zakham

by Sonu on August 31, 2005, 04:08:43 AM
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Sonu
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zakham tumney bhi kahey hai jamaney key humari hee teraha,
eh-diley-pharamosh phark yahi hia ki tumney afsaney sunaye or hum muskuraye.
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2005, 06:42:28 AM »
nice one sonu jii.... 2 nd line thoda samaj me nahin aaya Usual Smile
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Sonu
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2005, 02:51:37 AM »
shukriay salma ji

zakham tumney bhi kahey hai jamaney key humari hee teraha,
eh-diley-pharamosh phark yahi hia ki tumney afsaney sunaye or hum muskuraye.

2line ka meaning yea hai key jo dil ki kader nahi kertey hai vo apni baat to ek kani ki thra khey jatey hia or jiskey dil per gujar rahi huti hia vo usko khushi deykh ker hee muskuraleytey hai. ager phir bhi samjh na ahey kuch word to puch leyna salna i will happy to tell u.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2005, 08:55:34 AM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
zakham tumney bhi kahey hai jamaney key humari hee teraha,
eh-diley-pharamosh phark yahi hia ki tumney afsaney sunaye or hum muskuraye.


wow  wow  very  touching  words  sonu........   tumhein  hum  jawaab  dene ki  kosis  kar  rahe hain......

ek  harf  tasalli  ka ,  ek  lafz mohabbat  ka
khud  apne liye  usne  likha to khoob roya
woh afasaane  sunakar  mehfil  mein to khoob hansa
khud ghar gaya to apni dastaan  yaad  karke khoob roya..............
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2005, 09:21:33 AM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
shukriay salma ji

zakham tumney bhi kahey hai jamaney key humari hee teraha,
eh-diley-pharamosh phark yahi hia ki tumney afsaney sunaye or hum muskuraye.

2line ka meaning yea hai key jo dil ki kader nahi kertey hai vo apni baat to ek kani ki thra khey jatey hia or jiskey dil per gujar rahi huti hia vo usko khushi deykh ker hee muskuraleytey hai. ager phir bhi samjh na ahey kuch word to puch leyna salna i will happy to tell you.


haan samaj gai sonu ji but still not clear ...anyhow nice one
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2005, 09:36:22 AM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
zakham tumney bhi kahey hai jamaney key humari hee teraha,
eh-diley-pharamosh phark yahi hia ki tumney afsaney sunaye or hum muskuraye.


nice Sonu ji ...

hum to zakhm ko samet ke khamosh the
logo ne hi iss sitamzarfi ke afasane bnaye
tu muskurake chupati hai un zakhmoon ko
humne bhi apne gharo mein mehkhane sjaye !!
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Meena
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2005, 03:53:23 PM »
wah wah!!!

sharab me dard ki bonde jo tum duboye ja rahe ho tum,
aram nahin milega isse, balke dil me kante chuboye ja rahe ho tum!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2005, 07:33:25 PM »
shukrya taklo acha jevab hai Usual Smile

acha waheed meyi kuch line salma ko samjh mey nahi ahya hia sheyd mey usey thik sey samjh anhia payee hoo to tum samjh do jera.

::::akser humney deykha hia key key vo afsaney sunaker mehphil mey khoob hastey hai,
leykin loog yea nahi jantye key vo jhuthi hasi hastey hia,
tanhayeoo mey jo rotey hai vo akser mehphilo mey muskuratey hia. ::::::

salma keya samjh mey nahi haya app puch sakti hia veysey waheed hai app ussey bhi puch sakti hai kheyna sonu ney kha hia key app sey puch ley to shyed vo thik sey explain kerdeyga apko phir bhi shukirya apko samjh mey nahi ahya mageer phir bhi apko achi lagi sahyri shukrya.

HUmtum ji very nice  

hum to zakhm ko samet ke khamosh the
logo ne hi iss sitamzarfi ke afasane bnaye
tu muskurake chupati hai un zakhmoon ko
humne bhi apne gharo mein mehkhane sjaye !!

::::mana key zakhm ko samet ker hum kamosh they,
 mager isa matlab yea nahi key hum tum sey anjaan thye,
tuhmarey afasno per bhi hum muskuraye mager apney zakhm to tumney nahi dekhaye,
tumney gharo mey mehkahney saja daley,
mager humney ghar mey ahsow key dariya bhaa daley. :::::
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Sonu
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2005, 07:38:49 PM »
menu kudiye beda vadiya likha heyga

dard-eh-gum etni diya humko key ab to sharab bhi aser nahi kerti hai,
meyhakahney mey to hum chaley jatye ahi mager sharab bhi kum ped jati hai,
doctor ney bhi jevab deydala humko,
humney teyrey pyar mey shrab ko jeyhar samjh ker pee dala hai.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2005, 06:26:20 PM »
Thanxxxxxxxxx  alot  Sonu..........   wonderfull  Reply.....

har taraf khamosi ka  saaya hai,
jindagi mein pyar kisne paaya hai,
hum yadon mein jhoomte hain aap ki,
aur jamana kahta hai dekho phir peekar aaya hai..
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Sonu
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2005, 09:28:23 PM »
u r most welcome waheed Usual Smile and thanks u like myreply:)

ab to jeysey jindig mey sirf kala andeyrow ka saya hai,
her kesi ney pyar mey dukha hee kahya hai,
yadoo key sahare jeena mushkil hai,
unki her baat yaad rakhker dil ko jalana hee hai,
meykahney valey bhi humsey katraney lagey hai,
hum jayda na peley esleya shrab humsey chupaney lagey hai.
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #11 on: September 03, 2005, 09:40:51 AM »
haan samaj gai sonu ji.....nice one all n  sonu ji........!!
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Sonu
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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2005, 05:30:19 PM »
u r welcome salma ji yeo hee likhti rahoo keep it up the good work.
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2005, 05:36:18 PM »
Quote from: "Sonu"
you r most welcome waheed Usual Smile and thanks you like myreply:)

ab to jeysey jindig mey sirf kala andeyrow ka saya hai,
her kesi ney pyar mey dukha hee kahya hai,
yadoo key sahare jeena mushkil hai,
unki her baat yaad rakhker dil ko jalana hee hai,
meykahney valey bhi humsey katraney lagey hai,
hum jayda na peley esleya shrab humsey chupaney lagey hai.


hmmmmmmm    bahot  khoob  sonu........  kya  baat hai..............

Ne raste mein hi thehreen na apne ghar jayeen
Ye fasle ki ghari hai chalo bikhar jayen
Tera wajood bhi sach hai magar hamein tum se
Wo ishq hai ke tujhe chookar hi mar jayen!
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Sonu
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2005, 04:15:15 AM »
shukirya waheed.....

ab huamrey beach fasley etney bad gaye hai key unhey kam nahi keya ja sakta hia,
gumo ki andhyo mey etnay bekhar gaye hai
key ab to apney app ko samat pana mushkil hai.
dil pey etney zakham meley hai key unhey marham lagana ab mushkil hia,
hum tumsey etni door hia ab key tumhey humey choo pana bhi namumkin hai.
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