Zinda rehne de!

by salma786 on May 05, 2009, 05:46:36 AM
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angel4u
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2009, 04:27:01 PM »
Bahut achha likha hia Salma.
Keep it up.. Applause
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2009, 04:28:53 PM »
Quote from: salma786 on May 05, 2009, 05:46:36 AM
Bahoot jaagi tere intezar me,
Ab mujhe thoda sone de,
Sine me dard ko bahoot dabaya,
Ab khul ke muhjhe tu rone de,

Bahoot rahi hu andhero me khoyi,
Ab ujalo ki nagri me rehne de,
Teri yadon ko meeta chuki hu,
Ab mujhe chain se jeene de,

Bedio ne mujhe ab tak tha jakda,
Tod ke bandhan jeene de
Pyaas se mai bahoot hu tadpi,
Ab barish ki boondo ko pee ne de,

Hasti ko apne tukdo me paya,
Tute hisse ko ab sametne de,
Ab tak tha khud ko hi mara,
Mujhe tu ZINDA rehne de!




Tooo Goood Salma!!! ek ek line dil se nikali awaz lagi... bahoot khoob!!
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salma786
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«Reply #17 on: May 06, 2009, 08:47:30 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on May 05, 2009, 12:08:56 PM
Bohot Khoob Salma
 

Shukriya  Talat sis Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #18 on: May 12, 2009, 04:32:15 AM »
Quote from: honeyrose on May 05, 2009, 12:33:27 PM
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wah salma bohat khoob likha hai dear.. Winking

Thanks Jaya sis Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #19 on: May 12, 2009, 04:34:45 AM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 05, 2009, 04:27:01 PM
Bahut achha likha hia Salma.
Keep it up.. Applause

Thanks Sis Usual Smile
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2009, 05:13:49 AM »
very very nice one salma ji,bahut acha likha aapne.
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salma786
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«Reply #21 on: May 29, 2009, 08:18:21 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on May 05, 2009, 04:28:53 PM
Tooo Goood Salma!!! ek ek line dil se nikali awaz lagi... bahoot khoob!!

Shukriya Pooja sis Usual Smile
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salma786
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«Reply #22 on: May 29, 2009, 08:19:36 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2009, 05:13:49 AM
very very nice one salma ji,bahut acha likha aapne.
Thanks Madhu ji!
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pankshivam
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«Reply #23 on: October 28, 2009, 10:28:01 AM »
Bahoot Khoob Likha Salmji
Really Aapki Bahot Yaad Aa rahi hai...


Tere dard ka ehsas aaj meri aankho se bahne de...
Dil ki dastaan aaj in tanhayiyon ko kahne de...

Teri ek yaad ne de diya dard ka sehra mujhe...
Sisakati hain jo dhadkane aaj meri,
Tu bhi khamosh rah unhe bhi chup rahne de...

~Pank~
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«Reply #24 on: October 30, 2009, 05:52:13 AM »
Bohat Achche Pank Ji,.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #25 on: October 30, 2009, 05:59:09 AM »
Bahut bahut khoob Pank ji,very touching lines.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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pankshivam
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«Reply #26 on: October 30, 2009, 12:27:29 PM »
Thanks Azeem Bhai
Thanks Madhu ji
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MHussain
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«Reply #27 on: July 29, 2010, 09:40:50 PM »
Reading once again, impressive work, indeed.
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