Zindagi ki shaam dhal rahi hai

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judha hokar tumse jism mein koi kami si khal rahi hai   
              doob gaya suraj zindagi ki shaam dhal rahi hai ,,,,

bohut samjhaya  ke nahin karna gham ae dil mere tum
              tukdon se nikal kar dadhkan  magar bikhar rahi hai ,,,,

shayad woh khush hain dhoor ja kar mujhse itne kya kahun
              hawaa unki taraf se mahki hui si chal rahi hai ,,,,

utar kar dekha hai samundhar mein magar hua na koi asar
              bhuj na payegi jo woh aag seene mein jal rahi hai ,,,,

na jaane kyun kaha tha tumne main hoon tumhari saansein
              kya karun bin tumhare jeene ki ab aadat na rahi hai ,,,,

kalm mein syahi nahin aansoo hon bharey hue jaise
              parh na paye siwaa mere dard aisa likh rahi hai ,,,,
 
judha hokar tumse jism mein koi kami si khal rahi hai   
              doob gaya suraj zindagi ki shaam dhal rahi hai ,,,,




             
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«Reply #1 on: October 30, 2013, 12:39:41 PM »
waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: October 30, 2013, 12:59:06 PM »

kalm mein syahi nahin aansoo hon bharey hue jaise
              parh na paye siwaa mere dard aisa likh rahi hai ,,,,


Waah .... kya khayaal hai .... bahaut khoob Saahill ji ..
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2013, 01:07:48 PM »
thx saini sir ji
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2013, 01:26:38 PM »
bahut khoob Saahill Ji...
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2013, 02:28:25 PM »
thx zarra ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2013, 04:19:18 PM »
THX BISHWAJ JI
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2013, 04:23:27 PM »
bahot khoooooob......
shayad woh khush hain dhoor ja kar mujhse itne kya kahun
hawaa unki taraf se mahki hui si chal rahi hai ,,,,

na jaane kyun kaha tha tumne main hoon tumhari saansein
kya karun bin tumhare jeene ki ab aadat na rahi hai ,,,,

kalm mein syahi nahin aansoo hon bharey hue jaise
parh na paye siwaa mere dard aisa likh rahi hai ,,,,
 
judha hokar tumse jism mein koi kami si khal rahi hai   
doob gaya suraj zindagi ki shaam dhal rahi hai ,,,,
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2013, 04:34:58 PM »
Quote from: saahill on October 30, 2013, 12:27:40 PM
judha hokar tumse jism mein koi kami si khal rahi hai   
              doob gaya suraj zindagi ki shaam dhal rahi hai ,,,,

bohut samjhaya  ke nahin karna gham ae dil mere tum
              tukdon se nikal kar dadhkan  magar bikhar rahi hai ,,,,

shayad woh khush hain dhoor ja kar mujhse itne kya kahun
              hawaa unki taraf se mahki hui si chal rahi hai ,,,,

utar kar dekha hai samundhar mein magar hua na koi asar
              bhuj na payegi jo woh aag seene mein jal rahi hai ,,,,

na jaane kyun kaha tha tumne main hoon tumhari saansein
              kya karun bin tumhare jeene ki ab aadat na rahi hai ,,,,

kalm mein syahi nahin aansoo hon bharey hue jaise
              parh na paye siwaa mere dard aisa likh rahi hai ,,,,
 
judha hokar tumse jism mein koi kami si khal rahi hai   
              doob gaya suraj zindagi ki shaam dhal rahi hai ,,,,




             

bahot khooooooooooooooobbbbbbbbbbbbbb.................
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2013, 05:02:56 PM »
THX IQTEDAAR JI
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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2013, 05:48:22 PM »
waah bohat hee khoob saahil ji,...........bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2013, 06:40:16 PM »
thx sidra ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2013, 08:26:47 PM »
Waaaaah... kya baat hai... bahut bahut khooooooob...daaaad...
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2013, 08:56:45 PM »
thx laiba ji
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2013, 08:58:05 PM »
thx dear
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