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Ae Zindagi Tu Kabhi Raas Na Aayee
Yun To Har Shaam Intezaar Mein Nikli
Par Umeedein Kabhi Hamaare paas Na Aayee
Saawan Kee Ghataayein Guzarti Raheen
Jo Pyaas Bujhaaye Aisi Barsaat Na Aayee
Baar Baar Nayee Chot Padee Zakhmon Par
Par Zakhm Sukhaane Kee Koi Baat Na Aayee
Dikhe Meri Aankhon Ko Bhi Aisa Manzar
Deewali Kee Vo Ek Roshan Raat Na Aayee
Zindagi Aur Maut Ka Khel Chalta Raha
Kafan Odey Maut Kee Saugaat Na Aayee..
Ae Zindagi Tu kabhi Raas Na Aayee
Yun To Har Shaam Intezaar Mein Nikli
Par Umeedein Kabhi Hamaare paas Naa Aayee[/b]
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2012, 01:20:21 PM » |
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Shukriyaa qalbjii...bahut bahut...  |
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2012, 01:26:30 PM » |
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Dolly bahut sunder poem dil ko chhoo gayee nape tule andaaz men bahut kuchh bayaan kar diyaa khush rahiyegaa
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2012, 01:33:08 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2012, 01:35:52 PM » |
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Dolly bahut sunder poem dil ko chhoo gayee nape tule andaaz men bahut kuchh bayaan kar diyaa khush rahiyegaa
Dolly bahut sunder poem dil ko chhoo gayee nape tule andaaz men bahut kuchh bayaan kar diyaa khush rahiyegaa
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2012, 01:44:19 PM » |
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waah Maate--
zindgi topic pr dard bhara peshkash
bht bht khoobsurti se alfaaz die hain kalaam ko
ehsaas bht khoob h
daad aur mubarakvaad kubul karen
bas kaagaz pr hi zindgi ka aisa roop ho yhi dua h--
be happy always
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2012, 03:31:18 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2012, 04:04:00 PM » |
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aah aah nikal rahi hai. Itna dard.. Har ashaar kuch bayaan kar raha hai. Sacchaai se ekdam rubaroo.n . Bahut sanjeedgi bhari is creation ka javaab nahi.. Duaayen dil se aapke liye.. Likhte rahiye.. Bas. Yahi kahunga mai aapse dolly jee.
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2012, 06:47:04 PM » |
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bahut hi khoobsurat
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«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2012, 06:57:12 PM » |
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bahut khoob likhaa hai......! dolly mere comments ek genneral note hain. tumhaare kalaam se koi lena dena nahin inka. just dont mind.. you are nice dear |
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«Reply #13 on: April 24, 2012, 07:50:27 PM » |
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Bahut achha likha hai Dolly Jee aapne. Khuda aapki saari pareshaniya.n dur kare.
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«Reply #14 on: April 25, 2012, 05:07:37 AM » |
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waah Maate--
zindgi topic pr dard bhara peshkash
bht bht khoobsurti se alfaaz die hain kalaam ko
ehsaas bht khoob h
daad aur mubarakvaad kubul karen
bas kaagaz pr hi zindgi ka aisa roop ho yhi dua h--
be happy always
..thanku thanku shishya jiiii.... ..hmm...u too kp smiling... |
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