Zinda rehne de!

by salma786 on May 05, 2009, 05:46:36 AM
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Bahoot jaagi tere intezar me,
Ab mujhe thoda sone de,
Sine me dard ko bahoot dabaya,
Ab khul ke muhjhe tu rone de,

Bahoot rahi hu andhero me khoyi,
Ab ujalo ki nagri me rehne de,
Teri yadon ko meeta chuki hu,
Ab mujhe chain se jeene de,

Bedio ne mujhe ab tak tha jakda,
Tod ke bandhan jeene de
Pyaas se mai bahoot hu tadpi,
Ab barish ki boondo ko pee ne de,

Hasti ko apne tukdo me paya,
Tute hisse ko ab sametne de,
Ab tak tha khud ko hi mara,
Mujhe tu ZINDA rehne de!
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2009, 05:51:30 AM »
Wah Wah Wah!! Salma, bahut Bahut Khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut acha likha hai aapne..
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2009, 05:55:38 AM »
wah kya baat hai Salma.. bahoot bakoobi tume dard ko bayan kiya hai..
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2009, 07:03:05 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on May 05, 2009, 05:51:30 AM
Wah Wah Wah!! Salma, bahut Bahut Khoob.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut acha likha hai aapne..
Shukriya Khwaish ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2009, 07:47:05 AM »
It's something straight from the heart.
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2009, 09:43:19 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on May 05, 2009, 05:55:38 AM
wah kya baat hai Salma.. bahoot bakoobi tume dard ko bayan kiya hai..

Shukirya Dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2009, 10:06:12 AM »
Nice One Salma,.
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2009, 10:22:15 AM »
Quote from: MHussain on May 05, 2009, 07:47:05 AM
It's something straight from the heart.

Thanks Hussain ji...
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2009, 10:32:52 AM »
Wah! Salma Ji Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aap Ne
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2009, 10:35:21 AM »
Quote from: salma786 on May 05, 2009, 05:46:36 AM
Bahoot jaagi tere intezar me,
Ab mujhe thoda sone de,
Sine me dard ko bahoot dabaya,
Ab khul ke muhjhe tu rone de,

Bahoot rahi hu andhero me khoyi,
Ab ujalo ki nagri me rehne de,
Teri yadon ko meeta chuki hu,
Ab mujhe chain se jeene de,

Bedio ne mujhe ab tak tha jakda,
Tod ke bandhan jeene de
Pyaas se mai bahoot hu tadpi,
Ab barish ki boondo ko pee ne de,

Hasti ko apne tukdo me paya,
Tute hisse ko ab sametne de,
Ab tak tha khud ko hi mara,
Mujhe tu ZINDA rehne de!




too good Salma ji Applause Applause Applause
bahut accha laga aapka yeh kalaam...
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2009, 10:46:27 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on May 05, 2009, 10:06:12 AM
Nice One Salma,.

Thanks!
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2009, 12:08:56 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on May 05, 2009, 05:46:36 AM
Bahoot jaagi tere intezar me,
Ab mujhe thoda sone de,
Sine me dard ko bahoot dabaya,
Ab khul ke muhjhe tu rone de,

Bahoot rahi hu andhero me khoyi,
Ab ujalo ki nagri me rehne de,
Teri yadon ko meeta chuki hu,
Ab mujhe chain se jeene de,

Bedio ne mujhe ab tak tha jakda,
Tod ke bandhan jeene de
Pyaas se mai bahoot hu tadpi,
Ab barish ki boondo ko pee ne de,

Hasti ko apne tukdo me paya,
Tute hisse ko ab sametne de,
Ab tak tha khud ko hi mara,
Mujhe tu ZINDA rehne de!


Bohot Khoob Salma
 
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2009, 12:33:27 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
wah salma bohat khoob likha hai dear.. Winking
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2009, 01:59:11 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 05, 2009, 10:32:52 AM
Wah! Salma Ji Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Aap Ne

Shukriya Rajesh ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2009, 02:02:19 PM »
Quote from: diya786 on May 05, 2009, 10:35:21 AM
too good Salma ji Applause Applause Applause
bahut accha laga aapka yeh kalaam...

Thanks lot diya ji!
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