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«Reply #15 on: May 29, 2006, 04:03:01 PM »

Quote from: "Pankhuri2"

wah kaya baat hai Meena, bahoot khoob!!

Jakham per jakham ka hisaab kab tak
apne hi ansoo ki barsaat kab tak
ched de agar koi kahani teri
phir gujarty waqat ka hisaab kab tak.........

shukriya ji and a very nice one!!!:D

zakhmo ko dekh kar aab anson nahin bahate,
kahi ashkon ke pani se zakhm pigal na jaye,
phir waqt ka intezaar rahega ke kab silenge zakhm,
tab tak zakhmo ki zubani unke raaz khul na jaye!


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«Reply #16 on: May 29, 2006, 04:05:51 PM »

Quote from: "ranjana"

bahut khub Meena ji.........Pankhuri ji...................

jindagi ka hisaab jab hum le ke bethe
tere saath jude har khawab ko le bethe
na jaane meri jindagi mujhe kahan le aayi
yahan sirf saye hai aur hai sirf meri tanhai

shukriya ranjana ji...bohot khoob!!

tanhai to apni hai, uski to hume aab adat hogayi,
gum aise milte hai jaise ansowon ki dawat hogayi!


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«Reply #17 on: May 29, 2006, 04:10:44 PM »

Quote from: "HumTum is back"

Meena -Ji ... meiney kha kya baat hai ..... another beauty !! hummmmm mein bhi kucch likhunga !!

Dard-e-dil ne mere kabhi qaraar na paya
Intzaar hi rha mere naseeb, yaar na aaya

Ashq meri nigahoN se behte hai jiski kahtir
Kabhi lout ke mere pas mera pyar na aaya

Zinda hoon lekin jene ki ada bhul gya hoon
De mere dil ko khushi, woh sansaar na aaya !! [/color]

shukriya humtum ji..aab apki kya tareef kare, jitni karongi kam hogi!!

hal-e-dil tumne kabhi hume sunaya nahin,
shayad tumne apne yaar ko dil se kabhi bhulaya nahin,

ashk baha kar na mitao dil se uska nam,
jane kya majboori ti jo tumne use apnaya nahin,

na rohko zindagi ki ghadi ek maud pe aye dost,
rukhne wale ne kabhi apni manzil ka rasta kabhi paya nahiN!


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«Reply #18 on: May 29, 2006, 04:11:19 PM »

salma sis... oh thank u kuddiye!! :D

manu ji...shukriya manu ji acha likha apne!! :D


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«Reply #19 on: May 30, 2006, 02:13:46 AM »

bahoot khOOB HumTum, Mannu, Ranju and Meena!!!


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«Reply #20 on: May 30, 2006, 07:51:24 AM »

Quote from: "Mrs HumTum"

Mrs HumTum ji .... yeh kya ke mujh jaseey zarre ko aap aftaab kehne lage ... bhalla aap ki shayri ke aage hamari shayri kya hai ...... dekhiye na kitna ahccha likha hai aap ne ....... hummm chaliye hum bhi kucch likhte hai !!

Di bahut si sadayien meiney par woh lout ke na aaya
Har roz khila ummed ka phool, khil ke phir murjaya

Tanhaii meri kismat mein likh di hai rab ne, shayaad !
Aayi jo yaad yaar ki batien to har baat pe rona aaya

Na ab kissi manzil ki hai tam_mna, na raste ki justzu
Aye dost ab humne naqaamiyoN se hai rishta banaya !!


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«Reply #21 on: May 30, 2006, 07:59:21 AM »

wonderfull...kamaal ka likha hai aap dono ne Mrs. Humtum :wink: n Mr. Humtum...


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«Reply #22 on: May 30, 2006, 08:01:39 AM »

ShukriyaN Choti ki bachi !!


