Zinda Jalne lage Hum....!!!!

by badnaam_shayar on March 07, 2007, 06:13:24 AM
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badnaam_shayar
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Ladne lagi Saansein meri.....
Ek nayi Zindagi ki tarah......

Aahat na suni maine kisi ke aane ki.....
Kisi Khamoshi ki tarah......

Bichad gaye sab Sangi Saathi.....
Aur ab akele chalne lage hai hum.....

Tumne kaha tha sirf banne ko Aatish.....
Lo ab aapke pyar me Zinda Jalne lage hai hum...!!!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2007, 06:25:26 AM »
well said... gaurav
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2007, 06:29:40 AM »
Thnx Divya....

Likh raha hu kuch Lafz.....
Jo kabhi hamari Yaad banenge.....

Hum toh na rahenge sang tumhare Sanam......
Yeh Lafz Sada tumhare Dilon me rahenge......

Khusnuma hoga Din....
Aur wahi raat ki Chandani me hum phir ek baar milenge.....

Teri rooh ko na hoga Ilm bhi kabhi......
Kuch iss tarah tujhse hum aakhiri baar gale lagenge......

Na ro padna bas tum hume jaane dena.....
Warna kayi Manzar meri Badnaami me jal padenge.....!!!!!!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2007, 07:00:47 AM »
again well said... gaurav...
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ANKUR_CRAZY
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«Reply #4 on: March 07, 2007, 07:06:28 AM »
kya baat hai gaurav bhai maja aa gaya
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shrddha
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«Reply #5 on: March 09, 2007, 05:11:45 AM »
lafz kaha kisi ki  koi yaad dila paate hai
yaadon min kahan zindgi bita paate hai
wo bhool jaaye mujhe dua yahi karna
ashq tezaab hai saaso.N ko jala jaate hain
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2007, 05:17:02 AM »
Quote from: "shrddha"
lafz kaha kisi ki  koi yaad dila paate hai
yaadon min kahan zindgi bita paate hai
wo bhool jaaye mujhe dua yahi karna
ashq tezaab hai saaso.N ko jala jaate hain


Ashiyane Jal Chuke mere.....
Ke Wajood bhi Raakh ho gaya......

Karte rahe hum sirf Mohabbat tujhse......
Aakhir me mera AKS bhi mitti me khaak ho gaya......

Lafz hai yeh Dil-O-Chain ke......
Jinse aaj murda Dil betaab ho gaya......

Jal rahe hai Aatish'O ke Seene.....
Tabhi mera yeh Dil Badnaam ho gaya.....!!!!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: March 09, 2007, 08:21:08 AM »
Bahut khoob Gaurav & shardha...

Pyar mein badnaami na tho
pyar ka karwa aage nahi badta hai..

chaht ho sabhi ke dil mein hoti hai.
Par tahe Dil se koun yahna koi kisi ko pyar karta hai...

takaluf meri ki main sirf unki aawaz ke liye betaab ho utti hun
par woh tho mujhe ak baar yaad talak nahi karta hai.
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angel4u
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2007, 06:22:54 PM »
Bahut achhe gaurav shraddha and deepika..
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #9 on: March 10, 2007, 10:02:59 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Ladne lagi Saansein meri.....
Ek nayi Zindagi ki tarah......

Aahat na suni maine kisi ke aane ki.....
Kisi Khamoshi ki tarah......

Bichad gaye sab Sangi Saathi.....
Aur ab akele chalne lage hai hum.....

Tumne kaha tha sirf banne ko Aatish.....
Lo ab aapke pyar me Zinda Jalne lage hai hum...!!!!


Wah kya baat hai...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bahut Khoooooooob GAURAV BHAI..... bahut khooooob......!!!!!!!!
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jayaa
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2007, 04:49:27 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Ladne lagi Saansein meri.....
Ek nayi Zindagi ki tarah......

Aahat na suni maine kisi ke aane ki.....
Kisi Khamoshi ki tarah......

Bichad gaye sab Sangi Saathi.....
Aur ab akele chalne lage hai hum.....

Tumne kaha tha sirf banne ko Aatish.....
Lo ab aapke pyar me Zinda Jalne lage hai hum...!!!!


BAHUT KHUB. I JUST LOVE THESE LINES .SPL ......U CANT KILL ME ..I M ALREADY DEAD. TOO GD MAN.
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2007, 11:14:57 AM »
Thnx a lot Vikas and Jaya Usual Smile
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paani
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2007, 04:30:33 AM »
o nice badnaam
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2007, 04:21:59 PM »
wah Badnaam shayar ji, bahoot hi acha laikh rahehai app..

Good lines sharddha, Las line bahoot hi achi lagi... ""Ansoo tejab hai sanson ko jala jaate hai""" too good.

Good one deepika...

payar mai payaar kam, dard jayaada naseeb ayya hai
sochati hu ajj tanhaai main, kaya kho kar kaya paya hai
chand yaandon ka jhola, anssoo ka samunder lahraya hai
ek pal ki thi khushi  jaise, umarbhar ka gum hath ayya hai
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #14 on: March 15, 2007, 05:31:09 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Quote from: "shrddha"
lafz kaha kisi ki  koi yaad dila paate hai
yaadon min kahan zindgi bita paate hai
wo bhool jaaye mujhe dua yahi karna
ashq tezaab hai saaso.N ko jala jaate hain


Ashiyane Jal Chuke mere.....
Ke Wajood bhi Raakh ho gaya......

Karte rahe hum sirf Mohabbat tujhse......
Aakhir me mera AKS bhi mitti me khaak ho gaya......

Lafz hai yeh Dil-O-Chain ke......
Jinse aaj murda Dil betaab ho gaya......

Jal rahe hai Aatish'O ke Seene.....
Tabhi mera yeh Dil Badnaam ho gaya.....!!!!!


bahut achha likha hai aapne.......BD...........
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