~~"ZIKAR-E-ZINDAGI"~~

by k.shael on March 06, 2009, 09:57:32 AM
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Kismate apni apni hai sabki haathon me,
Mere hisse me jo aaya wo gamm tha,

Shehad si ghuli lagti hai sabki baton me,
Maine jo jikar-e-zindagi sunaya wo jehar tha,

Aakhiyaan neend se lipti hai sabki raaton me,
Meri aankhon ne jo piya raat bhar wo ashqo ka
sailaab tha,

Mukkamal jahaan tha mila sabko chahton me,
Koso door chalne ke baad bhi jo mila mujhe
aashiyaan wo viraan tha…

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: March 06, 2009, 10:29:54 AM »
Quote from: k.shael on March 06, 2009, 09:57:32 AM
Kismate apni apni hai sabki haathon me,
Mere hisse me jo aaya wo gamm tha,

Shehad si ghuli lagti hai sabki baton me,
Maine jo jikar-e-zindagi sunaya wo jehar tha,

Aakhiyaan neend se lipti hai sabki raaton me,
Meri aankhon ne jo piya raat bhar wo ashqo ka
sailaab tha,

Mukkamal jahaan tha mila sabko chahton me,
Koso door chalne ke baad bhi jo mila mujhe
aashiyaan wo viraan tha…

Shally.


wah wah shally, bahut khoob

jasbir singh
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2009, 11:12:59 AM »
Bohot Khoob Shally..Keep writing dear.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2009, 11:17:33 AM »
Very Very nice Shally..
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2009, 12:38:58 PM »
bahot bahot bahot ahche shally! so very nice! bahot pasand aaya muhje! keep it up!
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2009, 04:25:35 PM »
Wah! Shally Ji, Bahut khoob likha aapne
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2009, 04:44:49 PM »
ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai shally.. good work dear...

Befikar se chalti rahi samjh kar zindagi tujhko apna
chalte waqat ne sikhaya, apna bhi nahi hai koi apna
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2009, 04:45:19 PM »
Bohat khoob K.shael.. Clapping Smiley

Teri bato pe daya nahi, apni kismat pe hasi aati hain
Mera nam rak_kha hain khushi, aur mujhe hi apna dard sunati hain

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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2009, 05:12:06 PM »
bhot khob  shalyy
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2009, 05:21:47 PM »


HATHOH MEH LIKHA THA, WOH TOH HONA THA
ISKEY AAGEY MERA SIRR TOH JHUKNA THA
NA THI MERI MANJIL MERI RAHOH MEH
PAR HUMNEY TOH KADAM BADATE CHALNA THA



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #10 on: March 06, 2009, 09:48:56 PM »
Bahaut khoob Shally...too good Applause ApplauseEqually good Pooja jee, Jasbir jee aur Ghayel saheb... Applause

Main jisse apna jahan samaj ke jeeta tha,
Wohi mere dil ka behrahem katil nikla,
Samajta tha jisse Khuda Rahim mohobat main,
Wohi meri tabahi ki dua karne wala Khuda ka moman nikla...
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2009, 05:45:17 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally.. Applause Applause Applause

Bahut ache Jasbir paaji.. Applause Applause

Nice lines Pooja,rahim bhai & Sajid saheb..
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«Reply #12 on: March 07, 2009, 08:38:18 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Shallyji,Poojaji Applause Applause Applause
Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bhai Jasbirji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 07, 2009, 08:52:28 AM »
Quote from: Shihab on March 07, 2009, 08:31:46 AM
Good Job Shael Ji Kafi Dard Bhara Hai Ji
Khair Kuch Likhne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon
Galti Maaf Ho Ji..


Jeevan To Mere Dost Bas Ik Samjhouta Hai.
Kisi Bhi Haal Main Ho Ise Jeena Hota Hai.

Bohat Katthin Hota Hai Yun To Ise Harana.
Par Dard Kaisa Bhi Ho Ise Sehna Hota Hai.

Is Qadar Zindagi Se Haara Nahi Karet Kabhi
Yahan Andhero Ke Sang Ujjala Bhi Hota Hain.

Jarur Hogi Dekhna Ik Din Mukammal Duniya Aapki
Bas.e.Dost Yun Umeed Ko Chhoda Nahi Karte Hain
Nice One Shihab Sahab Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 08, 2009, 10:59:50 AM »
Shukriya Pank jee aur Khwahish bhaijan...
Very good lines Shihab saheb... Applause Applause
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