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Tum se milta hun to is soch main per jata hun
Wakt ke paaun main zanjeer main daalun kese.
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2011, 11:22:10 AM » |
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Tum se milta hun to is soch main per jata hun
Wakt ke paaun main zanjeer main daalun kese.
accha nhi lga mujhe ! Blke bahut bahut bahut accha lga. |
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Dil Shah
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2011, 11:25:12 AM » |
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ohhhhhh sukriyaaa dost......
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2011, 11:26:35 AM » |
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Dil Shah jee! buhat khoob sher hay...
agar shairi aap ki apni na ho... tu behtar hay Yoidia k asool k mutabik us k saath NM likh diya kejay...
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Dil Shah
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2011, 11:27:49 AM » |
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Miltey To Abb Bhi Hain Lekin Pheley Waali Baat Nahin
Khuda Jaaney Woh Badley Hain Ya Humarey Woh Jazbaat Nahin….
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2011, 11:29:54 AM » |
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Heartly soorrry. next time i ll do it....
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2011, 11:33:00 AM » |
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nahi Dil Shah jee! maazerat ki na zaroorat hay na jaga... aap agar kisi k qasoor-vaar ho saktay hain.. tu wo faqat us shaair k jo is sher k likhnay walay hain.. so maamla un shaair aur aap ka hay.. hum ne faqat mashwara diya...
maazerat k saath...
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2011, 11:37:29 AM » |
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"gun-gunati rahegi inhe tu sadaa
itne nagme tere naam kar jayenge"
wahhhhhhhh bahut khub....
na geet thi na gazal thi na sangit thi yaaro
bus uska yu hi gun-gunana achha laga....
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2011, 06:16:15 PM » |
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nice sharing
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«Reply #9 on: August 24, 2011, 06:44:54 PM » |
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Tum se milta hun to is soch main per jata hun
Wakt ke paaun main zanjeer main daalun kese.
khoob kaha |
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2011, 04:19:13 AM » |
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sukriyaaa aap sabhi ka....
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2011, 04:53:48 AM » |
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NICE Miltey To Abb Bhi Hain Lekin Pheley Waali Baat Nahin
Khuda Jaaney Woh Badley Hain Ya Humarey Woh Jazbaat Nahin….
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2011, 04:56:11 AM » |
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KISI SHAYER NE BAKHUB KAHA HAI AAJ GUNGUNAAYE USNE MERE SHER AAJ APNI SHAYERI ACCHI LAGI (NM) "gun-gunati rahegi inhe tu sadaa
itne nagme tere naam kar jayenge"
wahhhhhhhh bahut khub....
na geet thi na gazal thi na sangit thi yaaro
bus uska yu hi gun-gunana achha laga....
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2011, 05:07:54 AM » |
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WAH MANOJ JI BAHUT KHUB YAAR.
MUJE BAHUT ACHHA LAG RAHA HE IS COMMUNITY KO JOIN KARKE.
BAHUT SUKUN OR KHUSI MEHSUS KAR RAHA HU.....
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2011, 05:10:28 AM » |
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KHUDA SE AB KAISE KARE HUM KOI GILA KOI TO MANOJ HAME BHI HASNE WALA MILA WAH MANOJ JI BAHUT KHUB YAAR.
MUJE BAHUT ACHHA LAG RAHA HE IS COMMUNITY KO JOIN KARKE.
BAHUT SUKUN OR KHUSI MEHSUS KAR RAHA HU.....
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