zarraa .... uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh

by zarraa on June 07, 2013, 01:51:45 AM
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dostoN ... aadaab .... ek puraanee ghazal, jo ab tak is bazm meiN haazir naheeN ho saki hai, use pesh kar raha hooN ... kyuNki iska beher thorha sa uncommon hai, isliye zaahir kar raha hooN ... 1222/1222/122...is beher ki ek missal janaab mehdi hassan sahab ki gaayee huwee shayar hafeez ki mashhoor ghazal hai .... mohabbat karne waale kam na hoNge...


khushee ka saaz-o-saamaaN hai na kam kuchh
magar tera bhi hai phir ek gham kuchh

(saaz-o-saamaaN : possessions/a set of material things)


barhe hi ja rahe un ke sitam kuchh
uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh


chale hi ja rahe raah-e-junooN par
khule hi ja raha chaaheiN bharam kuchh


na to roka na dekha deed bhar ke
zabaaN thi khushk aur aaNkheN theeN nam kuchh


tere ahed-e-wafaa par naaz karte
tawakko-e-wafaa karte na hum kuchh

(ahed = promise, naaz = pride, tawakko : expectation/hope)


kiya ruswaa  mujhe ehsaan tera
sabak the seekh’ne mujh ko aham kuchh

(ruswa = disgraced)


dukaaneiN khol leeN logoN ne kitneeN
unheiN jo mil gaye dair-o-haram kuchh

(dair-o-haram = places of worship)


milee hai koh-e-din ko kaat kar ye
jamaal-e-mayy naheeN sheereeN se kam kuchh

(koh = mountain, jamaal = beauty, may = liquor)


meree maano to wo r’sta badalna
mileiN “zarraa” ke jo naqsh-e-qadam kuchh

(naqsh-e-qadam = footprints)


- ZARRAA
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«Reply #1 on: June 07, 2013, 02:10:09 AM »
Quote from: zarraa on June 07, 2013, 01:51:45 AM

khushee ka saaz-o-saamaaN hai na kam kuchh.           magar tera bhi hai phir ek gham kuchh

- ZARRAA


walaikum Aadaab Janaab
Wah Kya Khub Kaha Maza Aa Gaya
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shad o aabaad rahiye


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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2013, 02:29:51 AM »
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Behtreen!Waah Waah.Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2013, 02:36:30 AM »
waah! umdaa ashaar!
daad!
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2013, 02:48:36 AM »
Quote from: zarraa on June 07, 2013, 01:51:45 AM
dostoN ... aadaab .... ek puraanee ghazal, jo ab tak is bazm meiN haazir naheeN ho saki hai, use pesh kar raha hooN ... kyuNki iska beher thorha sa uncommon hai, isliye zaahir kar raha hooN ... 1222/1222/122...is beher ki ek missal janaab mehdi hassan sahab ki gaayee huwee shayar hafeez ki mashhoor ghazal hai .... mohabbat karne waale kam na hoNge...


khushee ka saaz-o-saamaaN hai na kam kuchh
magar tera bhi hai phir ek gham kuchh

(saaz-o-saamaaN : possessions/a set of material things)


barhe hi ja rahe un ke sitam kuchh
uthaanaa bhool baithe sar bhi hum kuchh


chale hi ja rahe raah-e-junooN par
khule hi ja raha chaaheiN bharam kuchh


na to roka na dekha deed bhar ke
zabaaN thi khushk aur aaNkheN theeN nam kuchh


tere ahed-e-wafaa par naaz karte
tawakko-e-wafaa karte na hum kuchh

(ahed = promise, naaz = pride, tawakko : expectation/hope)


kiya ruswaa  mujhe ehsaan tera
sabak the seekh’ne mujh ko aham kuchh

(ruswa = disgraced)


dukaaneiN khol leeN logoN ne kitneeN
unheiN jo mil gaye dair-o-haram kuchh

(dair-o-haram = places of worship)


milee hai koh-e-din ko kaat kar ye
jamaal-e-mayy naheeN sheereeN se kam kuchh

(koh = mountain, jamaal = beauty, may = liquor)


meree maano to wo r’sta badalna
mileiN “zarraa” ke jo naqsh-e-qadam kuchh

(naqsh-e-qadam = footprints)


- ZARRAA


Wah,Wah,Wah Zarra sahab,
Bahut umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2013, 11:27:29 AM »
Zarra sahib , Ek alag radeef o qaqfiye mein achhi ghazal se nawaza hai.
Bahut mubarakbaad pesh hai.
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2013, 11:32:16 AM »
bohut khub zarra jo bohut umda peshkash
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2013, 01:51:53 PM »
Quote from: Shihab on June 07, 2013, 02:10:09 AM
walaikum Aadaab Janaab
Wah Kya Khub Kaha Maza Aa Gaya
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shad o aabaad rahiye

Shihab ji .... Apki daad aur duaon ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon



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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2013, 02:18:33 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 07, 2013, 02:29:51 AM
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Behtreen!Waah Waah.Bahut Khoob.

Apka bahaut bahaut shukriya Ravindera ji
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2013, 02:38:23 PM »
Na jane kitne sher padhe, nazm padhe...!!

dil ko chhoone wali ye kalaam kaam kar gayi...!!


bahut bahut aur bahut umda zarra ji.. Usual Smile

beshumaar daad kubul kare..

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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2013, 02:49:00 PM »
bahut alag aur bahut umda likha hai janaab, is mukammal ghazal pe meri dili daad qubool farmaayeN janaab...
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«Reply #11 on: June 07, 2013, 05:45:55 PM »
tere ahed-e-wafaa par naaz karte
tawakko-e-wafaa karte na hum kuchh

kiya ruswaa  mujhe ehsaan tera
sabak the seekh’ne mujh ko aham kuchh

dukaaneiN khol leeN logoN ne kitneeN
unheiN jo mil gaye dair-o-haram kuchh

Bahut khoob Zarra saheb
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2013, 07:02:50 PM »
Quote from: @Kaash on June 07, 2013, 02:36:30 AM
waah! umdaa ashaar!
daad!
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Hauslafzaayee ka shukriya Kaash ji
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2013, 08:22:54 PM »
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waah zarra ji. bahut hi umda peshkash rahi. hazaron dili daad qubool kare.
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«Reply #14 on: June 08, 2013, 01:35:06 AM »
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 07, 2013, 02:48:36 AM
Wah,Wah,Wah Zarra sahab,
Bahut umda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

Sudhir ji .... inaayat apki sahab ... Hauslafzaayee ka shukriya
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