~~"ZINDAGI KA BIKHRA AAINA"~~

by k.shael on January 29, 2009, 09:37:31 AM
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2009, 09:38:17 AM »
Kuch u toot kar bikhra zindagi ka aaina ki tukde ho gaye hazaar,
Na jod paaye unn tukdo ko na kar paaye daman me shamil,

Beshumaar nikle aankhon se aansoo unki yaad me,
Par na gira paaye unn aansoo ko na rakh paaye aankhon me  bana ke sahil,

Apni hi aankhon se dekhte rahe apni barbaadi ka manzar,
Khud hi laga di aag apne aashiyane ko ek uss bewafa ki khushi ke khatir,

Kuch u becha apni khudari ko ki khuda bhi hairaan ho gaya,
Jo bewafa ka naam de raha tha yaar mera wo bhi dekh ke wafa meri pareshaan
ho gaya…

Shally.

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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2009, 09:42:17 AM »


Bahoth Acha hai shally likhte raho yunhi Tumhari shayari din ba din Kashish paida ho rahi aur wazan bhi !! aise hi likhte raho !!Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2009, 09:47:11 AM »
Bohat khoob shally...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tera dard kitna haseen hain
Meri khushiya lage hain phiki

Hasti hui to bohat dekhi hain Ghayel
Kisi roti hui aakho me itni khushi nahi dekhi

                         -SG-
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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2009, 09:58:17 AM »
Waah, Waah, Kya Baat Hai,.
Shally Sister, Nice One,
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

And NIce One Sajid Bhaiy,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2009, 11:18:27 AM »
sach mein kamaal likha hai shally dear
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
maaf karna main kuch reply nahin likh sakti
baad mein koshish karongi inshallah



aur Sajid sahab aapne bhi khoob likha hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2009, 11:38:25 AM »
Bahoth Acha hai shally likhte raho yunhi Tumhari shayari din ba din Kashish paida ho rahi aur wazan bhi !! aise hi likhte raho !!Allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi


Shukriya Qadeer ji,

Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye,

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2009, 11:39:15 AM »
Bohat khoob shally...... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tere dard kitna haseen hain
Meri khushiya lage hain phiki

Hasti hui to bohat dekhi hain Ghayel
Kisi roti hui aakho me itni khushi nahi dekhi

                         -SG-



Shukriya Sajid Aur bahut khoob likha aapne bhi,

Shally.
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2009, 11:40:54 AM »
Waah, Waah, Kya Baat Hai,.
Shally Sister, Nice One,
Yunhi Likhte Raho,.

And NIce One Sajid Bhaiy,.

Shukriya Azeem,

Sarahne ke liye...

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2009, 11:41:43 AM »
sach mein kamaal likha hai shally dear
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
maaf karna main kuch reply nahin likh sakti
baad mein koshish karongi inshallah



aur Sajid sahab aapne bhi khoob likha hai Applause Applause Applause


Shukriya Diya Sis,

& don't say sorry it's ok, i understand.

Shally
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«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2009, 10:14:10 AM »
bahut khoob shally ji.well written.
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2009, 11:12:06 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2009, 11:24:30 AM »
Kuch u toot kar bikhra zindagi ka aaina ki tukde ho gaye hazaar,
Na jod paaye unn tukdo ko na kar paaye daman me shamil,

Beshumaar nikle aankhon se aansoo unki yaad me,
Par na gira paaye unn aansoo ko na rakh paaye aankhon me  bana ke sahil,

Apni hi aankhon se dekhte rahe apni barbaadi ka manzar,
Khud hi laga di aag apne aashiyane ko ek uss bewafa ki khushi ke khatir,

Kuch u becha apni khudari ko ki khuda bhi hairaan ho gaya,
Jo bewafa ka naam de raha tha yaar mera wo bhi dekh ke wafa meri pareshaan ho gaya…

Shally.
Applause Clapping Smiley  The poet's pinning for her lost love has been very effectively sketched. The use of 'sahil' for the 'ocean' of tears in her eyes is vividly unique in its effect as well as approach.
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«Reply #13 on: January 30, 2009, 11:25:43 AM »
Bohat khoob shally dear... Applause




Zindagi ke bikhre aaina aisa toota
Mere duniya mein andhera aise loota

Kisi dosh de hum jab meri duniya hi khali kitab bane
Mere duniya mein joh heera tha aise toota

Ke hosh aane pe kudh ko leharon ke beech paya
Zindagi ke bikare aaina kabhi humse judh na paya....
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«Reply #14 on: January 31, 2009, 05:11:05 AM »
very nice lines shally.....bahut khoob.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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