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«Reply #23 on: May 30, 2006, 10:14:05 AM »

Wahh bohat acha likha hai sabhi ne,very nice meena sis,keep writing Usual Smile


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Re: hi

«Reply #24 on: May 30, 2006, 10:36:20 AM »

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hi meena ji ranju ji pamkhuriji well done everybody
ye shayad sab ko mera jawaab hai

Aa mere asko ko tere jakhmo ka marham kar du
Gham-e-ulfaat ki in khalisho ko thoda kam kar du

Tere nigaaho se jo tapke taar-e-ashk ki barsaate
Dost ban ke teri jist bahaaro ka mausam kar du

khwaayish hai,teri gham-e-zindagi ki raftaar sahi
meri khushiyo mai milaa kar jara madham kar du

yun to mil jaayenge kahi gair tujhe apna karne wale
mai in rishto se pare hamdam tujhe paiham kar du

En nazar paak mil jaaye teri mere jism-o-jaan ko
Lahoo ka bahta hua katra katra jara shabnam kar du

Seems you don't like my poetry .. didn't mention my name :lol:

kahir ... app ko hum jawab dete hai !!

Mit gaya jab mitne wala phir salam aayaa to kya
Dil ki barbaadi ke baad unka payam aayaa to kya

De ke gam-e-hayaat, khnop pe kangar peeth pe
Mere hayat pe unko rona sar-e-aam aayaa to kya

Saans ukhadi aas tutii chaa gaya jab rang-e-yaas
Baad-e-qayamat tere khat mere naam aayaa to kya

Mil gya woh Khaak mein jis dil mein tha arman-e-diid
Ab tera mere dayaar pe koi salaam aayaa to kya

Sehte rehy hai zakhm raah-e-naqaam-e-ishq mein
Tu sangdil meri naqamiyooN ke baad aayaa to kya !! [/color]

ye raha aap ka jawaab humtum ji

Jab bhi aaye vo kuchh pyaare salaam le ke aaye
Meri mahobbat ka rah rah kar anjaam le ke aaye

Jurm kya tha mera izhaar-e-tamanna ke sivaa
Vo aaye to saath khaamosh jubaan le ke aaye

mai afsurdaga raha hu zindagi se har dam har pal
apne sath vo khushiyo ka paigaam le ke aaye

Uzadi hai fasal mahobbat ki dil ki banzar zameen par
kaise ummido mai nigaaho ka aasmaan le ke aaye

mai ajnabii sa rahta hu arso se apne hi shahr mai
koi kahi se khusbuo ke khat mere naam le ke aaye

mere paas ab meri tanhaaiyo ke sivaa kuchh bhi nahi hai
mere paas vo meri bichhdi hui pahchaan le ke aaye

regards
take care
manu


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«Reply #25 on: May 31, 2006, 12:01:03 PM »

Manu1979 ji.. aap aaye bahar aayi .. yeh lijiye aap ka jawab !!!

Ab to ghabra ke kehte hai ke hum mar jayege
Mar ke bhi hume chain na mila to kidar jayege

woh nahin hum jo kare dava khoon ka tum par
Gar alaah ne bhi puccha to hum mukar jayege

Bijli ki manid shola-e-aah ko chamka to du lekin
Mujhye yeh dar hai ke woh dekh ke dar jayege

Na dund paoge kahi bhi nishaaN hamara, sanam
Hum is duniya se yun ravish-e-tiir-e-nazar jayege

Rovoge zaar zaar apni hi bewffaiyooN pe har dum
Iss kadar tere dil mein hum ghar apna kar jayege

Aaj jinki ankhooN ko samundar sa bna dete ho
Kal ko woh tumko tere ansuooN mein nazar aayge !!

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«Reply #26 on: June 03, 2006, 05:48:15 PM »

shukriya nidhi kuddiye...

gud going humtum ji aur manu ji...

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«Reply #27 on: June 05, 2006, 05:04:33 PM »

Quote from: "Meena is back"

Ek koshish...

Tanhai ke raston pe chal pade hum bin manzil ke,
Ke kisi ki hefil me humara koi basera nahin,

Gairon me aur apno me fark karna chod diya humne,
Ke dikhta kisi ke ankh me hume aab wafa ka chehre nahin,

Gumon ke andero me hua na roshni se milna kabhi,
Shayad isslyie jante hum ehesas-e-sawera nahin,

Aab na ansoon bahayenge „Meena“ dard-e-dariya me,
Ke koi bhi zakhm aab mera itna gehra nahin!

Bohot khoob Meena....!!

Good ones by all friends - Humtum, Manu, Pooja !


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«Reply #28 on: June 07, 2006, 04:15:27 PM »

shukriya ji shukriya!!

:D


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