Zindagi ki is udhed bun ko SHARBAT kehte haiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on October 30, 2012, 01:56:18 PM
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Eh dil bataa ki kyuN tu aaj itna udaas hai, vo kaun hai vo kiski yaad jo tere aas-paas hai,, tu yuNhi aaj gumm gaya jo khud me kahiN, tere khayaalon me hai jo vo kiska ehsaash hai,, ye teri palken jo soookh gayiN haiN, ab to bata inhe kiski pyaas hai,, mohabbat ki yahaaN nahi hoti koi manjil, ishq to khud ek talaash hai....




kya pata, kya pasand aur kise nafrat kehte haiN,
jab v kehte haiN hum, sirf mohabbaat kehte haiN.

Kya pata, kahaaN dozakh*, kise jannat kehte haiN,
Maut pe jahaaN jaye insaaN use turbat** kehte hain..

*narq, Hell. **grave, kabra.

cheeni,pani,rang,namak to kabhi kuch aur glass,
Zindagi ki is udhed bun ko sharbat kehte haiN...

jante to hain mujhe v kayi log is shehar me, par,
jo paya nahi maine kabhi use sohrat kehte haiN..

maar diya humne bhi saare khayaaloN ko apne,
kisi ne tha diya bata, ise hi raahat kehte haiN

dard, dard, dard, dard, dard, dard dard aur dard,
shayad in sab ko ek lafz me mohabbat kehte hain.

Dard, zakhm, ruswaaii, ashq aur ghum mile jisme,
Husn ki aisi dosti ko hum buri sohbat kehte haiN.

"Taish" me jab bhi kuch kehta huN maiN yaaroN,
Jaane kyuN duniya wale use huzzat kehte haiN...


28/10/12
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2012, 02:21:58 PM »
bahut hee behatreen peshkash jnaab hamaaree dheron daad qubool farmaayen
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2012, 04:01:51 PM »
just awesome creation is rachna ke liye aapko ek rau dete hai ...............bahut hi lajawab creation taish sahbh...... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2012, 04:03:05 PM »
bahut bahut badiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2012, 08:09:06 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 31, 2012, 12:51:46 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: October 31, 2012, 01:53:23 AM »
kya baat hai taish jee bohut umda ghazal kahi hai, aur ek baat kehna chahunga jo k maine aap ki ghazlon meN notice ki hai... aur wo nai soch aur kuch alag hatkar sochne ka tariqa jaise k ye shair

cheeni,pani,rang,namak to kabhi kuch aur glass,

 Zindagi ki is udhed bun ko sharbat kehte haiN...



zindagi ko sharbat ki tarha kehna bilkul naya aur apne aap men bilkul alag khayal hai, jo ki mujhe bohut pasand aaya... yahi baat aapko aur logoN se munfarid karti hai.. ise hamesha qayam rakhyega...... aur umda ghazal ke liye dherron daaad qubool kijiye......
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«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 02:53:52 AM »
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bahut hi lajawab peshkash
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«Reply #8 on: October 31, 2012, 12:57:25 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on October 30, 2012, 02:21:58 PM
bahut hee behatreen peshkash jnaab hamaaree dheron daad qubool farmaayen

shukriya sir ji, bas yuNhi hum adnoN par apni kripa drishti kaayam rakheN...
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«Reply #9 on: October 31, 2012, 01:51:47 PM »
Quote from: soudagar on October 30, 2012, 04:01:51 PM
just awesome creation is rachna ke liye aapko ek rau dete hai ...............bahut hi lajawab creation taish sahbh...... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

yippe... soudagar sahab,is rau ke liye aur ise pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya bas yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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«Reply #10 on: October 31, 2012, 02:33:39 PM »
bohat khoob ,.....bohat c daad,...........
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«Reply #11 on: November 01, 2012, 01:16:44 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on October 30, 2012, 04:03:05 PM
bahut bahut badiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Suman ji ek baar fir se humari choti si bazm me shirkat karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas umeed rahegi ki ye rishta yuNhi bana rahe...
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«Reply #12 on: November 01, 2012, 02:47:15 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on October 30, 2012, 08:09:06 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Hriday ji, Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2012, 03:56:55 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on October 31, 2012, 12:51:46 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad


Bahukhandi sahab, aapki daad humare sar aankhoN pe, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: November 02, 2012, 01:06:36 AM »
Quote from: Aarish on October 31, 2012, 01:53:23 AM
kya baat hai taish jee bohut umda ghazal kahi hai, aur ek baat kehna chahunga jo k maine aap ki ghazlon meN notice ki hai... aur wo nai soch aur kuch alag hatkar sochne ka tariqa jaise k ye shair

cheeni,pani,rang,namak to kabhi kuch aur glass,

 Zindagi ki is udhed bun ko sharbat kehte haiN...



zindagi ko sharbat ki tarha kehna bilkul naya aur apne aap men bilkul alag khayal hai, jo ki mujhe bohut pasand aaya... yahi baat aapko aur logoN se munfarid karti hai.. ise hamesha qayam rakhyega...... aur umda ghazal ke liye dherron daaad qubool kijiye......
 Applause Applause Applause

aarish sahab ko mera aadaab,

ab kya kahuN ki aapka reply dekh kar kitni khushi hui, haaN kosish to meri kamobesh yahi rehti hai ki uch na kuch naya khayal laa sakuN, aur agar aap logoN ka saath yuNhi bana rahe to shayad safal bhi ho jaauN, bas yuNhi apni khubsurat rai se hume nawaazte rahiye...
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