Zindagi ko zindagi..

by nashwani on May 21, 2013, 01:07:06 AM
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Apni khushiyon me gar na kar sako shaamil to kya
Apne kuchh ghamo.N ki hi bahaar karna

Na de sako hame koi madhosh chandni raat to kya
Kisi andheri amawasya ki raat se hi nihaal karna

Na ban sako mere aangan ka koi haseen phool to kya
Apni raaho.N ke char kaante hi meherbaan karna

Baras na sake suhaani barish banke to kya
Hamari zindagi me apne aansuo.N ki hi fuhaar karna

Na hai gar tera mera zindagi bhar ka rishta to kya
Iss zindagi ko zindagi dene ke liye hi
Kuchh haseen lamho.N ko meri yado.N me shumaar karna..!!! Ñ
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2013, 01:15:46 AM »
Simply beautiful ji & the best part of your writing is positivity in every sense. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2013, 01:37:23 AM »
Thanks Bhupinder jee 4 liking and analysing the poem so well..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2013, 02:00:28 AM »
Apni khushiyon me gar na kar sako shaamil to kya
Apne kuchh ghamo.N ki hi bahaar karna

Na de sako hame koi madhosh chandni raat to kya
Kisi andheri amawasya ki raat se hi nihaal karna

Na ban sako mere aangan ka koi haseen phool to kya
Apni raaho.N ke char kaante hi meherbaan karna

Baras na sake suhaani barish banke to kya
Hamari zindagi me apne aansuo.N ki hi fuhaar karna

Na hai gar tera mera zindagi bhar ka rishta to kya
Iss zindagi ko zindagi dene ke liye hi
Kuchh haseen lamho.N ko meri yado.N me shumaar karna..!!! Ñ
 


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nashwani
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2013, 02:11:14 AM »
Thanks adil sahab..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2013, 02:21:58 AM »
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2013, 02:36:38 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2013, 11:55:00 AM »
nice , nashwani ji.congrats.
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nashwani
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2013, 01:14:06 PM »
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Thanks ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2013, 01:15:36 PM »
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bhut khub
Dhanyaad Rajan sahab..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2013, 01:16:36 PM »
nice , nashwani ji.congrats.
Shukriya Siddiqui sir..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2013, 08:33:49 PM »
Apni khushiyon me gar na kar sako shaamil to kya
Apne kuchh ghamo.N ki hi bahaar karna

Na de sako hame koi madhosh chandni raat to kya
Kisi andheri amawasya ki raat se hi nihaal karna

Na ban sako mere aangan ka koi haseen phool to kya
Apni raaho.N ke char kaante hi meherbaan karna

Baras na sake suhaani barish banke to kya
Hamari zindagi me apne aansuo.N ki hi fuhaar karna

Na hai gar tera mera zindagi bhar ka rishta to kya
Iss zindagi ko zindagi dene ke liye hi
Kuchh haseen lamho.N ko meri yado.N me shumaar karna..!!! Ñ
 



Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jaane wale Jazbaat..

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Nashwani Ji...

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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2013, 11:02:54 PM »
bohat khoob ,.............daad,...........
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nashwani
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2013, 11:04:40 PM »
Bahut bahut dhanyawaad Khwahish sahab..happy9
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nashwani
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«Reply #14 on: May 21, 2013, 11:05:40 PM »
bohat khoob ,.............daad,...........

Dhanyawwad laaiba jee..happy9
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