Zindagi Se Baat..........

by poppoetry on July 23, 2009, 05:53:19 PM
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«Reply #30 on: August 05, 2009, 09:22:36 AM »
Wah kya Baat hai Pooja.. aakhir Kitna dard Bhara hai Dil Me..?? Tumhara Likha har Lafz dil Ko Chhoo gaya.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


Dard Aankhon Se Baha Ke Nahi, Mohabbat se Kam Hota Hai,
Is Baat Se Tu Shayad Waqif Nahi, Isliye Tera Yeh Dil Rota Hai....

Kabhi Aankhon se Baaten, Labon Se Ishq Mehsoos Karke Dekho,
Phir Dekho Zulfon Ki Ghataaon se Mohabbat Ka Saawan kaise Barasta Hai....

Dard-o-Gam Is dil Bhi Bahut Hai, Par Ab Ashq Aate Nahi Aankhon Me,
Kyunki Ab Meri Palkon Par Har Lamha Mohabbat Ka Darbaar Sajta Hai.....!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #31 on: August 06, 2009, 09:41:32 AM »
Dard ka to bas aise hi hai Mann ji....kabhi kabhi dard me likhna bhi accha lagta hai...aapne bahut accha likha hai...jo paigaam aapne diya hai uske liye kya kahu......sochna padega....


Mohabbat k darbaar mein khud ki mehfil sajaaye hum bhi
Aage jaane ka lekin hauslaa nahi hota

Dekhte hai mohabbat ka saawan hamein kis aur milta hai
Yha to pyar k mausam ka najaara nahi hota

Mohabbat se waqif karwaya hai tumne..to ye bhi bta do
Kyu mohabbat me galti maanne par bhi maafi ka sahara nahi hota
Kyu samajhte hai use apna,jo kabhi hamara nahi hota
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«Reply #32 on: August 06, 2009, 10:13:07 AM »
Self introspection ka sunder prayas hai aap ka.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

N ho nirash,zindagi hai aandhiyon ka silsila
Samay se guzar jayega, aaya tha jo jaljala
Mousam aur bhi aayenge,bhul sab tu ab khikhila
Khud se kya shikayat ,tu dil ko apne ab n jala.....


Khud se naraj hu mai zindagi,tujhse nahi hu mai khafa
Tujhe sahej kar rakh na payi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Khuda ne baksha tha mujhe pyar ka aashiyana
Apne hi aashiyane ko jala bethi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Mujhme hai khamiyaan beshumar,kyu mai tujhe dosh du
Gunahgaar teri mai hi to hu,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tujhe khubsurat banana mere hi haatho me tha
Chali thi aabad karne,barbaadi di tujhe,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tu hi tu hai meri humdum,tu hi meri sangi-saheli
Tujhko mujhe jeena hai har haal me,yahi hai tera falsfa
Kar na payi mai tujhse wafa.........

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«Reply #33 on: August 06, 2009, 10:29:34 AM »
Khud se Khafa Ho Ke, Khud Ko Na Ilzaam De,
Zindgi Bhi Tujhse hai, Ise Wafa Ka Na Naam De...

Bewafa to Yeh Hai, Tujhe Gamon Me Dubo Gai,
Tu Khud Zindgi Hai, Aaj Khud Ko Yeh Paigaam De...


**~** Mann **~**

 Applause Applause ApplauseBrilllliant....Bahot Hi Damdaar Hai har ek Lafzz
Aur Bahot Hi Wazan Rakhta Hai Har Ek word....

Mujhe Behad Pasand Aaya Tumhara likha huwa Mann....

__________Alam
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«Reply #34 on: August 06, 2009, 03:52:22 PM »
Self introspection ka sunder prayas hai aap ka.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

N ho nirash,zindagi hai aandhiyon ka silsila
Samay se guzar jayega, aaya tha jo jaljala
Mousam aur bhi aayenge,bhul sab tu ab khikhila
Khud se kya shikayat ,tu dil ko apne ab n jala.....


bahut hi khuuuub Anaam ji....bahut accha sandesh de rahe hai ye alfaaz
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Hai intzaar us waqt ka jab thamega dard ka ye daur
Zindagi muskurayegi,khushiyaan hogi chaaron aur
Har pal me hogi ek nayi shuraat.....
Aur hogi muskuraakar zindagi se baat......
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«Reply #35 on: August 12, 2009, 08:16:06 AM »
Khud se Khafa Ho Ke, Khud Ko Na Ilzaam De,
Zindgi Bhi Tujhse hai, Ise Wafa Ka Na Naam De...

