Zindagi Se Baat..........

by poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:53:19 PM
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Khud se naraj hu mai zindagi,tujhse nahi hu mai khafa
Tujhe sahej kar rakh na payi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Khuda ne baksha tha mujhe pyar ka aashiyana
Apne hi aashiyane ko jala bethi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Mujhme hai khamiyaan beshumar,kyu mai tujhe dosh du
Gunahgaar teri mai hi to hu,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tujhe khubsurat banana mere hi haatho me tha
Chali thi aabad karne,barbaadi di tujhe,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tu hi tu hai meri humdum,tu hi meri sangi-saheli
Tujhko mujhe jeena hai har haal me,yahi hai tera falsfa
Kar na payi mai tujhse wafa.........
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«Reply #1 on: July 23, 2009, 09:21:12 PM »
Wah Pop ji mindblowing,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2009, 02:53:23 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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angel4u
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2009, 03:00:24 AM »
Very very nice POPZ...

Really heart touching.. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2009, 03:48:36 AM »
pop- passimistic one, good work
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2009, 05:09:00 AM »
Wah Kya baat Hai Poooja.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai Dear.. Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon me Bahut acche Dhang se Bayan kiya hai aapne.. bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Khud se Khafa Ho Ke, Khud Ko Na Ilzaam De,
Zindgi Bhi Tujhse hai, Ise Wafa Ka Na Naam De...

Bewafa to Yeh Hai, Tujhe Gamon Me Dubo Gai,
Tu Khud Zindgi Hai, Aaj Khud Ko Yeh Paigaam De...!! icon_thumleft



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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2009, 09:15:04 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:53:19 PM
Khud se naraj hu mai zindagi,tujhse nahi hu mai khafa
Tujhe sahej kar rakh na payi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Khuda ne baksha tha mujhe pyar ka aashiyana
Apne hi aashiyane ko jala bethi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Mujhme hai khamiyaan beshumar,kyu mai tujhe dosh du
Gunahgaar teri mai hi to hu,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tujhe khubsurat banana mere hi haatho me tha
Chali thi aabad karne,barbaadi di tujhe,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tu hi tu hai meri humdum,tu hi meri sangi-saheli
Tujhko mujhe jeena hai har haal me,yahi hai tera falsfa
Kar na payi mai tujhse wafa.........

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Very sentimental very nice...Bohot Khoob Pooja
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2009, 09:15:40 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 24, 2009, 05:09:00 AM
Wah Kya baat Hai Poooja.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai Dear.. Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon me Bahut acche Dhang se Bayan kiya hai aapne.. bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Khud se Khafa Ho Ke, Khud Ko Na Ilzaam De,
Zindgi Bhi Tujhse hai, Ise Wafa Ka Na Naam De...

Bewafa to Yeh Hai, Tujhe Gamon Me Dubo Gai,
Tu Khud Zindgi Hai, Aaj Khud Ko Yeh Paigaam De...!! icon_thumleft



**~** Mann **~**



Bohot Khoob Vicky...Very nice reply !
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2009, 09:19:31 AM »
Wow Mann ji,mindblowing lines,very nice.excellent icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2009, 09:48:52 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:53:19 PM
Khud se naraj hu mai zindagi,tujhse nahi hu mai khafa
Tujhe sahej kar rakh na payi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Khuda ne baksha tha mujhe pyar ka aashiyana
Apne hi aashiyane ko jala bethi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Mujhme hai khamiyaan beshumar,kyu mai tujhe dosh du
Gunahgaar teri mai hi to hu,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tujhe khubsurat banana mere hi haatho me tha
Chali thi aabad karne,barbaadi di tujhe,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tu hi tu hai meri humdum,tu hi meri sangi-saheli
Tujhko mujhe jeena hai har haal me,yahi hai tera falsfa
Kar na payi mai tujhse wafa.........

wah wah ... bahut khoob

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2009, 09:49:25 AM »
Quote from: Mann on July 24, 2009, 05:09:00 AM
Wah Kya baat Hai Poooja.. Dard Ko Bakhoobi Pesh Kiya hai Dear.. Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon me Bahut acche Dhang se Bayan kiya hai aapne.. bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


Khud se Khafa Ho Ke, Khud Ko Na Ilzaam De,
Zindgi Bhi Tujhse hai, Ise Wafa Ka Na Naam De...

Bewafa to Yeh Hai, Tujhe Gamon Me Dubo Gai,
Tu Khud Zindgi Hai, Aaj Khud Ko Yeh Paigaam De...!! icon_thumleft



**~** Mann **~**



wah Mann ji,,, wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2009, 05:46:55 PM »
Aap sabka bahut bahut bahut shukriya...... notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2009, 05:32:19 AM »
Quote from: poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:53:19 PM
Khud se naraj hu mai zindagi,tujhse nahi hu mai khafa
Tujhe sahej kar rakh na payi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Khuda ne baksha tha mujhe pyar ka aashiyana
Apne hi aashiyane ko jala bethi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Mujhme hai khamiyaan beshumar,kyu mai tujhe dosh du
Gunahgaar teri mai hi to hu,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tujhe khubsurat banana mere hi haatho me tha
Chali thi aabad karne,barbaadi di tujhe,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tu hi tu hai meri humdum,tu hi meri sangi-saheli
Tujhko mujhe jeena hai har haal me,yahi hai tera falsfa
Kar na payi mai tujhse wafa.........
bahut achche pooja dear aapne meri shayari likhne k liye kaha tha toh yeh chand lines aapke liye

dard hai dil main bahut phir bhi main ji raha tha
kadwa tha ghoont ashqon ka phir bhi main pi raha tha
yeh kasamkash zindgi kii kheench laayi hai jaane kahaan
jisko dekho wahi taage se zakhmo ko si raha tha
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2009, 06:37:38 AM »
wah wah kaya baat hai poppoetry ji... bahoot khoob
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2009, 02:00:17 PM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat Ji, Madhu Ji & Jasbir Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


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