Zinda Jala Raha Hai Koi

by Meena on April 10, 2005, 04:33:17 PM
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Meena
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Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope u will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2005, 04:38:19 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


wah!!!!!  meena  ..........bahot  khoob...............

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi

excellent  ..............lines........................  superbbbbbbbbbb
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2005, 05:07:19 PM »
shukriya....ji.....shukriya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2005, 10:38:17 PM »
Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!! Wah, Meena Bohat hi khoob.... aapki next post ka bechaini se intezaar rahe ga...
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nikki
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2005, 10:48:51 PM »
woderfull Meena sis...lekin kuch der ke liye aakhri poem...y?Huh?Huh???

tumhari kya tareef karon.....tareef tumhare liye kum hai......bahut hi acha likhti ho sis.....likhti rehna...keep the good work comming...
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2005, 10:52:17 PM »
MEENA NICE POETRY YAAR....................



 WE WILL MISS YOUR POSTS............


COME BACK SOON:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
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HumTum
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2005, 09:22:09 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


isspe kuch arz ker paya hooN.....

Dekar sdaayein pyar ki humney bula rha hai koi
mujhi se meri Rooh ko chura rha hai koi

Ja rha tha issi bharam mein ke ab to koi nhi hai mera
Aah sunker jo pecchey dekha, to AnssoN bha rha hai koi

Doobey huye they yun gam-e-smunder mein "HumTum"
bdda ke aaj hath apna, humney utha rha hai koi

janey usko mujh mein kya aaya hai nazar, ke yun
ker ke roshn raho ko, zindgi dhikha rha hai koi

Be-asar thi sab DuayaaN, andero mein thi zindgi
le ke diya hathoN mein, mujhey roshni dikha rha hai koi

Gar jalta hooN mein to pahuunccti hai tapish usko
sath mere yeh rishta kaissa bna rha hai koi

Jab bhi chalta hooN raah mein, to hota hai yeh gumaan
sma ker mujh mein sath mere, cla aa rha hai koi

Khuda usko mehfuuz rhakhey, jhaaN ki sab blayooN se
jo meri bla ko apney sir liye ja rha hai koi..........

HumTum
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2005, 09:26:38 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


superb meena as always,but i m sad,do come back soon,we are going 2 miss u a lot sad5 Take care.

Very nice humyum and waheed also.
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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2005, 03:28:49 PM »
shukriya aryaan ji, nikki, naveed and nidhi sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well kuch mood u udas tha....par i will  def try to write more stuff!!!!

 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2005, 03:30:04 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


isspe kuch arz ker paya hooN.....

Dekar sdaayein pyar ki humney bula rha hai koi
mujhi se meri Rooh ko chura rha hai koi

Ja rha tha issi bharam mein ke ab to koi nhi hai mera
Aah sunker jo pecchey dekha, to AnssoN bha rha hai koi

Doobey huye they yun gam-e-smunder mein "HumTum"
bdda ke aaj hath apna, humney utha rha hai koi

janey usko mujh mein kya aaya hai nazar, ke yun
ker ke roshn raho ko, zindgi dhikha rha hai koi

Be-asar thi sab DuayaaN, andero mein thi zindgi
le ke diya hathoN mein, mujhey roshni dikha rha hai koi

Gar jalta hooN mein to pahuunccti hai tapish usko
sath mere yeh rishta kaissa bna rha hai koi

Jab bhi chalta hooN raah mein, to hota hai yeh gumaan
sma ker mujh mein sath mere, cla aa rha hai koi

Khuda usko mehfuuz rhakhey, jhaaN ki sab blayooN se
jo meri bla ko apney sir liye ja rha hai koi..........

HumTum


wahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! just a great and wonderful and super duper and uff uff poem!!!!!!!!!! app to kama kar dete hai har nazm ka jawab shayari me!!!! bohot bohot acha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2005, 03:43:25 AM »

Wafaa ke waade wo saare bhula gaya chup chaap
Woh mere dil ki deewaarien hila gaya chup chaap
Gham-e-hayaat k tap-te huwe bayabaan mein
Hamein woh choar ke tanha chala gaya chup chaap
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HumTum
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2005, 08:43:08 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


isspe kuch arz ker paya hooN.....

Dekar sdaayein pyar ki humney bula rha hai koi
mujhi se meri Rooh ko chura rha hai koi

Ja rha tha issi bharam mein ke ab to koi nhi hai mera
Aah sunker jo pecchey dekha, to AnssoN bha rha hai koi

Doobey huye they yun gam-e-smunder mein "HumTum"
bdda ke aaj hath apna, humney utha rha hai koi

janey usko mujh mein kya aaya hai nazar, ke yun
ker ke roshn raho ko, zindgi dhikha rha hai koi

Be-asar thi sab DuayaaN, andero mein thi zindgi
le ke diya hathoN mein, mujhey roshni dikha rha hai koi

Gar jalta hooN mein to pahuunccti hai tapish usko
sath mere yeh rishta kaissa bna rha hai koi

Jab bhi chalta hooN raah mein, to hota hai yeh gumaan
sma ker mujh mein sath mere, cla aa rha hai koi

Khuda usko mehfuuz rhakhey, jhaaN ki sab blayooN se
jo meri bla ko apney sir liye ja rha hai koi..........

HumTum


wahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! just a great and wonderful and super duper and uff uff poem!!!!!!!!!! app to kama kar dete hai har nazm ka jawab shayari me!!!! bohot bohot acha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D


cheers  :wink:
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Meena
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«Reply #12 on: April 13, 2005, 03:25:20 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"

Wafaa ke waade wo saare bhula gaya chup chaap
Woh mere dil ki deewaarien hila gaya chup chaap
Gham-e-hayaat k tap-te huwe bayabaan mein
Hamein woh choar ke tanha chala gaya chup chaap


wah wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bohot hi ache!!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: April 13, 2005, 03:43:59 PM »
bahot  khoob  ....hum  tum ....meena....aryan.....

:lol:
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2005, 11:40:27 PM »
Bohat bohat shukriya Meena & Waheed..........
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