~Zindagi bhar khudko zinda dikhata raha~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 06, 2010, 07:11:04 AM
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Mohobat ka bharam main palta raha,
Ek ajnabi se main dil lagata raha..

Chand akela kahan;taare hai saath uske,
Main toh apni parchayi tak ko khojta raha..

Aur bhi honge jinke dil hogaye honge ‘Khamosh’,
Bas yehi keh;apne apko dilasa dilata raha..

Koi na mila batne ko ghum; kalam thamli maine,
Lavzon se apne jazbaton ki ek tasveer banata raha..

Zamana badnaam kardega usse; yehi darr tha mann main,
Umr bhar bewaffai ka ilzam main khud uthata raha..

Jinhe na chorra tanha kabhi bhi umr bhar maine,
Woh mere janaze main tak shamil na hua,
Sirf shayar hi nahin ek acha kalakar bhi hai ‘Khamosh’,
Zindagi bhar khud ko zinda dikhata raha..

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2010, 08:20:00 AM »
Rahim Bhai.. Dard Ko Lafzon me utaarne me Maharath Haasil aapko.. ek Bahut hi Lajawab Peshkash hai aapki.. Aapme Yeh Khoobi hai ki aap Jo Mehsoos karte hain.. use kaagaz Par Bikher dete hain.. Aur Yehi Sucche Shayar ki Pehachan hai.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen is Rachna ke liye..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2010, 08:22:04 AM »
Dost shukriya..Ap ka shukriya kay inn lavzon main chipe ehsaason ko ap samaj lete hai..Is'se badkar kya chahiye..!
Thanks alot for everything..!
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2010, 08:25:32 AM »
Waah Waah Waah Waah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kya baat hai Rahim Bro... Aisa laga Mere Dil ka dard tumne apne Lafzo mea likh diya

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob !
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2010, 08:43:52 AM »
Oye hoye apne kiya baat kar di..
Allah na kare jis dard kay saath yeh likha hai, woh kabhi apke paas bhi aye..
Bahaut bahaut shukriya di..!
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