Bewafa to Yeh Hai, Tujhe Gamon Me Dubo Gai,
Tu Khud Zindgi Hai, Aaj Khud Ko Yeh Paigaam De...


**~** Mann **~**

 Applause Applause ApplauseBrilllliant....Bahot Hi Damdaar Hai har ek Lafzz
Aur Bahot Hi Wazan Rakhta Hai Har Ek word....

Mujhe Behad Pasand Aaya Tumhara likha huwa Mann....

__________Alam


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Alam Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #36 on: August 12, 2009, 09:05:08 AM »
Dard ka to bas aise hi hai Mann ji....kabhi kabhi dard me likhna bhi accha lagta hai...aapne bahut accha likha hai...jo paigaam aapne diya hai uske liye kya kahu......sochna padega....


Mohabbat k darbaar mein khud ki mehfil sajaaye hum bhi
Aage jaane ka lekin hauslaa nahi hota

Dekhte hai mohabbat ka saawan hamein kis aur milta hai
Yha to pyar k mausam ka najaara nahi hota

Mohabbat se waqif karwaya hai tumne..to ye bhi bta do
Kyu mohabbat me galti maanne par bhi maafi ka sahara nahi hota
Kyu samajhte hai use apna,jo kabhi hamara nahi hota



Yeh Kaise Sawal Pooch Liye Pooja... Aisa laga padh Ke Ki Jaise Har Sawal Meri Zindgi se Juda hai.. Jiske Jawab Main Khud aaj tak Nahi Dhoond Paya..!! Wahi Sawal Tumne kar Liye..  sad10
Kharrrrrrrrrr..... bahut Hi Khubsoorat Likha hai tumne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



Kisi Ke Paas Manzil Hai, To Kisi Ke Paas Raah Nahi,
Mere Paas Mehboob Hai, Par Qismat Me Uska Pyaar Nahi…

Uske Liye Main Ab Bhi Ek Bewafa, Gunahgaar Hoon,
Hai Uski Chaahat Ab Aur Koi, Ab Main Uska Dildaar Nahi….

Ek Galati Anjaane Me, Mujhse Bhi Hui Thi Mohabbat Me,
Par Uski Nazar Me Main Ab Maafi Ka Bhi Haqdaar Nahi……

Aaj Uski Har Shaam Kisi Aur Ki Baahon Me Guzarti Hai,
Phir Kyun Yeh Dil, Ek Pal Bhi Use Bhoolne Ko Taiyaar Nahi…

Tere Kisi Sawal Ka Jawab, Lafzon Me Nahi De Sakta "Pooja",
Main Khud Gam-e-Jawab Hoon, Jise Likhne Ki Dardaar Nahi.....!!!




**~** Mann **~**

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«Reply #37 on: August 12, 2009, 09:44:04 AM »
kya khoob lika hai aapne....dard bhari apni daastaan...khud aur jindagi mai kash-m-kash........ Applause Applause Applause
Mai kya likhu......ye kuchh lines....

N ULAZ APNE AAP  S YU TU
N HO KHAFA KHUD SE YU TU
JINDAGI TERI OOS SE HAI  TU
N KAR GILA,KAR LE AB WAFA TU
MILTI EK BAAR,JEE LE JEE BHAR TU


Khud se naraj hu mai zindagi,tujhse nahi hu mai khafa
Tujhe sahej kar rakh na payi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Khuda ne baksha tha mujhe pyar ka aashiyana
Apne hi aashiyane ko jala bethi mai,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Mujhme hai khamiyaan beshumar,kyu mai tujhe dosh du
Gunahgaar teri mai hi to hu,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tujhe khubsurat banana mere hi haatho me tha
Chali thi aabad karne,barbaadi di tujhe,kar na payi tujhse wafa

Tu hi tu hai meri humdum,tu hi meri sangi-saheli
Tujhko mujhe jeena hai har haal me,yahi hai tera falsfa
Kar na payi mai tujhse wafa.........

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«Reply #38 on: August 13, 2009, 11:25:38 AM »

Yeh Kaise Sawal Pooch Liye Pooja... Aisa laga padh Ke Ki Jaise Har Sawal Meri Zindgi se Juda hai.. Jiske Jawab Main Khud aaj tak Nahi Dhoond Paya..!! Wahi Sawal Tumne kar Liye..  sad10
Kharrrrrrrrrr..... bahut Hi Khubsoorat Likha hai tumne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause



Kisi Ke Paas Manzil Hai, To Kisi Ke Paas Raah Nahi,
Mere Paas Mehboob Hai, Par Qismat Me Uska Pyaar Nahi…

Uske Liye Main Ab Bhi Ek Bewafa, Gunahgaar Hoon,
Hai Uski Chaahat Ab Aur Koi, Ab Main Uska Dildaar Nahi….

