... Zaalim ne mera "NaaM" likh bheja ...

by Just_Hate_Love on April 27, 2006, 06:20:12 PM
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«Reply #30 on: May 23, 2006, 05:35:00 PM »
Quote from: "Pankhuri2"
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob JHL JI!!!

Deewar bana kar koi chala gaya
mujko mitta kar koi chala gaya
jameen ho gai hu, asmaan kisi ko bana nahi sakti
tanha zindagi ko kisi se baant nahi sakti


Teri tanhaai ko to humne baant liya,
Par baant na sake tera pyaar tujhse,
Tere mitne se pehle hum fanaa ho jayenge,
Roshan hai is naachiz ka mazaar tujhse ...
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«Reply #31 on: May 23, 2006, 05:40:01 PM »
very  nice  words..,.....Pankhuri.................JHL......
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«Reply #32 on: May 23, 2006, 05:41:11 PM »
Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Nice One JHL And Pankhuri Ji...

Tord Denge Har Deewar Jo Aaye Hamari Raah Mein,.
Ek Baar Tum Hume Apna Banakar To Dekho,..

Le Leinge Tumhare Har Dard Aur Gham Apne Dil Mein,..
Ek Baar Tum Hume Apne Dil Mein Basakar To Dekho,..

Marke Bhi Tumhare Liye Hum Laout Aayeinge Jaanasheen,..
Ek Baar Tum Hume Pyaar Se Bulaakar To Dekho,..

Bhar Deinge Saari Khushion Tumhari Jholi Mein Hum,,..
Hume Bhi Ek Baar Tum Muskuraakar To Dekho,..

Ye Alag Baat Hai Ke Samajh Te Ho Tum Hume Gair Jaanasheen,..
Hum Sab Rishte Tord Deinge Ek Baar Tum Humse Rishta Nibhaakar To Dekho,..

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You have written fantastic Janasheen ...
Just mindblowing one ...
Keep it up ...
I have nothing to write ...
Bas itna ki ...

Humne tumhe kabhi bhi gair ki nazro se nahi dekha,
Nibhayenge dil se ye rishta jo khuda ne hamare liye banaya hai ...
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«Reply #33 on: May 24, 2006, 10:40:31 AM »
Shukriya JHL Bhai,...

Nice One,..

Khuda Ne Pyaar Ke Rishton Ko Asmaan Mein Banaye The,..
Lekin Wo Hain Ke Humse Har Rishta Tordte Chale,.

__________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #34 on: May 25, 2006, 06:10:31 PM »
Rishto ko todna to unka kaam hai par,
Khuda ne tere dil mein banaya uska mukaam hai ...
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«Reply #35 on: May 26, 2006, 07:57:46 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Rishto ko todna to unka kaam hai par,
Khuda ne tere dil mein banaya uska mukaam hai ...


Nice One Bhai,...

Rishta Dil Ka Wo Humse Tordte Chale,..
Rakeebon Ke Saath Nata Jordte Chale,..
Jaane Kyun Unhone Hume Apna Safar Na Samjha,..
Ke Har Mazil Ki Adhoori Raah Mein Hume Chordte Chale,..

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #36 on: June 02, 2006, 06:08:43 PM »
Usne tujhe nahi chhoda, tanhaai ko chhoda,
Tera saaya banke usne apni parchhai ko chhoda ...


Thanks a lot Bhai and nice one too ...
Keep it up ...
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«Reply #37 on: June 02, 2006, 09:33:34 PM »
Good ones JHL, Pankhuri  & Jaanasheen...
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«Reply #38 on: June 03, 2006, 07:55:53 AM »
bahoot khoob JHL JI and JSheen. Thanks Aryaan ji
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«Reply #39 on: June 03, 2006, 10:04:56 AM »
Shukriya JHL Aryaan Bhai And Pankhuri Ji,..

Tanhaai Ko Bhi Chun Loon Main Gar Pal Do Pal Uska Saath Mile,..
Marna Bhi Pasand Hain Mujhe Gar Marte Waqr Hathon Mein Uska Haath Mile,..

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«Reply #40 on: June 10, 2006, 05:28:38 PM »
Thanks a lot Aryan and Pooja for appreciation ...
and you are most welcome Janasheen ...
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«Reply #41 on: June 10, 2006, 05:35:49 PM »
Saath to uska tere liye hardam rahega,
Teri tanhaai ka aalam ye JHL akela sahega,
Bas koi shikayat na rahegi na hi koi dard hoga,
Jo marte waqt gar teri aankh se ek aansu bahega ...
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«Reply #42 on: June 10, 2006, 11:38:54 PM »
nice one jhl/...

Mujhe dard-e-ishq ka maza maloom hai…
Dard-e-dil ki inteha maloom hai…
 Zindagi bhar muskuraane ki dua na dena…
Mujhe pal bhar muskuraane ki saza maloom hai…

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«Reply #43 on: June 12, 2006, 06:49:55 AM »
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Thanks a lot Aryan and Pooja for appreciation ...
and you are most welcome Janasheen ...


Shukriya Bhai,..
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«Reply #44 on: June 12, 2006, 06:53:05 AM »
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Saath to uska tere liye hardam rahega,
Teri tanhaai ka aalam ye JHL akela sahega,
Bas koi shikayat na rahegi na hi koi dard hoga,
Jo marte waqt gar teri aankh se ek aansu bahega ...


Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,..

Jab Jee Rahe Tha Main To Deedar Bhi Naseeb Na Hua,..
Jab Marr Jaoon To Kabhi Aansoon Na Bahana,..

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