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by umraan on August 23, 2009, 11:37:54 AM
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umraan
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~ tearyeyed~Uun sukun dil ko nhi ,kashmkash mai hum hai,
dhuniya kehti hai ki tere har Zikrr mai hum hai,

reh reh ke tut padta hai sailaab-e-ashk,
tere halaat ki wajah mai kahi shamil hum hai,

khud kiya nhi kaid thi majburiyon me,
tere Ishq-e-katilon me ab shumaar hum hai,

sizde me sur jhuka mangte hai teri khushiya,
ab apni hi takdeer ke rakeeb hum hai,

humraaz sahi humraahi na ban sake,
muaaf kar ki tere gum ki ibtida me hum hai...
tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2009, 06:59:48 AM »
bahut acche Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Jhuki Palkein
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2009, 07:06:23 AM »
Very Nice Dear .
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2009, 07:28:58 AM »
bahoooooooooot khoob
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2009, 08:09:59 AM »
Bahut khoob Umraan ji wonderful creation. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2009, 11:38:36 AM »
~ tearyeyed~Uun sukun dil ko nhi ,kashmkash mai hum hai,
dhuniya kehti hai ki tere har Zikrr mai hum hai,

reh reh ke tut padta hai sailaab-e-ashk,
tere halaat ki wajah mai kahi shamil hum hai,

khud kiya nhi kaid thi majburiyon me,
tere Ishq-e-katilon me ab shumaar hum hai,

sizde me sur jhuka mangte hai teri khushiya,
ab apni hi takdeer ke rakeeb hum hai,

humraaz sahi humraahi na ban sake,
muaaf kar ki tere gum ki ibtida me hum hai...
tearyeyed



bhut khoob keep writing...............
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umraan
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2009, 10:28:24 AM »
 Thankyou ! Thankyou !   
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2009, 12:59:08 PM »
Bahoot Bahot Khoob Umraan ji.. Keep writing....
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umraan
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2009, 05:28:34 PM »
Bahoot Bahot Khoob Umraan ji.. Keep writing....

SHUKRIYA SOPHI JI...HOSLA AFZAI KA...
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