Ek Galati Anjaane Me, Mujhse Bhi Hui Thi Mohabbat Me,
Par Uski Nazar Me Main Ab Maafi Ka Bhi Haqdaar Nahi……

Aaj Uski Har Shaam Kisi Aur Ki Baahon Me Guzarti Hai,
Phir Kyun Yeh Dil, Ek Pal Bhi Use Bhoolne Ko Taiyaar Nahi…

Tere Kisi Sawal Ka Jawab, Lafzon Me Nahi De Sakta "Pooja",
Main Khud Gam-e-Jawab Hoon, Jise Likhne Ki Dardaar Nahi.....!!!




**~** Mann **~**


bahut dard bhare alfaaz likhe hai aapne Mann ji....


Uske dil mein tere liye pyaar nahi to wo tera mehboob kaise
Gar mehboob hai tera to uski mohabbat par shak na kar

Shaayad galat-fehamiyon k saagar me kaid hai wo
Waqt ko samajh,uske paas jaa kar usse baat kar

Teri hi jubaan se sunne ka intzaar ho hoga use
Apni galtiyon ka saamne uske ikraar kar

Mere swaalon ka jwaab nahi to na sahi
Tu khud ko na kashmakash me uljha...
Khud na yu pareshaan kar....
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«Reply #39 on: August 13, 2009, 07:08:28 PM »
wah bahoot khoob poppoetry, Mann ji, Alam ji, Anam ji and ANAAMIKA ji!!
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«Reply #40 on: August 14, 2009, 05:46:53 AM »
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #41 on: August 14, 2009, 07:46:46 AM »
kya khoob lika hai aapne....dard bhari apni daastaan...khud aur jindagi mai kash-m-kash........ Applause Applause Applause
Mai kya likhu......ye kuchh lines....

N ULAZ APNE AAP  S YU TU
N HO KHAFA KHUD SE YU TU
JINDAGI TERI OOS SE HAI  TU
N KAR GILA,KAR LE AB WAFA TU
MILTI EK BAAR,JEE LE JEE BHAR TU


bahut bahut shukriya Anaamika ji....bakhubi samjha aapne alfaazon ko

Aapne bhi bahut hi khub likha hai Applause Applause

Zindagi ko khul kar har koi jeena chahta hai
Bas kabhi kabhi wo khud me hi ulajh jaata hai
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«Reply #42 on: August 14, 2009, 07:49:30 AM »
wah bahoot khoob poppoetry, Mann ji, Alam ji, Anam ji and ANAAMIKA ji!!
Shukriya Pooja ji
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«Reply #43 on: August 14, 2009, 08:04:04 AM »
bahut dard bhare alfaaz likhe hai aapne Mann ji....


Uske dil mein tere liye pyaar nahi to wo tera mehboob kaise
Gar mehboob hai tera to uski mohabbat par shak na kar

Shaayad galat-fehamiyon k saagar me kaid hai wo
Waqt ko samajh,uske paas jaa kar usse baat kar

Teri hi jubaan se sunne ka intzaar ho hoga use
Apni galtiyon ka saamne uske ikraar kar

Mere swaalon ka jwaab nahi to na sahi
Tu khud ko na kashmakash me uljha...
Khud na yu pareshaan kar....


Wah wah Kya Baat hai Pooja.. Bahut acchi baaten Likhi hain aapne aur samjhaane ki koshish bhi ki hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


Berukhi Ke Sath Suni, Meri Dard-e-Daastan Usne,
Mera Dil Qadmo Tale Rakh Diya Sitamgiri Se Usne.....

Mere Ashqon Ko Usne, Fareb Ka Samandar Samjha,
Aur Muskura Ke Kisi Aur Ka Daaman Thaam Liya Usne.....

Maaf Karna Sahyad Uski Fitrat Me Nahi Hai Shaamil,
Zulm-o-Sitam Dhaane Ki Mujhpe, Aadat Daal Li Usne...

Ab Nazar Milaate Bhi Ek, Dar Sa Lagta hai Usse,
Kuch Aise Lamha Lamha Maanra Mujhe, Seekh Liya Usne..!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #44 on: August 14, 2009, 11:46:55 AM »
NICE ..POPP JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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