ke Rakh Diya,..

Jis Dard SE Duniya Darti Thi,..
Jis Gham Se Kinara Karti Thi,..
Teri Nazar Ne Mere Seene mein,..
Wo Dard Choopa ke Rakh Diya,..

Jab Dil Mein Tumhe Basaya Tha,..
Aasha Ka Deep Jalaya Tha,..
Taqdeer Ke Ek Hi Jhonke Ne,..
Wo Deep Bujhaa ke Rakh Diya,..

_____________________-NM-
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #6 on: April 29, 2006, 05:42:54 PM »
Thanks a lot Isha Pooja Aryan Nirbhay and Janasheen for appreciation ...

And good one Nirbhay and Janasheen ...
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2006, 05:45:19 PM »
Tere hontho ki hansi banne ka khwaab hai,
Teri aaghos mein simat jaane ka khwaab hai,
wo maut bhi maut jaaye tere dar pe aake,
Tujhe aisi zindagi dene ka khwaab hai ...
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2006, 05:48:43 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Maine usko ''SalaaM'' likh bheja,
Usne ''Haal-e-dil tamaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha tere honth kaise hai Huh?
Usne mujhe ''JaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha tere baal kaise hai Huh?
Usne ''Kudrat ka inaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha kab hogi mulaqat Huh?
Usne ''Qayamat ki shaaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha itna tadpati kyu ho Huh?
Usne ''Jawani ka inteqaM'' likh bheja,
Maine puchha tumhe nafrat kisse hai Huh?
Zaalim ne mera ''NaaM'' likh bheja ...


Superb JHL ji
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2006, 05:54:08 PM »
Sukriya bahut bahut aapka B.Shayar ...
Aapne kuchh nahi likha Huh?
Likhte to hame achha lagta ...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2006, 06:01:48 PM »
Salaam jo bheja humne apna unhe.....
Unhone apna Dard aankhon se baha diya.....

Socha tha kabhi waqt raha toh milenge unse hum.....
Par aaj rahon me unhone Sailaab baha diya.....

Beh gaya mein Gumon ke tufan mein.....
Kardi usne aakhri kasar bhi poori.....
Maut ka mera Humsafa bana dia.......!!!!!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2006, 06:08:37 PM »
Waah bhaii ...
Kya baat kahi hai ...
Its fantastic ...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2006, 06:14:16 PM »
Shurkriyya JHL ji Usual Smile
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #13 on: April 29, 2006, 06:18:36 PM »
You are most welcome brother ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2006, 04:28:07 AM »
wah BS ji kaya baat hai bahoot khoob!!!
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