Zindagi ki raah mein

by just_asim on December 21, 2007, 10:23:52 AM
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Zindagi ki raah mein phool to bahut khile the par kaantein chune maine
Mefilon me shaamil to hua par humesha tanhayee ka dard paya maine
Zindagi se kya gila karte apno se hi jab begane hone ka ehsaas paya maine
Tumhare dillagi ko pyar samjh ke sab kuch khoya hai maine
Yeh kahan ka insaaf hai pyar karne ki saza sirf payi maine
Tumhare bina in aansuon aur tanhayee ke siva shayad hi kuch paya maine
Mohabbat karne ka dard mere hisse mein hi kyon paya maine
Kaise bharega ab ye zakhm jo tuj bewafaa se dil laga ke paya maine
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2007, 10:28:21 AM »
wah likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2007, 06:42:25 PM »
Kindly mention NM if its not your own work!
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2007, 03:41:38 AM »
very nice ji,

e dost paya to tune wo sab jo ishwar ne tughe diya,
par yeh baat alag hai ki tu usko mahsus na kar saka,
jindagi nai diya to tughe bahut,
par tu usko sahi mayane mai use na kar saka.

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«Reply #4 on: December 25, 2007, 01:06:12 PM »
kya bbat hai duniya mai derd kkm
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2011, 06:30:17 AM »
Kindly mention NM if its not your own work!

Sorry to say..it's my own work and got the copyrights of the work from Indian Copyright act for authors.
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2011, 06:31:42 AM »
Others Thanks for your valuable comments!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2011, 07:17:21 AM »
bht mast likha hai asim ji aapne........
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 03:34:24 AM »
bht mast likha hai asim ji aapne........

thank you ..very much for reading and appreciating....
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2011, 05:45:13 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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