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SURESH SANGWAN
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Itna de diya ubaal ki paani hawa ho gaya.
Itna de diya dard ke wo dawaa ho gayaa.
pyar khushboo hai bikhar gaya har taraf.
khataa ye hui ki jazbaa bayaan ho gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2010, 02:21:46 PM » |
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KYA baat Hai SUresh ji bhut Khoob!!!!!!!!!
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2010, 02:25:28 PM » |
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shukriya neelgold ji.pasand farmaane ka. KYA baat Hai SUresh ji bhut Khoob!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2010, 03:09:53 PM » |
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wah suresh sahab kya qoob qitta hai , behad pasand aya .. Zazba se muraad shayad Jazba hai .. waise dil apni jaga hazir hai .. qubool kijiye .. khush rahen muskurate rahe ..
khadim ...
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2010, 03:28:54 PM » |
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Wah kya baat hai Suresh Sangwan ji........
tu deta hai jitna gum chupchap sahete hai ham
tere liye jeete hai tere liye hi niklega dam
aaj tak ye baat kisiko na bataey ham
najaane kyun khudko aaj mehfil mein rok na paye "Zazbaa bayaan hogay"....
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2010, 05:34:41 PM » |
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bohut khub suresh ji
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2010, 07:12:09 PM » |
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Bahut achche Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2010, 11:15:14 PM » |
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Itna de diya ubaal ki paani hawa ho gaya.
bahot achhe .. wah |
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2010, 01:42:27 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: April 12, 2010, 06:48:40 AM » |
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Bahot khoob Suresh ji. Bahot khoobsurat kavita hai aur purkashish andaaz.Itna de diya ubaal ki paani hawa ho gaya.
Itna de diya dard ke wo dawaa ho gayaa.
pyar khushboo hai bikhar gaya har taraf.
khataa ye hui ki jazbaa bayaan ho gaya.
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2010, 07:16:58 AM » |
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good one suresh jee
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2010, 08:52:48 AM » |
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Humesha Ki tarah..
Bahut Khoob Sureshji.. 
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2010, 08:56:28 AM » |
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Itna de diya ubaal ki paani hawa ho gaya.
Itna de diya dard ke wo dawaa ho gayaa.
pyar khushboo hai bikhar gaya har taraf.
khataa ye hui ki jazbaa bayaan ho gaya.
Bahut Khoob Suresh Ji |
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2010, 06:38:21 AM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya qadeer junaid ji. ki aapko zazbaa pasand aaya. wah suresh sahab kya qoob qitta hai , behad pasand aya .. Zazba se muraad shayad Jazba hai .. waise dil apni jaga hazir hai .. qubool kijiye .. khush rahen muskurate rahe ..
khadim ...
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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2010, 06:41:36 AM » |
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on eTI community..
