Zinda Jala Raha Hai Koi

by Meena on April 10, 2005, 04:33:17 PM
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stalin
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«Reply #30 on: April 18, 2005, 12:44:20 PM »
"dushman ke har fareb se wakif to hoon main
 ahbab ke khuloos se ghabra raha hoon main"
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #31 on: April 24, 2005, 01:07:55 PM »
Good job everyone ...
Keep writing ...

Udaan bhar hawaao mein,
Ya lagaa gota samundar mein,
Tujhke utna hi milega,
Jitna likha hai muqaddar main ......
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #32 on: April 26, 2005, 04:00:06 AM »
Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,


Meena Ji.....

yun jaane ki baat kutch aachi nahi lagi......dard ka pata......dard hi jaanta hai.....

dard pe wah no nahi kahoonga....lekin kalaam pe wah jaroor hai....

khush rahiye......gam aapse door rahen....

duwaaon ke saath.....
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dhir
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«Reply #33 on: April 26, 2005, 08:12:29 AM »
JAL KAR BHI AFTAB HO GAYE HUM TERE PYAR MEIN MAHTAB HO GAYE
JAB KABHI DIL KI RAHON NE PUKARA HUMEIN HUM TERE TALABGAR HO GAYE
JAMANE NE SATAYA HUMEIN PHIR BHI HUM TERE HUMNAVAB HO GAYE.
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Meena
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«Reply #34 on: April 27, 2005, 03:56:15 PM »
Quote from: "Aman_rahi"
Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,


Meena Ji.....

yun jaane ki baat kutch aachi nahi lagi......dard ka pata......dard hi jaanta hai.....

dard pe wah no nahi kahoonga....lekin kalaam pe wah jaroor hai....

khush rahiye......gam aapse door rahen....

duwaaon ke saath.....


thank u ji thank u!!
 :D
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Meena
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«Reply #35 on: April 27, 2005, 03:56:42 PM »
Quote from: "dhir"
JAL KAR BHI AFTAB HO GAYE HUM TERE PYAR MEIN MAHTAB HO GAYE
JAB KABHI DIL KI RAHON NE PUKARA HUMEIN HUM TERE TALABGAR HO GAYE
JAMANE NE SATAYA HUMEIN PHIR BHI HUM TERE HUMNAVAB HO GAYE.


nice one dhir ji!!

 :D
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #36 on: April 30, 2005, 04:37:23 PM »
wow  excellent  work  all.....................:lol:  sabhi logon ne  bahot accha likha hai ...........:lol:
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Amanush...
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«Reply #37 on: April 30, 2005, 05:44:42 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


Hamesha ki tarah...Bahout hi behtareen! Meena ji!

Younhi likhte rahiyega...

Amanush...
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Meena
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«Reply #38 on: April 30, 2005, 06:43:00 PM »
Quote from: "Amanush..."
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


Hamesha ki tarah...Bahout hi behtareen! Meena ji!

Younhi likhte rahiyega...

Amanush...


shukriya amanush ji!!!! aap ki nazar hai jo aisa lagta ha iwarna hum kya cheez hai!

 :D
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #39 on: May 06, 2005, 01:06:18 PM »
Good job evreyone ...
Keep writing all ...


Hamare pyaar ka unhone afasana banaa diya,
Unki nigaaho ne hame deewana banaa diya,
Anjaana tha mein saaki ki mehfil mein,
Lekin ek ghoont jaam ne hame begaana banaa diya ...


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Afsana pyaar ka banta rahega,
Deewana pyaar ke saagar mein behta rahega,
Pi chuke bahut saaki teri mehfil mein,
Nashe mein ab ye begaana jhoomta rahega ......
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #40 on: May 07, 2005, 10:19:36 AM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Good job evreyone ...
Keep writing all ...


Hamare pyaar ka unhone afasana banaa diya,
Unki nigaaho ne hame deewana banaa diya,
Anjaana tha mein saaki ki mehfil mein,
Lekin ek ghoont jaam ne hame begaana banaa diya ...


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Afsana pyaar ka banta rahega,
Deewana pyaar ke saagar mein behta rahega,
Pi chuke bahut saaki teri mehfil mein,
Nashe mein ab ye begaana jhoomta rahega ......


bahot  khoob...........brother........Just_Hate_Love
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Pooja
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«Reply #41 on: August 16, 2007, 05:24:18 PM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
Quote from: "Meena"
Hello dosto, kuch der ke liye yeh meri akhri poem hogi. hope you will like it!!!

Woh dekho door humse ja raha hai koi,
Tanhai ke samundar me hume duba raha hai koi,

Wafa ke kisse to bohot pade kitabo me humne,
Aaj bewafai ke sur gunguna raha tha koi,

Gumon ki aag se pehle hi zakhmi hua hai jism mera,
Ke haath me liye mashal phir se zinda jala raha hai koi,

Shayari ki duniya me zinda rakhte te apne wajood ko hum,
Chod kar iss duniya ko apne sang hume leja raha hai ko !!!


isspe kuch arz ker paya hooN.....

Dekar sdaayein pyar ki humney bula rha hai koi
mujhi se meri Rooh ko chura rha hai koi

Ja rha tha issi bharam mein ke ab to koi nhi hai mera
Aah sunker jo pecchey dekha, to AnssoN bha rha hai koi

Doobey huye they yun gam-e-smunder mein "HumTum"
bdda ke aaj hath apna, humney utha rha hai koi

janey usko mujh mein kya aaya hai nazar, ke yun
ker ke roshn raho ko, zindgi dhikha rha hai koi

Be-asar thi sab DuayaaN, andero mein thi zindgi
le ke diya hathoN mein, mujhey roshni dikha rha hai koi

Gar jalta hooN mein to pahuunccti hai tapish usko
sath mere yeh rishta kaissa bna rha hai koi

Jab bhi chalta hooN raah mein, to hota hai yeh gumaan
sma ker mujh mein sath mere, cla aa rha hai koi

Khuda usko mehfuuz rhakhey, jhaaN ki sab blayooN se
jo meri bla ko apney sir liye ja rha hai koi..........

HumTum



toooo good Humtum and Meena!!!!
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Meena is back
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«Reply #42 on: August 17, 2007, 01:46:46 PM »
shukriya ji shukriya...

 :D
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