~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

by pankshivam on January 30, 2009, 11:37:29 AM

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pankshivam

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Aankho ki sadaye asko se baya hogi,
Teri har yaad jab is dil se juda hogi...

Rakh lunga tujhe dil me chipa kar zamane se,
Dil ke har kone me zakhmo ki dasta hogi..

Khush rehna dur mujhse meri yaado ko bhula kar,
Mai bhi jee lunga tere baigair, bs zindagi gumshuda hogi....

~Pank~


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2009, 06:59:26 PM »

As always ek behtareen peshkash Shivam

Bheegi aakhe utra chera bikhri hui zulfe
Khuda jane unki Ghayel se, kya baat hui hogi

-SG-


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King_Khan

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2009, 07:31:45 PM »

very very nice shiva
very very nice ghayal


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pankshivam

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2009, 08:36:30 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 30, 2009, 06:59:26 PM

As always ek behtareen peshkash Shivam

Bheegi aakhe utra chera bikhri hui zulfe
Khuda jane unki Ghayel se, kya baat hui hogi

-SG-

Shukriya Ghayal Sahab

Quote from: King_Khan on January 30, 2009, 07:31:45 PM

very very nice shiva
very very nice ghayal

Thanks Khan Bhai


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2009, 01:50:32 AM »

Bahut umda peshkash hai Shivam Ji.
Bas likhte rahiye.


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pankshivam

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2009, 09:40:59 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 31, 2009, 01:50:32 AM

Bahut umda peshkash hai Shivam Ji.
Bas likhte rahiye.

Shukriya Rajesh ji


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pankshivam

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2009, 09:43:06 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on January 31, 2009, 08:31:58 AM

Bohat Khoob Shivam Sahab Khas Kar Last Wali Line Kamaal Hai
Keep It Up.

Teri Khsuhiyon Ki Khatir.e.Jaaneman Hum Kuch Bhi Kar Jaayenge
Humara Kya Hai,Do Pal Yaad Mei Aur Do Intazaar Mein Bita Lenge

Shukriya Shihab Sahab
Bahoot Pyara Likha hai Aapne


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k.shael

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Re: ~Zindagi Gumshuda Hogi~

«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 09:50:10 AM »

Bahut Aacha likha hai Pank Ji,

Teri har yaad aab mujhse juda ho gayi,
aankhon me paani aur hothon pe musjkaan apni ada ho gayi,

Tu Jab se gaya hai zindagi sajaa ho gayi,
Subah se chain aur raat se neend khafa ho gayi,

Teri khushi hi meri zindagi ki raja ho gayi,
Tujhe to mil gaya pyaar apna aur apni mohabbat mitti me mil gayi,

Shally.