... Zaalim ne mera "NaaM" likh bheja ...

by Just_Hate_Love on April 27, 2006, 06:20:12 PM
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«Reply #45 on: June 12, 2006, 06:54:27 AM »
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nice one jhl/...

Mujhe dard-e-ishq ka maza maloom hai…
Dard-e-dil ki inteha maloom hai…
 Zindagi bhar muskuraane ki dua na dena…
Mujhe pal bhar muskuraane ki saza maloom hai…

n/m


Waah Manju Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Bhai,..

Sab Kehte Hain Ki Hume Adat Hai Muskuraane Ki,..
Unhe Kya Khabar Hai Ke Ye Bhi Ek Adaa Hai Gham Choopaane Ki,..
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«Reply #46 on: June 12, 2006, 02:23:32 PM »
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Saath to uska tere liye hardam rahega,
Teri tanhaai ka aalam ye JHL akela sahega,
Bas koi shikayat na rahegi na hi koi dard hoga,
Jo marte waqt gar teri aankh se ek aansu bahega ...


ansoo hai yah, armaan liye bah jayega
dard hai yah, jakham ke sath dhal jayega
waqat hai yah, phir hatho se nikal jayega
wo hi Tu hai, phir se ajnabi ban  kar, pass se nikal jayega
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«Reply #47 on: June 12, 2006, 02:24:59 PM »
bahoot khoob MK nad JSheen ji!!
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«Reply #48 on: June 13, 2006, 06:08:46 AM »
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bahoot khoob MK nad JSheen ji!!


Shukriya Pooja Sis,..
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«Reply #49 on: June 13, 2006, 06:13:26 AM »
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Usne tujhe nahi chhoda, tanhaai ko chhoda,
Tera saaya banke usne apni parchhai ko chhoda ...


Thanks a lot Bhai and nice one too ...
Keep it up ...


Shukriya Bhai,...

Jise Samjha Tha Maine Apna Sayaa Kabhi,..
Wo Bhi Andhere Mein Mera Saath Chord Chala,..
Humdard Banaakar Jise Apne Dil Ke Dard Bantaa,..
Sunkar Mera Haal Wo Mera Dil Tord Chala...

__________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #50 on: June 13, 2006, 01:13:59 PM »
Thanks a lot Mk, Janasheen and Pooja for appreciation ...
And welcome too ...
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«Reply #51 on: June 13, 2006, 01:18:03 PM »
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Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Saath to uska tere liye hardam rahega,
Teri tanhaai ka aalam ye JHL akela sahega,
Bas koi shikayat na rahegi na hi koi dard hoga,
Jo marte waqt gar teri aankh se ek aansu bahega ...


Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,..

Jab Jee Rahe Tha Main To Deedar Bhi Naseeb Na Hua,..
Jab Marr Jaoon To Kabhi Aansoon Na Bahana,..

_______________________________________-Jaanasheen-



Aansuo ko bahana is naachiz ke haath mein nahi,
Ye to khuda ki kudrat mein likha hai,
Nazm ke har ek lafz mein uske deedar ka ehsaas,
Maine usi zaalim se sikha hai ...
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«Reply #52 on: June 13, 2006, 01:30:42 PM »
bahut bahut khoob JHL........

nice allzz........
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Pooja
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«Reply #53 on: June 13, 2006, 02:13:30 PM »
good one Jsheen and JHL JI!!!
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mrkotians
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«Reply #54 on: June 13, 2006, 02:21:47 PM »
Nice one JHL...

aansu aa jate hain aankhon mein rone se pehle,
har qwab toot jate hain sone se pehle,
ishq hain gunah yeh toh samajh gaye,
kash koi rok leta yeh gunah hone se pehle.


Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Quote from: "Jaanasheen"
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Saath to uska tere liye hardam rahega,
Teri tanhaai ka aalam ye JHL akela sahega,
Bas koi shikayat na rahegi na hi koi dard hoga,
Jo marte waqt gar teri aankh se ek aansu bahega ...


Waah Bhai Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai,..

Jab Jee Rahe Tha Main To Deedar Bhi Naseeb Na Hua,..
Jab Marr Jaoon To Kabhi Aansoon Na Bahana,..

_______________________________________-Jaanasheen-



Aansuo ko bahana is naachiz ke haath mein nahi,
Ye to khuda ki kudrat mein likha hai,
Nazm ke har ek lafz mein uske deedar ka ehsaas,
Maine usi zaalim se sikha hai ...
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«Reply #55 on: June 13, 2006, 02:23:29 PM »
bahoot khoob MK ji!!
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«Reply #56 on: June 14, 2006, 12:14:50 PM »
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good one Jsheen and JHL JI!!!


Shukriya Pooja Sis,..
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«Reply #57 on: June 14, 2006, 12:21:21 PM »
Nice One Manjoo Bhai And JHL bhai,..

Nikle Jab Aashq Aankhon Se,..
Ek Baat Mere Dil Mein Uthi,..
Ke Ye Behte Hain Kisi Ki Hamdardi Paane ke Liye,...
Ya Phir Kisi Se Chot Khaane Ke Liye,..
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«Reply #58 on: June 14, 2006, 02:49:41 PM »
You com com Lil Bro Usual Smile

bahoot hi achi lines likhi hai Jsheen apne!!!

Ansoo ek zazbaat hai
her baat per bah jaate hai
dard ho ya mange humdardi
her khayal sung, bah jaate hai
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«Reply #59 on: June 15, 2006, 01:33:54 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
You com com Lil Bro Usual Smile

bahoot hi achi lines likhi hai Jsheen apne!!!

Ansoo ek zazbaat hai
her baat per bah jaate hai
dard ho ya mange humdardi
her khayal sung, bah jaate hai


Shukriya Didi....

Na Jaane Kyun Ye Aansoon Behte Hain,...
Inhein Dekh Kar Aksar Sab Ye Kehte Hain,..
Ke Ye Behte Bhi Hain To Unke Liye "Jaanasheen"
Jo In Palkon Ke Beech Rehte Hain,..

___________________________-Jaanasheen-
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